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    Hi i'm new here and just wanted 2 let ya guys knw tht i am a great writer! (well... thts wat ppl say or itz a lie) but anyways plzzzz enjoy! thx

    Chapter One
    Justin's POV

    "Ooh! I killed you by headshot!" Ryan yelled.

    I hit his shoulder, "Dude, shut up!" I hissed.

    Then, Ryan's girlfriend walked in the room. She had wavy hair that reached down to her back and grass green eyes. She was a really pretty lady.

    "Ryan, can we go? I'm gonna be late." She groaned.

    "Hold on! Just need to finish round 51 on Black Ops." He replied.

    I rolled my eyes. Ryan knew this was going to take forever to get done with round 51 on Black Ops. It's freakin zombies!!! I dropped the controler on the grounded as Ryan glared at me. He turned off the XBox and stood up holdin' his back like it broke.

    "Bye Ryan!"

    He smiled at me, "Bye!"

    He walked out of my room with his girlfriend, Christean. I'm guessing she was a model.

    Then, my phone buzzed in my jean pocket.

    I slowly pulled it out looking at the screen. It was my mom, what did she want?

    "Hello?" I paused. "Is there something going on with dad?" I groaned.

    "Hi Justin. And no! It's something... different and i need you home now!"

    I drew a breath, "Mom what do you mean?"

    "It's a problem with-" Then she got cut off by something screaming in the backround. It sounded like Jazzie. My eyes widened as the phone landed on the floor. No! This can't be happening! I dashed out of my apartment room and stuffed my bag and stuff in it and fled outside. Luckily i was on the first floor so i could get to my car more quickly. I jumped in my car and started the engine. The radio blasted as i turned it down and drove away. My heart was beatin' so loud that i swear i could hear it!

    "Mom. I'm coming." I mumbled to my self.

    Charrlote's POV

    I heard screaming from a house besides me. It sounded like someone was dieing. I took out my earplugs from listening to my IPod. I arched a plucked eyebrow and stared at the window.

    The lights went off and on. Was someone having sex?

    I laughed and jogged up on the stairs. I tapped on the door until everyone began to be silent. The door swung open as i could see a man about 40 or 30 standing in front of me.

    "Um, yes?" He said in a husky voice.

    "I heard some screaming. Is everything okay?" I asked.

    He chuckled softly, "Yeah. Everything is fine." He slammed the door on my face.

    I blinked. Wow, someone was ticked off! There was something fishy with this guy.

    i roamed to the back off the house and looked through one of the windows. There i stood on my very tippy toes watching some guy threatin' a kid. My eyes widened as i dropped to the ground. I dialed 911 as i let it ring for a while until an asian lady answered.

    "Yes hello! This is 911, what is your emergency?"

    "I'm not sure if it's true but when i was taking a walk i heard screamin' from a house by me and i realized a dad was hurting the mom or girlfriend and threating the little kid!"

    Her voice cracked, "We will be on our way, what's the address and road?"

    "Roadway rd. and 10733."

    "Alright! We'll be there!"

    She hung up as i collapsed to the ground. What was i going to do?


    Well i guess this is it already! Tell me if ya like
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    omg update!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    why does he have to be so perfect? <3

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    I hopw Jazzy's gonna be okay!!!

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    haha i will as soon as i find out how...
    Annalise loves Biebz!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Annalise Havens View Post
    haha i will as soon as i find out how...
    Update!!!read my stories when u have a chance!!! liking this story
    NANI BIEBER
    Read my stories:
    - "Stuck in detention"
    - "Teen life:I love you..but why me?"
    -"11/11/11"
    -"A new adventure with the one you fall inlove <3"
    -"Somethings happen for a reason"
    -"we found love in a hopeless place READ THIS"

    I need comments..the more the better thank you beliebers!!
    we ROCK!!!!!

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    Update!!!!
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

    current stories:
    *Puerto rican New Yorker
    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
    Just Speak ( by/with :cinderellaswag)
    Stuck in Detention!!! (By/with: Nani15 & with Belieber_Forever<3)

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