Thread: Stuck in Detention!!!

It all happened on may 2nd when my stupid chorus teacher thought I was skipping class with my friend shellby...But I wasn't I mean, she had to take the slip down to the office while I was in the restroom and while I was walking back I saw her and we started talking about Justin l.this cute guy in my class (acouple months before he became famous), long hair,honey brown eyes you could fall for.I only talked to him once cause I bumped into him and dropped my stuff.he started helping me pick up my things til this who*e went and kissed him nd took him away.but anyway he's in my chorus class and never notices me till the ms.W tells me to go to detention. "I never did ANYTHING!!!" "I wasn't born yesturday Nani I saw you,and I know you did not ask me to use the restroom!" "yes I did!!!" "go now before I call the principal" As I was walking someone spoke out "ms.W I'm the one who stole your CD!!" "no.I know someone else did" "b*tch I did!" goodness I know he didn't steal that why is he lying? "Justin?I'm sorry but here u got to go to detention." As we started walking to the office he spoke and broke the silence "Nani,right?" "yea." "I didn't really steal the CD I jus wanted to get out of the room I can't stand her!she's just picking on you!she shouldn't do that!" "yea..but it's whatever.." "no it's not! Your to pretty to me picked on.I see the way they do,plus you don't say anything back,don't be shy Nani.o and don't be scared to show that voice you have" I didn't say anything I jus kept walking until we gottovth office. A whole week of detention for the both of us.

May 4th
here in detention it's but 3:41.I was reading this book called " fifteen",but I became so sleepy I had to stop plus Justin kept looking at me.but I feel like more than a 1pair of eyes are looking at me.I just got a note from him.:
do you wanna hang after school with acoule of my friends?
I wrote back:
sure!but...y are you beig so nice to me?
Cause your being nice to me so I should respect you as yu respect me
I gave him a smile and just winked at me.he's so cute!and his voice is amazing!

So let m know if I should keep going or not and remember u can join this story if you'd like.I jus need to do acouple of updates before you guys come in if you wanna join

I like this story! I wanna be in it(:

Originally Posted by Pickmejb004

I like this story! I wanna be in it(:

You can me my bestie!lol after this update you could go.

Finally detention was over...for today and justin and I were walking to his house.I was kinda nervous because his friends probably won't even notice me.. "why are you so quiet?". "I don't really know?I guess I'm really really shy." "you don't have to be shy with me friends.they'll love you!Ryan,Chaz,Christian,yea I pretty sure they will trust me I know them very well" I giggled "I like your laugh." he smile at me but then I looked down at me shoes.As we were walking caitln was in her car and stopped. "hey jay you want a ride?" "na I'm good plus I'm with a friend right now." wow and I thought he was going to leave me. "O ok then bye,stay with the loser!" I hate her so much!she slthe who*re that kissed him.
We got to his house,and he wasn't kidding about them loving me hehe "hi I'm Nani!" "I'm Ryan justins best friend,Chaz, and Christian..so wait we go to the same school?" "ya why?" "I don't see you?" "yea im quiet." "your cute too!" I blushed a little bit and I saw Justin give him a look.it was fun hanging with all of them.we all play'd black ops,halo,gears of war all that stuff!but it was time for me to leave. "hey I gotta go guys thanks fir having me over it was fun!" I was alone when I heard Justin calling my name "yes?" "I just wanted to take you home to make sure your ok." "I well I kinda live far so it's a long walk?" "I don't care I jus want you home safe" we started talking about things we have in com'on like:both play the guitar and piano,fav color purple,love spegettii with meatballs yum!thngs like that.we got my house and didn't want to say goodbye "wow now I can come to your house if I need someone to talk to" "yea I guess,well goodnight Justin and thank you for walking me home." we hug and as I was backing away he kissed my cheek. Was that suppose to mean something?I jus blushed and watch him walk slowly into the dark.I jus stayed outside for a few minutes to look at the starts when iheard foot steps,it was Justin. "hey you still out here shawty?I just wanted to get your number before I left." I gave him my number and finally went inside.wow what a day!

awe! cute! Update!

Nani pov

I woke up missing the bus.so I had to run to school.I was running so much I wasn't paying attention and everything turned black......
"hello misses velez,do you remember what happened to you?" "umm no?who are you?where am I?what happened to me?" "a car hit you very hard,you almost lost you memory.I'm dr.Martin.you are at the hospital.one of you friends came by to see you should I let them in" "yea" it was Justin he looked worried. "Nani!you ok?" "yesss." "when I heard it on the news..well everyone did at school.you should have called I would of gave you a ride!!!Nani becareful nxt time I don't want anything happening to you.ouch is you leg ok?" "yea....o no I broke it?I didn't even know that!but I feel fine let go to school."dr.said it was ok if I really wanted to go which I did but I forgot I still had detntiom but it was jus me and Justin. He started sing a song called "where are you now" he wrote it himself.I loved it.i was just being quiet til he started speaking to me. "hey nani do u wanna go on. A date with me?

What should she say?????

Originally Posted by Nani15

You can me my bestie!lol after this update you could go.

awe yay! Sooory!!! I havent seen this in a while, is cause i took a vacay in NY! but im backdo uu want me todo it in my pov or uu're ganna do it?

Originally Posted by Nani15

Nani pov

I woke up missing the bus.so I had to run to school.I was running so much I wasn't paying attention and everything turned black......
"hello misses velez,do you remember what happened to you?" "umm no?who are you?where am I?what happened to me?" "a car hit you very hard,you almost lost you memory.I'm dr.Martin.you are at the hospital.one of you friends came by to see you should I let them in" "yea" it was Justin he looked worried. "Nani!you ok?" "yesss." "when I heard it on the news..well everyone did at school.you should have called I would of gave you a ride!!!Nani becareful nxt time I don't want anything happening to you.ouch is you leg ok?" "yea....o no I broke it?I didn't even know that!but I feel fine let go to school."dr.said it was ok if I really wanted to go which I did but I forgot I still had detntiom but it was jus me and Justin. He started sing a song called "where are you now" he wrote it himself.I loved it.i was just being quiet til he started speaking to me. "hey nani do u wanna go on. A date with me?

What should she say?????

omw!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! !

"hey nani do u wanna go on. A date with me?

If i was her i wouldve been like "well th@ was random!"

Your own pov!I dnt think it's right just using names...you should update 1st thn I will.