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    Mines won't be that crazy.
    Maybe at least three graphic scenes and a lot of cussing.
    idk, I haven't decided,
    I just let the idea pop into my head,
    wow..two pages already.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BeautifulMelodyxx View Post
    Mines won't be that crazy.
    Maybe at least three graphic scenes and a lot of cussing.
    idk, I haven't decided,
    I just let the idea pop into my head,
    wow..two pages already.

    ooooohhhh i ciiaaannn'ttt waaiiitt
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    Aye turned to Swag, that cute 15 year old has grown into one fine
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    lol writing now.
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    "Yesterday, I fell in love.
    Today feels like my funeral,
    I just got hit by a bus, shouldn't have been so beautiful.."

    -----


    Dear Whoever,

    I'm not here, in this stupid city anymore.
    That is, if you're reading this. Me and my little girl,
    gone. I don't know where we'd be going,
    but I've been thinking about it for almost two years now.

    You'll get the picture.

    Don't follow us.
    Don't call us.
    Just leave us alone,
    or you'll be sorry.

    You know I know you're reading it.

    Forever Yours,


    __________


    "Come on, call me you stupid prick."

    I drove around, looking for a place to sleep for the night. I sighed as I looked through the rear-view mirror, seeing my little girl fast asleep.

    I told them not to call me, but I know that they would. Had this been an evil act? Taking away a child he knew nothing about? I missed those days, where we were in love and everything was sugar-coated, sickly sweet...Yeah, I miss those days as much as I miss the hours of labor. I hadn't realized how much I hated and loved Justin.

    Not until I did what I just did.

    Not until I finally grabbed him by the horns and taunted him. I made him squirm, I just know it.

    But that's what happen when you cheat on your first love. You don't hurt your first love. Ring, ring, ring! Like clockwork, baby.

    "Hello, darlin'." I snickered, listening to him yell at me. Wow. I had no idea it'd be a damn turn on.
    "Ivy, what the hell?! I have a daughter!? Why did you take her; where did you take her; why am I just finding out!?" I loved the way he yells. Kind of reminds me of our first time.
    "Nice to hear from you Justin, Lilly and I are just fine." He cursed like a sailor sometimes, but I was okay with that. "Bring her back!"

    "Come and catch me," I was ready to end the call when he muttered, "You're an evil bitch, Danielle." Ooh, he's calling me by my government name; he's really pissed.
    "Yeah, but you love me this way, jackass....Payback." There was a long silence until I heard a chuckle. "Why are you trying to make me angry? If it's the sex--."
    "Oh it has nothing to do with the sex, although it was good," I laughed, driving up to a motel, outside of Atlanta, Georgia. "You just have to realize that not everything is about you, Justin...What you did? Umph." I bit my lip, trying to hold back, "Was unforgivable..."
    "Just come back, Ivy, I mean it."
    "Bye-bye, Justin" Click.

    _______

    05/17/11
    Applebee's


    "Hi cutie, is today your birthday?" The little brown-eyed angel nodded her head, with a smile so sweet. "I'm Ivy, I'll be your server today." I stood up straight, pulling out my notepad. "What can I start you guys off with?"

    "How about a number?" I looked over to the gentlemen sitting next to cute little girl, in the booth. Short, brown hair, sexy ass stare, and lips so...Had to stop myself. "Um, I don't think so." "Why do they call you Ivy? Is your smile so poisoness?" I rolled my eyes. That one was new. "Nice...What can I get you, babygirl?" She was so adorable, reading from the kiddy menu, like she was an adult. "Lemon-juice!" I blanked, but then realized she meant lemonade. I nodded, "Lemon-juice it is. And you, Bieber?"

    "Oh, so you know me?" "I know of you, yeah...What is it?" I slanted my weight to my other leg, staring at him. I had use all my self-control to not look other places. "I'll take a sprite..And Ivy?" "Hm?" I answered by, not looking up from my notepad. "When can I get that number?" I chuckled lightly, turning around. "If you're good? Never." I walked off and by the end of the dinner, after the rest of the party came and went, he had my number on his bill. Lucky son of a--
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    three pages already.
    Amazing, new record!

    Please vote!
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    i love the way this has like diary entries (for lack of a better way to put it) i was thinking about doing a story like that a long time ago.. i love this story, cuz its not all sweet and nice like the others
    Grey Hoodies turned into Leather Jackets,
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    Haha, playing him... so funny And i dunno why, but when it got to the part where he said "poisoness" I like stared at it REALLY hard trying to figure out if it was spelled wrong or not. Nothing wrong with spelling mistakes, cuz ai maike them two (<----lol) but the weird part was how I was so confused by it =__= I really liked this chapter Danielle!!! (Uhh, I believe that is your name)
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    Quote Originally Posted by live&lovemusic20 View Post
    Haha, playing him... so funny And i dunno why, but when it got to the part where he said "poisoness" I like stared at it REALLY hard trying to figure out if it was spelled wrong or not. Nothing wrong with spelling mistakes, cuz ai maike them two (<----lol) but the weird part was how I was so confused by it =__= I really liked this chapter Danielle!!! (Uhh, I believe that is your name)
    It is lol.

    Quote Originally Posted by Leahangeline View Post
    i love the way this has like diary entries (for lack of a better way to put it) i was thinking about doing a story like that a long time ago.. i love this story, cuz its not all sweet and nice like the others
    thank you,
    i wanted to do something different from what i usually do,
    so this just popped in my head. i was basing it off of the Jade character,
    from Victorious. Weird, I know.
    But I kept thinking, what would she do??
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    "So who do you think you are?
    Running 'round leaving scars,
    collecting your jar of hearts,
    And tearing love apart.."

    ------


    To Whom It Concerns,

    I bet you're wondering..."Why'd she do it?"
    The kid.
    Leaving.
    The secrets...Why?

    Well, that's to say, if I wanted to tell you...
    I'm not sure if you understand it,
    but it was better for me to leave.
    To take Lilly and just go...

    I know you wouldn't understand,
    Justin Drew Bieber. But sea lo que sea...
    It is how it is.
    Poor thing...Lilly will never get to know her father..

    Bye,

    __________


    "Wake up Lilly, we have to go."

    I tried to pack up everything really fast. I seriously think that Justin found out where I was. I knew my phone call with him should've been at a pay phone. Stupid! Lilly waddled over to her princess, rolling suitcase, and nearly dragged it death out of the door.

    I wanted--at least part of me did--to stay behind and watch his facial expressions. But I had to be on the run. If I'd stay, it'd cause more drama than called for. I had that urge, though. To mess with his little head and break his mind down, like a jigsaw puzzle or a some type of quizzical game. But sadly, I had to leave. I threw on some clothes(Jaded.) and started for the door with my bags.

    But load and behold, Superman was there to stop me. More like the kryptonite. I knew we should've moved faster. "Move out of my way." I gritted my teeth together as I stood, with Lilly standing right behind me. "Is that her? Is that Lilly??" I stared him straight in the eyes, feeling that familiar feeling..God this boy turns me on. "Lilly run to the bathroom and lock the door, now!" I heard her feet scattered, and he tried to go after her.

    "Don't even, Bieber!" The door clicked with the lock. He looked like he wanted to hit me. With my luck, hopefully in the right place. "You're cold-hearted. Had I hurt you this much that you kept her away from me for two years?? Two years?! Damnit, Danielle, I could've--! I could've--!" "You could've what!? Be a father?" I chuckled, dropping my bags. "Ha. Not likely, Bieber. What with your busy schedule and that bitch of a girlfriend of yours--." "Leave Selena out of it." Great, I found a nerve..Lovely.

    I smirked, "You'd think I'd let her anywhere near Lilly? You're sadly mistaken, Justin..I'm not even sure I should let you--." "This is kidnapping--." "Not if you're not on the birth certificate!" I think that did it.

    He pulled my wrist back, I jerked it away from him. I smiled menacingly in anticipation...Just waiting for his next move. He grabbed my wrist again, this time with more strength and pinned me to the wall. I bet this little game was not on his schedule today. "What are you gonna do to me?" I asked him, seductively. He smirked. He drew close to me, inches away from my lips. His breath tickled my neck, teasingly. "You're teasing me, why?" I nodded, smirking. "Why do you think?" He rammed his tongue down my throat, an unexpected yet expected move. He missed this.

    "Mmm," I smiled, laughing. "You missed me, baby?" He shook his head, "Not a chance, Ivy...I just wanna talk to you." I sighed, rolling my eyes. I pushed him off of me and headed to the bathroom. "I don't want to." "You're going to." He pulled my arm back, throwing me across the room. I landed on the bed with a thud. I was shocked, because he was never this rough before. Now that, was a total turn on. "Well if you wanted some, all you had to do was ask! Just, this time, wrap it up huh, I'm not going through hours of labor, like this one?" I nudged at the bathroom door. He stomped his foot, angered. Pressure points. "Ivy, please. Be serious for once!"

    I sighed and sat up. "Come out the bathroom, Lilly!" The tiny coffee-colored daughter of ours waddled out in her pajamas. She had his eyes; which hurts to even stare into, even on a good day. My full lips and his nose and hair color. She morely looked like him than me. She ran over to me, climbing over my lap. She sat nervously, since Justin was a newbie to her. I don't blame her, I'd like to crawl away from him myself. "...Lilly, meet your daddy." I mumbled, angrily. Justin knelt down, looking at her intently. "Hi beautiful..." I saw him swallow down, trying to control his tears. Great, I don't deal well with criers. "Say goodbye, Lilly--." "Wait!" He held his hand out, stopping me. Lilly sat up, looking over at him. Her eyes stared back at his, as she reached out to touch his face.

    She looked back at me, I nodded. "Dada.." Her innocent voice ringed out. Great, my daughter's a trader. Justin picked her up and held her close. Maybe this was evil of me...But I'm not giving up.

    Seeing him like this, with Lilly in his arms, only brought back hurt for me. Call me foolish. Call me selfish. Call me whatever you want, but I won't let him do what he did to me, to Lilly. Bring all her hopes up and crush her down...Build her up with this notion of loving her and then rip it away when leaves and comes back, god knows when, after being that tramp. "Give her back to me, we gotta go." I grabbed Lilly away from him and started picking up my bag and hers. "Dani, wait, please." I stopped short at the door; I haven't heard him call me that since our first date..

    _______

    05/20/11
    The First Date


    "So do you like Atlanta?" I walked around with him on the beach, looking at the water. Everything was so peaceful, like I wanted today to be. "It's nice..My parents seem to like it here.." I picked a spot to sit down and kicked off my flip-flops. He convinced me to go on a date with him, after countless cell phone calls. I'll admit it, he weighed me down. "What about you, Bieber?" He laughed, "Justin--." "Er, Justin..What about you?" He sighed, looking at the water. His eyes, mixed with the sunset? Hotter than hot. "I love it. I mean, yeah, I miss home..But it is how it is." I nodded, "Sea lo que sea." He looked confused, turning his head towards me. "Huh?"

    I laughed, leaning over, whispering, "Sea lo que sea...It is how it is..Papi." I pulled back, staring back at the water. "You're teasing me, aren't you?" I shrugged, sitting up and bringing my knees to my chest. "Maybe...I'll guess you'll have to figure it out on the next date." He seemed shocked, but smiled anyway. "So there is a chance with you! I thought I blew it." He ran his fingers through his hair, laughing softly. I shook my head, running my hand through the sand, letting it fall between my fingers. "Nah, you still got a chance, boy.."

    He leaned back on the palms of his hands, staring at the sun. "Do you have any other nickname besides Ivy?" Ivy had been my middle name. I just decided to go by it, seeing as though my first one was so common. "Nope." I mumbled. Justin grabbed hold of my hand and closed it off with his, fingers interlocked. "You do now, Dani."
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    :O Dramaaaaaaaaa. Cool update More please!!!
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