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    Chapter 1: Surprise!

    *Note: Justin & everyone are 17 here.

    Jade’s POV
    *Summer 2008. Man, those were the days! The year when I met my good friend JB in Atlanta. Yes, Justin Bieber. Me, Justin, Caitlin & Christian we were a pack. Ryan Butler & Chaz Somers were in our pack too, you know, of course whenever they came to visit from Canada. We were best friends, we used to meet at least everyday. Things got closer when Justin & Caitlin started dating, they also fell apart when Justin was about to go on his world tour. The reason why ‘Jaitlin’ broke up. When I found out that his tour had finished, a random thought just came into my head…..that maybe Justin & Caitlin would get back together. The thought vanished, after I saw that ‘Jelena’ was what everyone could talk about, plus Caitlin already was madly in love with Hayden.
    *sigh* All these thoughts wandered into my head as I lay upside down on the sofa in complete boredom. Man! Summer 2011 was boring! Suddenly my phone rang. I got up and looked at the caller I.D. It was Caitlin. “Hey Cait!” I answered. ”Hey girl”, replied Caitlin, “Hey listen, I’ve got some people over my house. Why don’t you come over? Knowing you, you must be lying upside down on your sofa like u do when you’re bored.” She stated. “Hahahaha, u know me too well.” I replied. “Wait, which people?” I asked realizing. “Oh you know me, Hayden & Christian & others…”she said. “& who might these others be…?” I pressed. “Surprise, surprise!” she said happily. “Aww CUMMON Cait!” I complained, “You’re my BEST FRIEND! You know that I DON’T like surprises.” I said. “Cummon Jay! Don’t be such a sourpuss” she said enthusiastically. “You know, your super high enthusiasm, hyper-ness and surprises will kill me someday!” I joked. “Oh just shut-up & cummon.” She laughed. “Fine, it beats being bored here anyway.” I said. “Great, hope to see u in 20” she said. “K, Bye” I said & hung up. I looked in the mirror. I was wearing shorts, a white tee, a denim vest & converse. Hmm, guess it was sort-of presentable for whatever mystery guests Caitlin had in store. I put on perfume and lip-gloss & grabbed my bag of the table. “Mom, I’m going to Caitlin’s” I called out while getting my keys of the kitchen counter. “Okay be back by dinner.” She replied. “K, love you” I said. “Love you too” she replied kissing my cheek, then heading back to the kitchen. I went outside, hopped in my car and headed for Caitlin’s.*

    It was a short first chapter, it sucked but anyways…hope you like it! Should I continue?
    Don’t be afraid ladies! Comment, comment & COMMENT!
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    All right, stop, drop and roll, Justin Bieber is on FIRE!
    Its time to realize its time to call me Young Sire
    You're the seller, Im the buyer
    You're the teller, and Im hired
    Im higher than the highest point, yes, I am FLYER!

    Plz read my fan-fics:
    The Story of Us!
    She was Born to be Somebody!

    & my co-written story:
    Stuck in Detention!!! (with Nani15 & Pickmejb004)

    ~Fatima!

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    I love this!! More

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    Quote Originally Posted by MorgLiz View Post
    I love this!! More
    Awww thank u! =)
    I think i'll upd8 after i c a few moree comments! ;D

    All right, stop, drop and roll, Justin Bieber is on FIRE!
    Its time to realize its time to call me Young Sire
    You're the seller, Im the buyer
    You're the teller, and Im hired
    Im higher than the highest point, yes, I am FLYER!

    Plz read my fan-fics:
    The Story of Us!
    She was Born to be Somebody!

    & my co-written story:
    Stuck in Detention!!! (with Nani15 & Pickmejb004)

    ~Fatima!

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    Update i like it

    COMING SOON!!!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by xxanglewingsxx View Post
    Update i like it
    thank u guys, i think i'll post an update 2morrow or day after!

    All right, stop, drop and roll, Justin Bieber is on FIRE!
    Its time to realize its time to call me Young Sire
    You're the seller, Im the buyer
    You're the teller, and Im hired
    Im higher than the highest point, yes, I am FLYER!

    Plz read my fan-fics:
    The Story of Us!
    She was Born to be Somebody!

    & my co-written story:
    Stuck in Detention!!! (with Nani15 & Pickmejb004)

    ~Fatima!

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    Update!! You can't just leave me hanging there!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by kyylieisabelieber<3 View Post
    Update!! You can't just leave me hanging there!!!
    Oh honey u'll have too! :P
    Well,just for a while! ;D

    All right, stop, drop and roll, Justin Bieber is on FIRE!
    Its time to realize its time to call me Young Sire
    You're the seller, Im the buyer
    You're the teller, and Im hired
    Im higher than the highest point, yes, I am FLYER!

    Plz read my fan-fics:
    The Story of Us!
    She was Born to be Somebody!

    & my co-written story:
    Stuck in Detention!!! (with Nani15 & Pickmejb004)

    ~Fatima!

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    Post Chapter 2: Woah!

    I parked my car in front of Caitlin’s house, and went inside. “Hey Jade”, said Caitlin, Christian & Hayden said in unison. “Hey guys” I replied throwing my bag on the couch in front of me. “So Cait, where’s that surprise of yours?” I asked. “Right behind you”, she said smirking. I turned around and saw myself face-to-face with Chaz Somers. “CHAZ!” I yelled, “What the hell are u doing here!” I said hugging him. “Gee what a thing to say to a friend who is meeting u after years!” he joked, pretending like he was insulted. We all burst out laughing. “So didn’t Ryan come?” I asked. “Nah, he had some hockey games.” He said plopping down on the couch. “As if, liar.” I heard a familiar voice say, just as Chaz’s face got attacked by a cushion. “Ry?” I said turning towards the person who threw the cushion. “Missed me?” he asked. I attacked him with a bear hug too. “Yo Cait, where’s Jade and why is this hot chick hugging me” he asked, while the rest of them were all laughing. “Not that I mind” he said. “Oh shut up!” I said smacking him on the arm playfully. “It’s so awesome that u guys are here!” I gushed. “Caitlin, I loved the surprise” I said. “I knew u would.” She said filing on her nails.
    We kept on talking for a while, then I said, “Wouldn’t it be so awesome if Justin were here too, then we would all be back like the ol’ days.” Everyone agreed, when Christian suddenly said, “Hey Jade, can u get me a soda from the kitchen.” “Yeah sure” I replied. “Me too” said Chaz, Ryan, Hayden & Caitlin. “Fine, I’ll bring soda’s for all of you.” Getting up the couch and walking out of the lounge. As I was walking towards the kitchen down the hall, “Woah” I said startled as someone grabbed my wrist and pulled me towards a room.

    Hehehehe any guesses *wink, wink*

    All right, stop, drop and roll, Justin Bieber is on FIRE!
    Its time to realize its time to call me Young Sire
    You're the seller, Im the buyer
    You're the teller, and Im hired
    Im higher than the highest point, yes, I am FLYER!

    Plz read my fan-fics:
    The Story of Us!
    She was Born to be Somebody!

    & my co-written story:
    Stuck in Detention!!! (with Nani15 & Pickmejb004)

    ~Fatima!

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    I'mma go with Justin as my guess update!!

    COMING SOON!!!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by xxanglewingsxx View Post
    I'mma go with Justin as my guess update!!
    Hehe u'll find that out in the next chapter!
    But i dont think ppl like my story!
    Ur my only fan....should I stop?

    All right, stop, drop and roll, Justin Bieber is on FIRE!
    Its time to realize its time to call me Young Sire
    You're the seller, Im the buyer
    You're the teller, and Im hired
    Im higher than the highest point, yes, I am FLYER!

    Plz read my fan-fics:
    The Story of Us!
    She was Born to be Somebody!

    & my co-written story:
    Stuck in Detention!!! (with Nani15 & Pickmejb004)

    ~Fatima!

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