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    lol I promiseeeee (: I love this story too! D
    So whenn is graduation??
    lol SO I know when to "Come back" or "stay until then" )

    hehehe oooooohhhh Rated R? (;

    hahaha jkjkjkjkjk!
    I wanna SHUFFLE!!
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    Default Its my birthday!!!!!

    Look atthe title.....and sense your leaving 1st you can desicde my opinion is to go to college then come back to graduate!!and maybe jus mabe move back her e heydays no that won't happen education 1st
    NANI BIEBER
    Read my stories:
    - "Stuck in detention"
    - "Teen life:I love you..but why me?"
    -"11/11/11"
    -"A new adventure with the one you fall inlove <3"
    -"Somethings happen for a reason"
    -"we found love in a hopeless place READ THIS"

    I need comments..the more the better thank you beliebers!!
    we ROCK!!!!!

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    awww Happy birthday!
    erm, late birthday. (: hahah!
    And Okayyy, well what month are we on right now in the story?
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

    current stories:
    *Puerto rican New Yorker
    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
    Just Speak ( by/with :cinderellaswag)
    Stuck in Detention!!! (By/with: Nani15 & with Belieber_Forever<3)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pickmejb004 View Post
    awww Happy birthday!
    erm, late birthday. (: hahah!
    And Okayyy, well what month are we on right now in the story?
    May goin To June!
    NANI BIEBER
    Read my stories:
    - "Stuck in detention"
    - "Teen life:I love you..but why me?"
    -"11/11/11"
    -"A new adventure with the one you fall inlove <3"
    -"Somethings happen for a reason"
    -"we found love in a hopeless place READ THIS"

    I need comments..the more the better thank you beliebers!!
    we ROCK!!!!!

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    Happy belated birthday nani! Sorry i wished u like 2 days late, but i just saw this!
    I don't think i ever want this story to end, its just so much fun! & u 2 r the best co-writers! =')

    All right, stop, drop and roll, Justin Bieber is on FIRE!
    Its time to realize its time to call me Young Sire
    You're the seller, Im the buyer
    You're the teller, and Im hired
    Im higher than the highest point, yes, I am FLYER!

    Plz read my fan-fics:
    The Story of Us!
    She was Born to be Somebody!

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    Stuck in Detention!!! (with Nani15 & Pickmejb004)

    ~Fatima!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Belieber_ForeOu somuch both of ver<3 View Post
    Happy belated birthday nani! Sorry i wished u like 2 days late, but i just saw this!
    I don't think i ever want this story to end, its just so much fun! & u 2 r the best co-writers! =')
    Thank you so Much both of you!!! And me with hahah!!so who's updating?
    NANI BIEBER
    Read my stories:
    - "Stuck in detention"
    - "Teen life:I love you..but why me?"
    -"11/11/11"
    -"A new adventure with the one you fall inlove <3"
    -"Somethings happen for a reason"
    -"we found love in a hopeless place READ THIS"

    I need comments..the more the better thank you beliebers!!
    we ROCK!!!!!

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    Aww Thanks Fatima! You and Nani are the best co- writers too! (;
    Okay I 'll update! I have something up my sleeve...
    Here goes!

    Jazmin's POV

    2 weeks Later... May 22, 2012

    We are all at Pizza Hut, digging in to the pizza. I still hadn't told the rest of my friends, and the time of my departure was getting closer and closer.
    I had already gone down for the meeting, and everything had gone well. I was officially going to the University of Liverpool in 15 days.

    I was leaving June 6th.
    Graduation was on June 22, so I guess I would come back but I didn't really know yet.

    I looked at all the faces of the people that had been really close to me for the past year, and It seemed incredibly burdensome to just leave.

    I felt the tears falling fast, and I tried to wipe them away, but everyone could see.
    Ryan pressed his fingers over mine, and glanced over at me.

    "Jay, what's wrong?" Justin asked, looking at me concerned.

    I pursed my lips, trying to pull the tears away. But It only made the tears fall harder and faster.

    I could see Fatima look down, trying hard not to let anything slip.

    "Jazmin?" Christian asked.

    I took a deep breath, and looked over at him, at Shelby, at Chaz, and then Justin.

    "Guys, I have to tell you something..."
    I guess it was now or never.

    I handed the letter to Justin, who skimmed through it, and then looked up at me with an expression I could not read.

    He handed the letter to the others, and then looked at me directly, never cutting the gaze on me.

    FInally when everyone had read it, Justin spoke.

    "jazmin?' His voice quivered some, and I knew he wanted me to explain.

    "I applied to several colleges: University of Forks, University of Washington, NYU, Penn State, PUC, The University of California, Alberquerque, and Three colleges from the UK: Aberystwyth University, Swansea University, and The University of Liverpool. I got accepted to all but 2 which are, Alberquerque and Penn State.
    So I was left with: University of Forks, University of Washington, NYU, PUC, The University of California and
    Aberystwyth, Swansea and Liverpool as my choices. I got half scholarship to NYU, PUC and California, A quarter scholarship to Forks and Washington, and 75 Percent scholarship to Aberystwyth and Swansea.
    But I got a scholarship, in full to Liverpool. So I sent the letter of confirmation, and now they want me to come on an early admission."

    At this point, the tears started to fall more and more heavily and my vision became blurred.

    "When do you leave?" Chaz asked, in a solemn voice.

    'June 6." i whispered.

    Suddenly I was tackled by hugs, and for once I knew i had the best friends in the world and it would be hard to leave them.



    *************************************************
    I only had 14 days left.
    Only 2 weeks.


    I packed none stop, shoving things into boxes and bags, and suitcases.
    Buying quilts and comforters, and frames, and so much else.

    Everyone would come over and help pack and whatever else that was needed.

    It was decided, at the last moment, that everyone would come to England with me, help set up and say the official goodbyes.
    Justin had purchased everyone a ticket, and they were catching my same flight, to be close to me.
    I loved them all so much, and i was glad they were coming. because I just couldn't leave them behind.

    I worked hard on my studies as well, finishing all the rest of the work. Ryan helped me with all of it. I took the required tests, and worked my butt off.

    I ended up with a 3.99 Grade point average, all A's and a to be high school diploma.


    Finally on the last day of being at home, We all had a giant sleepover at Justin's house.
    I had spent the whole last two days with my family, and now it was time to end it with my friends.

    I was so excited but at the same time sad, because I was so close.
    So close to being gone.


    Everyone came over to help me bring everything to Justin's house.
    Everything was put in his car, and situated.
    I grabbed my overnight bag, and went inside, where the start of The Last Party
    was about to begin....
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

    current stories:
    *Puerto rican New Yorker
    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
    Just Speak ( by/with :cinderellaswag)
    Stuck in Detention!!! (By/with: Nani15 & with Belieber_Forever<3)

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    Default everyones new begining!! <3 never falling apart

    Nani pov

    ....'Saying goodbye was really hard on me and Fatima!i didnt want her to leave..i wasnt expecting her to leave until after tour"
    conversation 2weeks ago:
    "i need y'alls opinion.....i need help on deciding a college!..theres one thats all the way in california or one all they where Justin wants to go live after high school?I dont know what to do.me and my mom been wanting to go there my hole life!But i cant leave Dusty with out Justin...i jus cant..."
    "well why dont you let jay take him for a month?"said fatima
    "I cant!hes my son..well our son but i cant let that baby travel here by himself..i like the idea though.i really dont know??"
    "Leave him with your mom"said Jazmin
    "i wish i could bbut i jus cant"Maybe i should move in with Justin....but i cant....
    "im leaving to California after tour..."
    "thats great..but what about the baby?" asked fatima
    "he staying with me..and we will visit each other..please dont tell him!!!i need to tell him for myself..no matter how hard it will befor me and him..every month maybe we will see each other"
    "each month??thats too long!"said jazmin a little loud
    "shh the baby is sleeping...and yeah if he cant wait that long then he doesnt really love me...i really need to do this for my future..if i even have one"
    "you do!!!"they both said
    "but guys i had a baby in the begining of high school..-"
    "but Nani..you got basicailly raped!" yelled Fatmia
    "i know...but still!i need a job.."
    "Nani we both know how much you love Singing!!Ask justin if he can help out as a job while your in school..with him??"said Fatmia lookin away.
    "Maybe your right..maybe i can have a normal job til after college??"
    "i dont know Nani.. 4years in college?"
    "i guess your right Jaz..."it was always of thinking but every time i think about it..my answer is California arts musicial...
    now:
    im said to see her leave as she drives away..hopefully i see her very very soon!!!!!i miss her already and i can see her driving away




    someone update!
    NANI BIEBER
    Read my stories:
    - "Stuck in detention"
    - "Teen life:I love you..but why me?"
    -"11/11/11"
    -"A new adventure with the one you fall inlove <3"
    -"Somethings happen for a reason"
    -"we found love in a hopeless place READ THIS"

    I need comments..the more the better thank you beliebers!!
    we ROCK!!!!!

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    I would so like to update... haha but its Fatima's turn (: Go Nani, do what ou love!!! Haha. And arent you coming to say goodbye in England with me?
    Thats our last goodbye lol this story is emotional.
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

    current stories:
    *Puerto rican New Yorker
    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
    Just Speak ( by/with :cinderellaswag)
    Stuck in Detention!!! (By/with: Nani15 & with Belieber_Forever<3)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pickmejb004 View Post
    I would so like to update... haha but its Fatima's turn (: Go Nani, do what ou love!!! Haha. And arent you coming to say goodbye in England with me?
    Thats our last goodbye lol this story is emotional.
    yeah sorry i remeber right after i finished updating my bad if she doesnt go soon then you should go..love her but she takes forever to update sometimes
    NANI BIEBER
    Read my stories:
    - "Stuck in detention"
    - "Teen life:I love you..but why me?"
    -"11/11/11"
    -"A new adventure with the one you fall inlove <3"
    -"Somethings happen for a reason"
    -"we found love in a hopeless place READ THIS"

    I need comments..the more the better thank you beliebers!!
    we ROCK!!!!!

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