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    LOL "I want female company" and her motherly instincts Jessica sounds so awesome here!!! UPDATE!!!! Oh yeah some things u should know about her: she gets annoyed easily and when she is, she kicks things, she has a dolphin scream (seriously it's so high pitched it scared the c'rap outta me when I first heard it), and she has a special ability that allows her to say one thing and kill a fun atmosphere (all the girls call it Sica Effect)
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    Quote Originally Posted by live&lovemusic20 View Post
    LOL "I want female company" and her motherly instincts Jessica sounds so awesome here!!! UPDATE!!!! Oh yeah some things u should know about her: she gets annoyed easily and when she is, she kicks things, she has a dolphin scream (seriously it's so high pitched it scared the c'rap outta me when I first heard it), and she has a special ability that allows her to say one thing and kill a fun atmosphere (all the girls call it Sica Effect)

    thanx i like that Sica Effect!! I might jus form an idea on that!!!
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    I get up in the morning and find Jessica still sleeping. I look at the time and its 8:30. i sigh and head to the bathroom and start brushing my teeth when Jessica comes in.

    "Ood morwing," I say with my toothbrush in my mouth.

    "Same to you," she says grabbing her toothbrush.

    I spit and clean my face. I walk out and go to find something in my closet to wear. Jessica comes in my room and sits on the bed.

    "What are you doing," she asks.

    "Nothing finding clothes," I say. I know if i beat around the bush with her she'd get mad.

    "Why?" I can hear the annoyance in her voice.

    "Going out."

    "Where are you going?"

    "No where special."

    She stomps the floor and kicks my dresser. I bust out laughing and I look at her. She's pretty angry.

    "I love doing that," I giggle.

    "It really gets on my nerves," she says.

    "I know."

    "Again, where are youu going?"

    "Well after we went to sleep Justin pulled another "I Cant Sleep" call and he wants to take a trip to the fair. BUT he wants it to be only me and Trenton. And to be honest I'm freaking out," i say

    Her jaw drops. "OMG how cute," she says.

    "No because like I really like him and I had to do something about Sebastian so I sent Sebastian a text last night telling him I couldnt go to prom with him."

    "Oh yeah. Your phone kept beeping so i Checked it and you got a text from him," she says.

    I sigh and feel my heart fall to the bottom of my stomach.

    I grab my phone and check my phone and it sure is a text from Sebastian.

    Sebastian: Yeah i wuz feelin da same way... had feelings 4 Angel still. Really glad u snt me da txt.. i really lik jus bein ur friend... sry

    "He said he's happy," i say.

    Jessica laughs at me and I roll my eyes.

    I grab my phone and text him back "Great we can stil b friends".

    I go back to digging through my closet and I groan in desperation.

    "What's wrong?"

    "I cant find anything to wear," I sigh.

    Jessica rolls her eyes and goes to my closet and comes back out with a complete cute out fit.

    OUTFIT: Fair Day!!! - Polyvore

    "How long did that take," she ask.

    "Like a minute," i say with a grin.

    "Who's the best?"

    "Of Course that's Jessica."

    "Exactly."

    I laugh and go to the bathroom to bathe. When I come out I put on a little eyeliner, mascara, and lip gloss.

    I walk back to my room and put on the clothes Jessica found me. I look at the time 9:45.

    I slip on some socks and put on my converse.

    I look at myself in a mirror and I smile.

    "I'm a pure Fashion Genius," Jessica says from my bed.

    I look back at her and laugh.


    sry hav 2 go 2 Wal-mart with my mom. hope u lik Part 1.. part 2 comin soon!!!
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    Wow Walmart so late at night for u? Well I'll be waiting That was super awesome!!!!
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    I start freaking and I dont know why. Jessica the whole meanwhile laughs at me like something is funny.

    "I'm freaking," I say.

    "Just dont-"

    the doorbell rings. I whip around and scream and Jessica laughs again. I go downstairs grab some money and answer the door. Justin's in the doorway and he's holding Trenton.

    I smile and he smiles back.

    "Hey. Was he good?"

    "Didnt we already go through this?"

    I roll my eyes. i turn around and Jessica is there.

    "Hey do you want a ride home?" I ask.

    "No," she says and gives me a look that says I-want-all-the-details.

    I smile at her and tell her bye.

    I walk out with Justin and Trenton and when I try to grab him he pulls away from me.

    "Trenton?"

    Justin smiles at me. "He's mine now."

    "You stole my baby," i pout.

    he rolls his eyes and we get into his car. When I open the door I see a single rose propped up on the seat. I grab it and sit.

    "Hope you like it. I thought you would like it," he says.

    "I do," I smile.

    He says nothing but he smiles. I look back at Trenton and he's smiling. I look at him curiously and he smiles bigger.

    "So what are you working on?"

    "Well I just did the Remixes and I did the song with Sean and the new song with Chris," he says.

    "Yeah. How was it working with Chris Brown?"

    "He's super cool I like hanging with him."

    I nod.

    "Mommy?"

    I turn to him. "Yes?"

    "When are we getting to the fair," he says.

    "I dont know,' I turn to Justin, "Yeah Justin when are we getting to the fair?"

    He smiles at me. "Right now."

    I look at the window and I see the rides coming into my view. I hear Trenton ooin and ahhing from the back. I look at Justin and he has a content smile on his face. He looks back at Trenton and his smile becomes really big.

    I cant help but feel really happy in this picture. I sigh and take in everything about this moment. I wanna remeber it all.


    "Trenton come on it's not that scary," I say.

    I'm trying to persuade him to go into the Fun House and he's having a heart attack.

    "Let me take him," Justin tells me.

    "You wanna go with Justin?"

    he nods and he goes in with Justin. So far I've been on like 6 rides and Trenton takes turns with us.

    I see a nearby food stand and I see cotton candy. I walk over and pull out the money from my pocket and buy a big bag of it. I turn and see Chaz, Ryan, and Jessica stading behind me. I smile at them.

    "What are you guys doing here?"

    "I told them not to come," Jessica says.

    "What are you talking about," Chaz says, "You're the one that called us."

    I laugh and roll my eyes. I look over to the Fun House and Justin and Trenton walk out. I smile and Justin's carrying Trenton. He walks over and stands beside me.

    "Awww you three look so so so cute," Jessica coos.

    I blush crimson and Justin smirks.

    I look around and see a Ferris Wheel and I squeal. They all laugh at me.

    I grab Justin's arm. "We have to go on that ride."

    "Lets go," he says.

    We walk over and the ride has a limit and Trenton is to short.

    Chaz walks over. "You guys are so caugt up in the moment," he says with a roll of his eyes.

    he takes Trenton and Justin and I get on.

    We sit and I see Trenton and Chaz follow Ryan and Jessica to the Fun House again. I lean over the bar a little and look out at the fair grounds.

    "What are you looking at?"

    "The Unseen picture," I reply.

    "That is?"

    "I dont know."

    I turn to him and melt in his eyes. "Why are your eyes so hypnotizing?"

    "I dont know," he says.

    We sit there a little in a comfortable silence and he pulls the old "Movie" trick. He puts his arms around me and I look at him but he's looking away.

    I smirk and go on instincts. I grab his chin lightly and pull him my way. He looks startles and i was kissed him- or i was about to!!

    The freaking ride stopped. I looked down and people are screaming. I lean a little further trying to see if Trenton was down there with Jessica. I lean a little further and the bar opens. I would've fell to my death if Justin didnt pull me back in time.

    I get jerked back and I'm breathing hard. I'm hypervinilating and I dont have my inhaler. I start to freak.

    "Are you okay?"

    I shake my head no.

    Okay. The doctor said in through your mouth out through your nose count to ten.

    I start doing what I'm supposed to do and my breathing goes to better pace.

    The ride starts again and as soon as I'm off I vow to never go on again.


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    Where's Leah???

    Chaz and Ryan thought it was pretty funny and Jessica had to kill thier amusement with this thing we call Sica Effect. ((Scary stuff I fixed it!!!)

    "I cant believe you almost fell. What were you doing," Ryan asks me.

    I blush and look at the floor hoping it would open up and swallow me.

    "Trying to find you guys," I say.

    "Are you okay?"

    "Yeah. I'm fine can I have my Cotton Candy?"

    Chaz, Ryan, Jessica, and Trenton look at each other. I sigh and head back over to where I bought it the first time and Justin is on my tail.

    Why!?!!?

    "Can I have a bag of Cotton Candy, please," I say to the guy.

    "Large, medium, small?"

    Justin comes up next to me. "Hey. Are you sure you're alright?" He asks.

    "Yeah," I say trying not make eye contact.

    "You wanna go on another?"

    I think for a moment. "I'll go on in a few. Do yiu wanna take Trenton?"

    "I guess. But the next ride we all go on. Okay?"

    "Yeah yeah yeah."

    he laughs at me and we walk back to were the guys are standing.The boys all walk away and go get on some ride.

    "I saw what was happening up there," Jessica sings.

    I look at her and try not to smile. "What?"

    "You tried to kiss Justin," she says with a smirk.

    "No I didnt."

    "Dont lie to me. I saw it."

    I sigh. "Dumb ride."

    Jessica laughs at me. I look at her and laugh with her.

    "Like he didnt say anything about it."

    "He didnt?"

    "No. What if I just messed up?" i ask her.

    "I dont thinkyou did. I think you guys really have something. ALSO he LOVES Trenton," she says.

    "Total package. What guy wants another woman's kid?"

    "None."

    I laugh and we eat the cotton candy. The guys come out and we get some food to eat.

    we sit in this little area where they have chairs and tables.

    "Trenton come sit with me," i coo.

    "Mommy I wanna sit with Justin," he tells me.

    I swear I wanted to cry.

    "Please," I pout.

    He sighs heavily. "Okay."

    I shake my head. "Never mind I'm gonna sit with Jessica."

    He smiles and climbs in the space next to Justin. Justin looks up at me and gives me a weary smile and I glare at him.

    "What did I do?"

    I get up and leave.

    I can hear Chaz and Ryan laughing and I hear Jessica tell them its not funny. I hear her footsteps echo behind me.

    "What's up?"

    "Is it possible to love and hate someone for liking your kid?"

    She laughs at me. We go on a ride and head back to where the guys are.

    I eat and Jessica and I leave and do our own things.

    Justin: Did i do sumthin rong???

    I read the text and show Jessica and she saw awww. I roll my eyes.

    Meagan: no
    Justin: r u sure bcuz i dont want u 2 b mad @ me =(

    "He cares," Jessica says.

    I shake my head.

    Meagan: Yeah jus chillin
    Justin: u stil owe me a ride
    Meagan:Kk wich 1???
    Justin: the 1 2 ur lft

    I look and its a merri-go-round.

    Meagan: the merri go round??
    Justin: yup!!

    "He wants to go on the merri go round," I tell Jessica.

    "So go," she says pushing me to the line.

    She pushes me about halfway and i walk to the line and look for Justin and Trenton.

    "Hey," Justin says from behind me.

    "Hey. Ready?"

    "Let's go mommy," Trenton says dragging us to the ride.

    He picks a black horse with silver reins. "This one," he says.

    Justin picks him up and places him on. I sit on one of the chairs attached to the ride and Justin sits next to me.

    I look up at Trenton and he smiles at me.

    I glance Justin's way and he's looking at me. I turn and look at Trenton because he's giggling.

    "What's so funny," I ask him.

    "Justin stares at you weirdly," he says with a giggle.

    I glance at Justin and he's trying not to smile.

    "He does that because he's a weirdo."

    He laughs. "Why?"

    "I don't know he's crazy."

    "No. Why does he stare at mommy?"

    I look to Justin and he turns to Trenton. "Because mommy is beautiful."

    Trenton giggles and the ride starts. O stare at Trenton and I can totally tell hes enjoying his self.

    Justin stands with him and has his arms secured around Trenton so he doesn't fall.

    I imagine what someone who doesn't know who we are see. I bet they see a playful kid on a horse and the guy standing with him is his dad and me I'm the mom. Watching as my two boys mess around.

    But that's not the real picture. What they really see is a girl who got knocked up at a young age. A man who's in love with her kid. And a baby who loves them both.

    I laugh at myself for being so stupid and crooked. The ride ends. I get up an Justin'z helping Trenton off. I walk up to him and kiss him on his cheek.

    "Thanks," I say and with that I get off.

    Hope u enjoyed!!!!
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    LOL Haha u actually put it in there It's really Sica effect cuz her nickname is Sica, but it's all good I guess Loved the update!!! And isn't it like, almost 4 in the morning in Florida? R u really staying up that late?
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    Quote Originally Posted by live&lovemusic20 View Post
    LOL Haha u actually put it in there It's really Sica effect cuz her nickname is Sica, but it's all good I guess Loved the update!!! And isn't it like, almost 4 in the morning in Florida? R u really staying up that late?

    DANG!!! I was Soooo close o even went to look her up a little bit. I didn't kno she had surgery. I'm gonna fix it rite now. And I added a part to the end so now it's not cliffy. One sec.....

    Oh yeah it is 4 but I can't sleep. Soo I'm jus chillin on the computer what time is it where u live??
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ego36 View Post
    DANG!!! I was Soooo close o even went to look her up a little bit. I didn't kno she had surgery. I'm gonna fix it rite now. And I added a part to the end so now it's not cliffy. One sec.....

    Oh yeah it is 4 but I can't sleep. Soo I'm jus chillin on the computer what time is it where u live??
    Well I live in the West coast so it's 1 here And who cares if she had surgery? Jessica is still Jessica, even tho I don't like the thought of her having done that. AND U CANT GET A VOICE LIKE HERS THRU PLASTIC SURGERY CUZ SHE WUZ BORN WIT DAT AWESOME VOICE SO PSHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
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    Enjoyed the edit!!!! Waaaa... So cute....
    There's gonna be times when people tell you that you can't live your dreams. This is what I tell them:
    Never Say Never

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