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    Quote Originally Posted by Leahangeline View Post
    <33333 I LOVE THIS STORY! i love that Justin's accepting of trenton
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    Haha itsokay I have testing coming soon too..... Blahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! Good luck! And if u didn't get to check out Genie yet, DO IT NOW!!! And who do u like better, Ryan or Chaz? I wanna put ya w/ someone And hey, WHO AM I(?) GOIN TO PROM WITH????
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    We talk and talk like this for a while. We pull up to the side of the jet line and Justin gets out of the car. He stands there a while and I see a plane coming to land.

    “Hey that’s their plane,” he says opening up the car door.

    I jump out and go to the side Justin is on and we wait 5 more minutes for the plane to land and stop completely. We watched and the doors started opening.

    “OMG Justin I’m freaking out!” I say excited.

    He looked at me and smiled. “Why didn’t I get this excitement?”

    I laugh at him and stick my tongue out. We watch Chaz and Ryan get off the plane with their belongings. I start cheesing and can’t stop.

    Chaz and Ryan recognize me from afar and start making a run for it leaving the bags behind. They race to where I and Justin are and Chaz makes it first.

    I get two bear hugs and they hurt a lot. Like I think my back cracked. LOL

    “Omg Meagan long time no see,” Ryan says after he lets me go.

    “I know right she totally forgot about us,” Chaz says.

    “No I didn’t I just didn’t remember you guys. It been like 13 years since I seen ya’ll,” I laugh at them.

    We all laugh and they say hi to Justin. We all go back and help get their bags off the runway and get into the car. I hop to the back with Chaz.

    “So how has life been treating you guys in Canada?” I ask.

    “Well I mean we just graduated going to college and getting jobs,” Ryan says.

    “Yeah pretty much just living and enjoying it. What about you?” Chaz says.

    “Umm last day of school for me. I have prom and a date for it and I graduate in 2 weeks. I will always call Justin Drew Bear. That’s so fluffy. And I’m a mom,” I say.

    Chaz’s jaw drops and Ryan whips around in his seat to stare.

    “I know right of all the people in the world,” Justin laughs.

    “I envy the guy who has you,” Ryan says.

    “I’m single and the “father” left so I’m on my own but my baby gets all the love in the world from me,” I say.

    “Wow. Hey Ryan there’s still a chance for us,” Chaz laughs.

    “So how old is your baby?” Ryan asks.

    “He’s turning 3 on the 27th. His name is Trenton,” I say.

    “He’s the funniest, smartest, cutest two year-old ever,” Justin says.

    We all laugh and start talking about a place to go eat at.

    “Gosh how I wish I was your baby’s father,” Chaz says.

    “Are you crazy? You don’t want a kid right now. A lot of hard work,” I say.

    “Naw if it’s with you then it wouldn’t be bad.”

    “Chaz stop being a guy.”

    “Well do you want me to be a girl?”

    “Sometimes I wish my brother would turn into a girl. But yes I would like it.”

    “Maybe I’d get to be your best friend and spend the night in your room.”

    “Eww Chaz you’re so gross!” I exclaim.

    “Hey it comes with being a boy,” he says with a shrug of his shoulder.

    We all laugh at him and head over to a Red Lobster.

    Before we go in I call my house.

    “Hey mom how’s Trenton,” I ask.

    “Fine he’s sleeping right now,” she says.

    “Okay we just picked up Chaz and Ryan from the airport and we’re over at Red Lobster. I should be home in a few. Okay?”

    “Yeah, enjoy yourself.”

    “Okay tell Trenton I love him.”

    “You worry too much.”

    “Yeah because I know it’s my responsibility to take care of him and it’s not yours,” I say over the phone.

    “Well he’s okay so have fun,” she says hanging up the phone.

    I walk in and Justin is waiting for me at the entrance. I feel very overwhelmed and guilty because I was out here having fun and my baby might miss me. I think Justin can read the look on my face.

    “Hey you alright,” he asks.

    “No I think I’m gonna head home after this,” I say.

    “Why? The boys are gonna be mad at you.”

    “I’d rather them be mad then feel guilty about leaving Trenton all day.”

    He sighs and nods his head in understanding. We walk in and lucky us the restaurant is empty. No having to hide Justin.

    We sit and a male waiter takes care of our table. He’s cute and he tries to flirt, but that didn’t go so well.

    “What will you guys like today?” he asks.

    The guys order first and they take forever because they’re ordering buffets.

    “And what would you like beautiful?”

    I blush and start ordering when Justin cuts me off.

    “You gonna let him hit on you like that babe? Right in front of me,” Justin yells.

    I look at him in confusion.

    “Tell him you already have a boyfriend!”

    I’m not registering what’s going on and Ryan and Chaz are not helping. So I stare with my mouth agape like a fish out of water.

    “Dude back off my girl. Okay?”

    “S-sorry sir I d-didn’t know,” he stutters

    I feel so sorry for the guy. “He’s just playing,” I say with a smile.

    He smiles and scurries off. I look at Justin and him and the boys are laughing their brains out. I glare at them and they still laugh.

    “Oh come on you can’t lie, that was super funny,” Justin says.

    I laugh a little at the thought. When our food comes we have a new waiter and this erupts more laughter from my crazy table.
    We eat and finish our food. We drop the guys to the hotel first and Justin takes me home.

    “This has been a really fun day,” I say.

    “Yeah I haven’t had one of these in a while,” Justin says.

    I laugh at him. “Do you ever wish you were more normal like average?”

    “Yeah when I feel things getting rough.”

    I nod my head and totally understand where he’s coming from.

    “Do you feel that way sometimes?”

    “Yeah. All the time.”

    “Why?”

    “I don’t feel like I’m raising Trenton the right way and I feel so stupid to have been so young and have had a kid. I feel stupid and I – I don’t know if I’m giving my all,” I say to him.

    “Well if it helps I think you’re doing a fantastic job with Trenton. He’s really smart and funny,” he says.

    “Thanks.”

    He nods his head a little and a smile breaks out on his face.

    I don’t know but I think in that moment I start having feelings for Justin and I like them and hate them because I feel like I’m betraying Sebastian somehow.

    We get to my house and I look at the time and its 8:30. Everyone is in their rooms so we head to my room and I find a sleeping Trenton.

    “He’s so cute,” Justin says.

    I smile and gently pick him up out of his crib which makes him wake up. He smiles at me and gives me a kiss on the cheek.

    “Hey baby. Did you miss mommy,” I ask him.

    “Yes. Did Mommy miss Twrenton?” he asks me.

    “Yes I did. Were you a good boy today?”

    He nods his head and notices Justin in the room. His eyes get all big and crazy.

    “OMG Mommy that’s Justin.”

    Justin and he play around a bit and I laugh at them and the way they were totally in sync. They play a while and Trenton gets sleepy again so he goes to sleep.

    “How can you say you feel like you’re not doing a good job at being his mom?”

    I shrug and stare at Trenton. “I don’t know if I feel like I’m being a bad mom but I feel like my baby won’t be happy later because he doesn’t have a father. And when he’s older I don’t want him to be in school and everyone’s talking about their dad’s and he doesn’t have one. I-I just don’t want my mistake causing his life not to be a great one,” I say breaking into tears.

    He comes and envelopes me in a hug.

    “It’s okay,” he says as he rubs my back.

    I cry even more.

    “I think you raise him good and he’s lucky to have a mom like you.”

    I stop a little and just lay on his wet chest.

    “Thanks Justin. I’m sorry to bring you into my mess,” I say.

    “It’s okay. I don’t mind,” he says back.

    I lay there for a while and think of how nice it is and then I think it’s wrong to be on him like this and then I think to myself who
    cares? Because I didn’t.

    I lay there and listen to his heart, the way he breathes, and his humming of the song Beautiful Girls. I smile to myself and drift off.

    okay i sneaked this and i'm leaving now BYE!!! hOPE U LIKED!!!
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    Totally loved!!!! She's a great mom! I'll update soon as I can! I'm learnin a Kpop dance SUPER WORKOUT!!!!
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    LOLOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOO OLOOLLOLOLLOLOLLOLOLOLOL CHAZ CHAZ CHAZ CHAZ LMFAO. anyways.. she's a great mommy
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    "Meagan," I heard someone whispering my name.

    I crack open one of my eyes and see Justin.

    He smiles at me and I smile back.

    "Hey I'm gonna go back to my place and get some clothes. Can I bring Chaz and Ryan?"

    I nod my head and look at the time. 10 o'clock. DANG!!!

    I get up and walk Justin out the door.

    "I'll be back in like an hour be ready."

    "For what?"

    "Water Park," he says with a smile.

    I laugh and close the door and head upstairs.

    I walk to my bathroom and wash my face and brush my teeth.

    I go to my room and find Trenton playing toys and listening to Love Me.

    "Trenton?"

    "Where's Justin mommy? Did he leave because I didn't get up?" Trenton asks.

    I furrow my eyebrows. "No he went to get a few friends and some clothes and then he's coming back so we can go to a water park."

    He nods his head and goes back to his toys. I shake my head and find us some clothes to wear.

    I find my favorite black and neon colored monokini and a pair of black shorts with an orange tee.

    I find matching clothes for Trenton and get him ready.

    "Mommy is Justin your friend?"

    "Yeah," I say.

    I look at him and notice Trenton looking kinda puzzled.

    I set down what I'm doing and sit in front of him.

    "Are you alright sweetie?"

    He nods his head.

    "Are you sure Trenton?"

    He sighs. "I want a daddy."

    I almost cry out. He should've killed me.

    Hearing him say that hurts me and I embrace him. I never thought I'd have to face the day when Trenton wanted "Father Attention".

    "Is that what you want?"

    He nods lightly.

    I cry now and because I'm crying Trenton's crying too.

    I wipe my tears and sniff a little and grab a rag and clean Trenton's face.

    I dress myself and gradually Trenton and I go back to normal. I walk downstairs and make him a little snack.

    I call him down to eat and the house phone rings.

    "Hello?"

    "Hey Meagan its mom. I'm gonna need Trenton today for a party and I think I'll need him tomorrow," my mom says.

    "Why?"

    "Well Pattie and I are planning on taking a trip to Atlanta and we have family there and little Billy is having a party and I wanted to take Trenton and Pattie really wants to spend time with him. So?"

    "Well I guess. We were going to a water park today."

    "Oh. Call Malik tell him to watch Trenton. I'll be home in like 30 minutes."

    "Okay... Do you want me to pack his bags?"

    "No! Let's pretend he's my baby for the week."

    I laugh. "okay mom bye."

    I hang up and call my brother to come over and watch Trenton.

    My doorbell rings and I open it up and find the guys standing in the doorway.

    "Hey you guys ready," Justin asks.

    "I am. Trenton is going with our parents to ATL. So my mom wants him well rested. She says he has to stay."

    Justin pouts and call Trenton over.

    "Hey Trenton."

    "Hi Justin."

    "I want you to hold my chain for me until you get back. It brings good luck," Justin tells him.

    His eyes get really big and he squeals.

    Chaz and Ryan laugh.

    "Omg I have to tell Jessica about this." he says.

    He hugs Justin and we leave.


    “Justin you have to let me tell Jessica,” I say.

    “No. What if she goes like super crazy or something?”

    “I lied for you once I cant keep lying to her.”

    He groans and sighs. “Where does she live?”

    I squeal and give him directions. I call Jessica on my cell phone.

    “Hey girl get ready,” I say.

    “For what?”

    “I’m taking you to a water park and Drew and a couple friends are coming with us.”

    “Oh finaly I get to meet this Drew Bear,” she says sarcastically.

    “Yes! 15 minutes. Okay?”

    “Gotcha! Bye.”

    “Bye.”

    I hang up the phone and smile at Ryan and Chaz.


    Justin parks in Jessica’s driveway and I jump out of her car, take off my shoes, and open her door. I’m like family so I have a key to her house.

    I walk upstairs and Jessica is grabbing a pair of sandals.

    “Ready?”

    She jumps up and I laugh.

    “Don’t do that,” she says.

    I laugh a little more. “Here’s the deal Jess when you meet Drew no going crazy. Okay?”

    “Why would I go crazy?”

    “Please just don’t. He’s very sensitive about you treating him normal,” I say.

    “Okay I’ll treat him “normal”,” she says with air quotes.

    I laugh and we head down stairs and out the door and I grab my shoes.

    She sees his car and stops and drops her jaw.

    “Nice right?”

    She nods her head. “Justin Bieber has this car,” she says.

    I look at her through the corner of my eyes and size her a little wondering if she can take this. I think she can.

    “Normal,” I say reminding her.

    “Yeah yeah.”

    We walk to the car and she opens up the back door.

    “Hi,” Chaz and Ryan say together in unison.

    Jessica turns to me and lifts up her sunglasses off her face. The look on her face is priceless.

    “OMG!!!”

    I nod my head. “Come meet Drew,” I say.

    She comes to the front and opens the door shakily and when she does… she does it quietly.

    I wait for her scream but it never comes. I look over to Justin and he laughing. I turn Jessica around and she looks so awestruck.

    I laugh. “At least when you met him you weren’t running for your inhaler,” I say.

    She turns back to Justin. “She said normal and I’m really trying to hold back my scream but I don’t think it’s gonna happen. I won’t if you don’t want me to,” she says to him.

    “Get it out of your system,” he says.

    And she screams and screams and screams and screams.

    Jessica finally stops and clears her throat. “I’m good now.”

    We get in and she introduces herself to everyone and we ride on.


    OK like not the best chapter ever but its a filler. More Trenton stuff coming. I'll try to post another soon. But I'm not promising. I'm actually going to work on Smile For Me. soooo bye. o and enjoy!!!
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    Trenton....
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    I LOVED ITTTTTT Update cuz it was so cute and there was more Jessica!!!!!!
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    The park was GREAT!! I got wet, had fun, and laughed.

    “Jessica you gonna spend the night?”

    “Yeah. I have some clothes there right,” she asked.

    “Of course,” I say.

    “OOOO Sleepover,” Chaz yells.

    “Not for you Chaz-or you Ryan,” I say.

    “She didn’t say Justin,” Justin says in a sing song voice.

    We all laugh. “Sorry let me clarify that. No Boys Allowed,” Jessica says.

    The guys groan and Jessica and I laugh.



    I run in my house and Trenton is still there. I scoop him up in my arms and give him a million kisses.

    “Stop mommy. Stop,” he giggles.

    I stop and place him on his feet and he still has on Justin’s necklace.

    “Why didn’t my mom come to pick you up?” (She doesn’t like to be called Grandma.)

    “She said I didn’t have to go if I didn’t want to,” he says and then his attention turns to Jessica and the guys at the doorway.

    “Jessica,” he screams as he runs to her.

    She scoops him up and tickles him. I look at him and laugh. He goes to Justin and then Chaz and then Ryan. He basically played hot potato.

    “Its late we gotta go,” Justin says.

    Chaz sucks his teeth and slowly turns to look at Justin with a cross look. “They weren’t trying to kick us out and you ruin it,” he says playfully frustrated.

    We all laugh.

    “Can Trenton come with us?”

    I look at Trenton and he’s pleading with his eyes and I look at Justin and he’s doing the same.

    “Don’t let my kid have one scratch on him. Be back at 10,” I say sternly. (Mother instincts.)

    “Hey hey momma bear,” he jokes.

    Trenton runs upstairs and packs a bag and he’s down in like 2 minutes.

    He’s already at the door. “Umm Mister,” I say.

    “Yes mommy,” he says innocently.

    “Toothbrush?”

    “Yes.”

    “A clean shirt and pants?”

    “Yes.”

    “Hairbrush?”

    “Yes.”

    “Shoes?”

    “Yes.”

    “Towel?”

    “Yes mom! I have everything,” he groans.

    Jessica laughs and Trenton is out the door. “Trenton!!”

    He turns back at me. “Yes mommy?

    “I love you.”

    “I love you too mommy. Bye!”

    I look at Justin and give him a look that says if-my-kid-isn’t-in-one-piece-I’ll-kill-you and he nods. I smile and hug him good-bye.

    Jessica and I head to my room and after talking about our day a little we watch scary movies and she falls asleep and me right after her.


    My phone rings and I look at it and no who’s calling.

    “Why cant I ever sleep?”

    “Everyone is asleep and I want female company.”

    “You’re so weird,” I say.

    “Yeah. I know,” he says back.

    “Was Trenton good?”

    “Yeah. I love that kid.”

    I feel my heart go thump and I my feelings get deeper.

    “Thanks Justin. You don’t know just how much you’re helping him cope.”

    “With a dad.”

    “Yeah. Before you came he came out and told me he wanted a dad and it totally broke my heart,” I say.

    “He did,” I hear his voice get enthusiastic.

    “Yeah. How long are you in town?”

    “Till like the end of the summer.”

    “Oh.”

    “You wanna go to a fair tomorrow?”

    “Yeah. That’d be awesome.”

    “Yeah but can it just be me, you, and Trenton?”

    I gulp. “Yeah. I gotta go. Be here at 10 and I’ll be ready. Okay?”

    “Yeah okay. Good night Meagan,” he says quietly.

    “Good night and thanks Justin,” I say back before hanging up.

    I lie in bed and sigh. This guy has been here a week and I’m already falling. What do I do about Sebastian? I pull out my cell phone and text him.

    Meagan: I kno ur probly sleepin but I dnt thnk I can do prom w/ u. stuff happening an I dnt feel the same way. I’ll cal u 2morro 2 xplain, luv ya Sebastian. Jus wanna be friends.

    I send the txt and feel a whole lot better and I fall asleep.


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    i don't know if i love trenton or justin more in this story ahaha!
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    Aye turned to Swag, that cute 15 year old has grown into one fine
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    Quote Originally Posted by Leahangeline View Post
    i don't know if i love trenton or justin more in this story ahaha!
    Hahahahaha!!! glad u enjoy!!!!
    Dear Justin Bieber Haters,
    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue,
    I have five fingers
    and the middle is for YOU!!
    LOOOL
    My Fanfics:
    What Could Go Wrong?
    Smile For Me
    Love+JB=Death
    You're Great JB
    Dream BIG
    Random Short Fics

    The Geek is the new "IT"
    민호 or 珉豪

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