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    CHAPTER 1 : Just when I thought things couldn't get worse...

    Justin was just about to sing his closing song 'Baby' for his My World tour, when my mom got a little woozy. She sat down, and i figured she was fine. I sat up, jumped, and sang like all the other crazy fans that were screaming their heads off. Suddenly, my mom started breathing heavily. I worried because she had a chronic heart condition, like the rest of my family had, except for me. But, almost all of my family had died from it, including my father. These days, all my mother wanted was for me to have a normal life, so she juggled being a mom and a dad. But the rest of my family that was still alive, hadn't bothered with us. If my mom was to die at any time, they'd put me directly into an orphanage. So, in other words, this is serious. But now she was nearly passing out, and i couldn't scream for help, because everyone was talking and getting up to leave. Suddenly, my mother fell to the ground, shaking. I was having a panic attack in my head. Everyone just about left, when i screamed ''HELP! MY MOTHER IS HAVING A HEART ATTACK! SOMEONE, PLEASE, HELP!'' and Kenny, (Justin's bodyguard) jumped over the stage in a split second to see what was happening. ''What the problem?'' he asked. ''I-I-I- I don't know. Sh-Sh-she has a chronic heart condition and i th-th-think she is having a heart at-at-attack, or worse.'' I stuttered, freaking out. ''Okay, let me go get help, i'll be back in a second'' he said, racing towards the backstage entrance. I was shaking my mom, this time really hard, hoping she would open an eye, or something. She reached her hand, it touched my face, and she said ''Eli-za-za-be-be-th, i-i-if i d-dont wake, pa-please, don't ever stop fa-following your d-d-dreams'' she stuttered. And then, her hand moved back down my face, and her head rolled over to its side. She had always told me to live out my dreams, which I always said I'd be famous for singing, because I was pretty good. And now, my inspiration might be gone from me, forever, and then, i'd be put in an orphanage, and never get an opputunity to live my dreams. Just when I thought my life was tumbling in a downward spiral, Justin jumped off the stage, and came over to me.


    *This is my first fan fiction, hope ya' like it!* I will continue this in a bit.
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    sound promising update plzz!

    COMING SOON!!!!!!

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    i am in about 5 mins. thx! btw im new to this, how do you make like a signature when you reply ? <---- nevermind, and im posting now (:
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    CHAPTER 2: Wow, he really does have a good heart....

    ''Hey shawty, i'm really sorry 'bout what happened. I hope she is alright.'' Justin said sincerely. ''Thanks'' I said, wiping my tears off my cheek, ''Tha-that really means alot.'' And then, Justin came over and gave me a hug. It was the best hug I have ever got! It was loving and sincere, something I've only known from my mom. As he let go, I saw Kenny and some paramedic men with a stretcher rush over and grab my mom. I ran with them as they rushed to some medical room. As I walked in, I saw Scooter and Usher sitting on the window frame. I was freaking out in my mind, and panicking at the same time. It gave me a huge headache. As I watched the paramedics try and restart my mothers heart, i was breaking down on the inside. How could this be happening? This was soposed to be a GOOD day to remember, having fun with my mom. Instead, it was the worst. Even my fathers death didn't make me break down like i am now, and she is dying the way he did. Would my estranged family take me back and love me like my mother if she died? I was trying to hold back my loud crying out loud, but it was hard. A paramedic woman walked over and escorted me out into the hall. She knew I couldn't take it. Just then, Justin walked out, and just then was when I realized what a good heart he had. He was crying, also, for me ....

    *I will continue this after i try and fix my computer battery*

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    should i continue ? post your suggestion !

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    Aww this is cute... really good! UPDATE!!
    Dear Justin Bieber Haters,
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    yea u should, i really like it!!! and do still need help with the signature??

    COMING SOON!!!!!!

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    nope but thx (: and updating nowww(:

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    CHAPTER 3: I can fix up your broken heart...

    Wow, he had such a kind - hearted spirit. Not that he wouldn't, i mean, its Justin Bieber. But, he really felt for me, when I was hurting. ''I'm so sorry about this. I never thought anything like this would happen. This is the worst thing to happen on this tour.'' he said, choking up. ''I'm glad you care, you're really very kind. I can't thank you enough'' i said, drying the tears on my cheeks. ''What does you're mother suffer from that caused this?'' he asked. ''Some chronic heart condition. I wouldn't be surprised if she passes away tonight. My father, sisters, brothers, and grandparents passed away from this too. And for the rest of my family, well, they don't even care. If I was found guilty to i dont know- killing someone, they wouldnt be there to defend me. They just want me sent to a home anyways.'' I said, with hate in my eyes. ''That is just terrible. I feel for you, I'm close to my dad, but I don't see him much. And for you, everything is gone, I am going to help you, in some way. Any way that i can. Anyways, what your name?'' he said. ''Elizabeth, and i'm 16.'' I said shying away. ''Well Lizzie, I'm Bieber, Justin Bieber that is'' I chuckled. He's exactly what I thought he'd be like in person; nice, caring, funny, hot.... ''And I am 16 years old also.'' he said, holding out his hand for me to shake it. I wiped some of the tears off of my cheek and shook his hand. ''You really are, very kind'' I said, being sincere. ''And you Lizzie, you really are, very beautiful'' He said and looked directly into my eyes. I giggled, and blushed. ''Why, thank you, you're not to bad looking yourself'' I said, folding my arms, and he laughed. Wow, I don't want to seem like a crazy weird fan, but I, made THE Justin Bieber laugh. Ha. ''Sarcastic one, i see.'' he said, smiling. ''As some people say, i am pretty funny.'' ''Well, you are, and you need a little laugh at times like this. So, tell me how all this happened'' He said, now with a serious look on his face. Tears started welling up at my eyes. I couldn't bring myself up to do it, but for Justin Bieber, I would....

    *to be continued in 5 minutes; i know what your thinking , GET TO THE POINT, probably(: i am, next chapter coming in 15 mins it will get to a turning point* thx and keep on reading this *

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    CHAPTER 4: I can give you a brand new start...

    Lizzy's POV- ''Well, it all started when you were singing 'Baby'. She felt woozy then by the end passed out, started shaking and now i'm here. I'm so sorry if this took up you're time for the tour. I know this ruined everything and I apologize again and I-i-i just c-ca-cant go on anymore im going into an orphanage and i will have no life, no dreams, my dreams are ruined so is my future, i'll be working at some fast food restaurant living off a $5 an hour pay check and I wont be able to support myself. No one wants a 16 year old girl to adopt they all want small children and i cant bring my self to go on im so so-'' Justin stopped me from talking and pulled me into a hug. I cried on his shoulder until I fell asleep. Next thing I knew, I was laying on a pull out bed sleeping. Justin had put me in their after I fell asleep.
    Justin's POV- I layed her down in the guest room's pull out bed after she was done crying and fell asleep. I ran to check on her mother. Usher and Scooter came out of the room, and they had a concerned look on their face. ''Justin, her mother just passed away'' Usher said, and I started to cry a little. This beautiful girl with dreams and a tragic life is going to have no future. No drive to get somewhere in life. I said I'd help her, and I wanted to really badly. She was in fact the perfect girl for me- beautiful blonde hair, piercing aqua blue eyes, a beautiful personality, and is one heck of a joker. I pulled Scooter aside ''This girl has had one heck of a night- not to mention life. She is in fact a great singer to, and I want to help her. I want to bring her on tour for the rest of our 80 shows, and she can live with me and my mom just until she achieves her dream. I really want to see her succeed. She needs a good life. Would you, please?'' I used my puppy dog look on Scooter, hoping it would work. ''And your NOT just taking her on tour because you like her...'' he added. ''Naaww, man I don't- li-like- ha-her.. shes nice and really funny. She's one good singer too! So...'' I pleaded. ''Okay. She does have a lot of potential. You can go get her and take her to her house to get her stuff. Just don't be to long.'' I raced to the guest room and shook her so she got up. I hope she takes this good news well.....


    *continuing in a minute...*

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