Thread: Stuck in Detention!!!

Originally Posted by Pickmejb004

(: You're welcome, Fatima! :-) and don't you worry, that was a good chapter!!
Nani, update! I'll go after you!

UPdate

Jazmin's POV

I was drifting away to dreamland, with the melodious sound of the engine, and the nice humming of Ryan. He wasn't as good of a singer as Justin, but he was rather good. I was closing my eyes, and just about to drift away completely when suddenly my phone blasted.
I jumped like 2 feet in the air, and frantically searched my satchel for my phone.

"Hello?" I said, my heart still beating full throttle.


"Aye! Jazz!"

"Hey, Justin."

I balanced the phone to my ear, and straightened myself.

"So, I wanted to tell you guys something. Since your Nani's best friend, and Ryan's mine, I wanted to run something by you. And since I know you guys are probably together, haha I thought I should call you."

I smiled and set the phone on Speaker.


"Mmkay, Justin you're on speaker."

"Aye, Ryan." Justin said.

"What's up man? What's so important that you wanted to tell us?"

"Well," he took a breath and cleared his throat.

"I'm gonna give a promise ring to Nani."


"WHAT?" I said.

He chuckled.

"Well, I love Nani! Enough to Marry her! But I do know we're young still. So I'm gonna give her a promise ring. That way. I can be with her, and Dustin."

"Ohmyword!!!! Awwww."

I was grinning hard, happy for her.

"Yep. So you think its a good idea?"


"Totally." I said.

"Yeah, man! Nani definitely deserves it."

"Awesome! Gonna do it tonight! hurry up and come guys!"

"Okay, we'll be there soon." Ryan said.

"Mmhmm. Bye Justin!"

I hung up, and smiled wide. I'm so happy for Nani!




There's the update.

update fatmiaaaa!!!!if not ill goo

how about u go first nani, because honestly, i have no idea what to write!

Nani pov
Dreaming: "ERIC!please don't!!!he's my son!!!" "no!!he's our son!I tld you to love me and you did now we have a baby together.." "no!you basically raped me!stay out of my life!!!!"I woke up in the dark with watery eyes and saw movement..please don't let this be happening to me...
"SURPRISE!!!!" said Fatima and jazmin and their boyfriends but where was Justin and Dustin?
"thank you-"
"were you crying Nani?"I rubbed my eyes
"no..I jus had a bad dream that's all"
"well let's go party!!!" I got dressed into something better than house clothes.we went to bowl
"so where are my to special men in the world at?"they giggled
"you'll see later!." they looked at each other giving smirks
"ugh I wana know!" after about an hour we drove back home and something happened to the gas I was so mad!
Fatima pov
We are lying bout the out of gas.I put it on neutral so it seemed that it broke down when really we are just waiting for Justin to get ready so he makes his BIG move!!!I was so excited!after al that Nani has been threw no it's paying off!!


Update!!sorry I hope I help fatmia

Thank u nani it did!
i'll post the update soon!

Originally Posted by Belieber_Forever<3

Thank u nani it did!
i'll post the update soon!

hurry!!lol

Thanking God, that Nani wasn't sitting on the passenger seat but behind me, I put the car in neutral. I fake struggled with the car, "What's wrong?" asked Christian, playing along. "The car." I said pretending to pull a few gears & whatnot. "It stalled its not..." I said, sighing. The sigh, partly pretend to be frustrated at me car, part because I knew that I was a extremely bad liar. "Let me just call the mechanic guys. I'll be back in a few." I said as I quickly just switched the car off & got out of the car. Christian followed, as an excuse to check out the hood of the car. As he opened the hood, I went over to the side of the street & called Justin.
"Hello?" I heard his familiar voice.
"Justin! Where in the world are you? I stalled Nani, but I don't think I can keep up much longer, y'all know I'm a terrible liar!" I excalimed.
"Just stall her for um, 10 more minutes I'll text u when to leave ok? I want this to be perfect!" he said.
I smiled into the receiver, "Nani, is one special girl, & she definately deserves it."
"You know it. Ok I gotta run, one more last thing to do. So I'll text u when its go time okay?"
"Kay." I said as I pressed the red button.
I went over to the hood where Christian was supposedly "examining" it. "How much more?" he said. "10 more minutes, just stay here, I'll send Ryan." I whispered as I quickly went & sat in the car. "Hey Ryan, Christian needs you out there, he's having um, trouble." I babbled. "Will do," he said, feeling my tension as Jazmin hid a smile at my pathetic lying skills. I glared at her as Nani suddenly said, "Do u know where's Justin & where's he's taking us. I've been texting him all evening! He's not even replying." she whined sadly, "I'm as clueless as you!" said Jazmin smiling looking anywhere except at Nani. A few minutes later I got a text from Justin:
"It's go time..."
I gave Christian the signal, which was basically just a nod, as he came to my door, we both were so close I could almost hear his each & every breath. "I think you can start your car now, Fatima." he said giving me the most adorable grin ever. "UmmHmm." I said nervously biting my lip as I turned towards the steering wheel. I took a deep breath & told myself, "Focus! You have a different mission right now."
I gripped my hands on the steering wheel & slowly turned on the car, the engine roared & came to life. I heard a sigh of relief from Nani.
I smiled as I pressed the accelerator & drove off...

After 25 minutes later I stopped off infront of a theatre, more specifically the Avon Theatre. The boy had big plans if he was gonna give her the promise ring in a theatre. How he was gonna give her the ring, even the rest of us didn't know. That was a mystery yet to be solved.
We all got out of the car & pushed Nani in the theatre, while she kept on piling up questions like "Is Justin here?" "Where's Justin?" "Guys! Where the hell are you taking me?" but we kept on ignoring them & smiled instead as we finally reached one of the halls. We pushed her inside & closed the doors. "Phase 1, complete?" said Jazmin. "Yup, phase 2 is a go!" I said as the four of us bolted outside & towards the backstage entrances. We went one of the doors & found ourselves in the same backstage where Justin was about to pull his move. The spotlight came dead center of the stage where Justin was standing. "J-justin?" Nani stuttered...

Your turn Nani! I wanted u to describe the special moment!

Great update!!!!!!!real quick...please read my new storie "teen life:I love you...but why me"
Here I go!

Nani pov
"GUYS!!!quit pushing me!!!I got to feet!!now answer my question where is Justin?"they would not answer me until I was in a very dark room
"j-Justin?"I was starting to worry
Justin pov
My hands were very sweaty at this point..theres no turning back here I go!'i stood on stage with all lights off.I counted to ten and lights went on:
Nani I..I wrote you 2 songs,coming from my heart and I mean these words in these lyrics..and I really hope you feel the same way.......
(slow version)You know you love me, I know you care
Just shout whenever, and I'll be there
You are my love, you are my heart
And we will never, ever, ever be apart
Are we an item? Girl, quit playin'
"We're just friends," what are you sayin'?
Said "there's another," and looked right in my eyes
My first love broke my heart for the first time
And I was like baby, baby, baby, oh
Like baby, baby, baby, no
Like baby, baby, baby, oh
I thought you'd always be mine, mine
Baby, baby, baby, oh
Like baby, baby, baby, no
Like baby, baby, baby, oh
I thought you'd always be mine, mine
For you, I would have done whatever
And I just can't believe we're here together
And I wanna play it cool, but I'm losin' you
I'll buy you anything, I'll buy you any ring
And I'm in pieces, baby fix me
And just shake me 'til you wake me from this bad dream
I'm goin' down, down, down, down
And I just can't believe my first love won't be around
And I'm like baby, baby, baby, oh
Like baby, baby, baby, no
Like baby, baby, baby, oh
I thought you'd always be mine, mine
Baby, baby, baby, oh
Like baby, baby, baby, no
Like baby, baby, baby, oh
I thought you'd always be mine, mine
Baby, baby, baby, oh
Like baby, baby, baby, no
Like baby, baby, baby, oh
I thought you'd always be mine, mine
Baby, baby, baby, oh
Like baby, baby, baby, no
Like baby, baby, baby, oh
I thought you'd always be mine, mine
I'm all gone
(Yeah, yeah, yeah)
(Yeah, yeah, yeah)
Now I'm all gone
(Yeah, yeah, yeah)
(Yeah, yeah, yeah)
Now I'm all gone
(Yeah, yeah, yeah)
(Yeah, yeah, yeah)
Now I'm all gone, gone, gone, gone
I'm gone
..........I really hoped you like that song cause I like you alot alot Nani..please come toward the stage for this next song-she came up as I sat her on a stool-
Oh no, oh no, oh
They say that hate has been sent
So let loose the talk of love
Before they outlaw the kiss
Baby, give me one last hug
There's a dream that I've been chasing
Want so badly for it to be reality
And when you hold my hand then I understand
That it's meant to be 'cause, baby, when you're with me
It's like an angel came by and took me to heaven
Like you took me to heaven, girl
'Cause when I stare in your eyes it couldn't be better
I don't want you to go, oh no, so
Let the music blast, we gon' do our dance
Bring the doubters on, they don't matter at all
'Cause this life's too long and this love's too strong
So baby, know for sure that I'll never let you go
I got my favorite girl
Not feeling no pain, no fear
Don't have a care in the world
Why would I when you are here?
There's a moment I've been chasing
And I finally caught it out on this floor
Baby, there's no hesitation, no reservation
By taking a chance and more, oh no, because
It's like an angel came by and took me to heaven
Like you took me to heaven, girl
'Cause when I stare in your eyes, it couldn't be better
I don't want you to go, oh no, so
Let the music blast, we gon' do our dance
Bring the doubters on, they don't matter at all
'Cause this life's too long and this love's too strong
So baby, know for sure that I'll never let you go
It's like an angel came by and took me to heaven
Like you took me to heaven, girl
'Cause when I stare in your eyes, it couldn't be better
I don't want you to go, oh no, so
Take my hand, let's just dance
Watch my feet, follow me
Don't be scared, girl, I'm here
If you didn't know, this is love
Let the music blast, we gon' do our dance
Bring the doubters on, they don't matter at all, oh baby
'Cause this life's too long and this love's too strong
So baby, know for sure that I'll never let you go
So don't fear, don't you worry 'bout a thing
I am here, right here, I'll never let you go
Don't shed a tear whenever you need me
I'll be here, I'll never let you go
Oh no, oh no, oh
I'll never let you go
Oh no, oh no, oh
I'll never let you go
I looked her and kissed her real deeply.."Nani before you get mad at me and ask question..let me ask you mine and please listen to what I have to say baby......I met you in 9th grade..always thought you were a beautiful girl!seeing you walk the Halls pass me look away,always shy..I never knew I would last this long with a wonderful girl like you..we've been going out for 10months.these past 3 months I got to know your son Dustin named after me...I love seeing you happy with him and when in with him,when I see you smile..it's like my while world disappears and I only see you...I love you Nani and I love Dustin....He's OUR son.I adopted him because I feel like im his father I love him like he is my son which he is NOW.but I love you!and I know I wanna be with you forever!you make me happy when everything else is wrong!you understand me!you've been through alot in your life babygirl but now I'm changing that..Dustin come here buddy!...- I put my hands around her waist and put my forehead against hers looking straight into her eyes whispering- Nani..can you promise me that you will wait for me...another year until your 19 to marry me..be my wife,I will keep you safe and gaurded..I know we have fights here and there but that's what makes us strong!!marry me Nani be light.."
Dustin had the ring.
Nani pov
"Marry me Nani,be my light.."
I had tears falling
"YES!!!!!" he hugged me real tight kissing me and lifting me up spinging me around.
"I love you Nani..you made me the most happiest Man in the world!!!!"he kept kissing me I just could stop smiling and laughing.Dusting kept laughing with joy!
"mommy and daddy finally gonna gwet mawwied!!!!!yay!!!!!"
Out of know where we heard everyone.
"CONGRATS NANI AND JUSTIN!!!LETS GO CELEBRATE..meaning drop of Dustin.."
Said Jaz



Update!!!

Hey Guys!!
So I'm guessing its my turn.. lol Heres the update.

Jazmin's POV

"VAMONOS!" I yelled. Laughing as I said it I was pretty much just staring at Nani and Justin, because wheat he did for her was about the cutest thing ever.

He loved her that much.

I felt someone squeeze my hand, and I looked up at Ryan.

"I love you." Ryan said.

"I love you too." He kissed the side of my cheek and picked me off the ground.

"Piggy back ride?"

I laughed and climbed up on his back.

"So where to?" Fatima asked.

"That's easy, Reynos." Justin said smirking. "My treat, only condition, ya'll gotta dress nice. Like Fancy, Formal wear. Mmmkay? Everyone meet there in an hour."


Reynos was an expensive Italian resteraunt about 20 minutes away from school. You could get in, only with reservations. But apparently, Justin had called ahead of time and got us in.

"YES!" We all said.

Everyone went to hug Justin, even Ryan, which was a little awkward, since I was still on his back.


"Okay, okay!! Everyone, go get dressed!!" He hollered, pretending to be argued by the love.

We all knew he wasn't the least bit mad though.
He liked it.


I jumped off of Ryan's back, and kissed him lightly.

"Byee baby."

"Bye, mi amour."


I giggled, and skipped away to Fatima's car.


We all went to our seperate houses, and got ready alone.

It would be a surprise to all.


I went home and threw my jacket and keys, and cell phone on the kitchen table.
I ran upstairs to my bedroom and went straight for a towel and under clothes. Then I hit the shower.


I got out and put on a tight red, body con dress, that ended about 4 inches above my knees.

It was one strap across my shoulder, and the other side was strapless.

I put on thick souled, really high heeled ankle booties, and my favorite necklace, that Nani had given me.

I pulled all my hair down, and let it fall down my back in my natural loose waves. I put mouse and hairspray, put on some perfume, then went to work on my makeup. Smokey eyes, and long lashes.
Red lipstick, and long dangly earrings.

I took one look at myself, and I smiled. I looked different.
Good different.


I went back down, grabbed my side bag, and my keys, jacket, and cellphone. And headed to my own car.

I backed out of the driveway, and made way to Reynos, to join my guy, and all of my friends.


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I walked into the resteraunt and smiled.

Everyone looked up.


"Wow, YOu look amazing!!" Nani said, hugging me tightly.

"Yeah! Really glamourous!!" said Fatima.

"So pretty." Shellby said, smiling.

"Aw, Thanks guys. All of you look absolutely stunning!"
and it was true. All of them looked different too.

Mature. Grown up. very formal.

The boys weren't here yet, but I knew that when they came in, they would be stunned at what they saw.


Then I got an idea.


'Guys, why don't we let the boys come in first?"

We all smirked at eachother, and walked outside.
We hid to the side of the building and waited.


Suddenly, the boys showed up.
First, Justin.
Then Ryan, and Chaz.
and finally, Christian.

They all walked in to Reynos.

We were all shocked at what we saw.


All of them in suits and ties, hair slicked back, and studs in each ear.

OMG. They looked hot.

"Okay, guys, its go time." I said, smirking.

"Remember, flip and wave and model walk."

We created a formation. Nani in the front, Me and fatima and then Shellby.


Nani walked inside, flipping her hair, and shinning the perfect smile.

Fatima and I walked directly behind her, and waltzed in as well, smirking.

And then Shellby.

Basically, the boys jaws fall open, and they're eyes jumped out of their sockets.

That's right. Us girls gotta look good. Especially, for our dudes.















haha (: Someone go now! See what the boys say about us, and about what we say about the girls!