Thread: My Birthday gift to you, I'll give my life for you

k people, I was day dreaming in the shower this morning and changed it around about and has been thinking about thsi fanfic all through school today!!!
This is since Justin's Bday is tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Intro

The bullet pierced my body
an inch just below my heart.
I hear screaming, sirens, and the work of tools in my body.
But it doesnt help.
I told him I would give my life for him.
I hope he's happy.
My name is Whitney.
I am sixteen years old.
This is my story.

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Chapter 1!
Guys be happy- I actually wrote this down on a piece of paper before I wrote it!


February 20th 2011
Its a normal day in my boring rich people snotty town in California. I just finished my hair and am blasting the radio. My parents don't care, they don't even know. They leave for work before I wake up,and they come home after I'm in bed. I convinced them about a year ago to ditch the nanny. So its just me, in this big world, all by myself.

The song on the radio changes to that annoying Bieber kid. This Baby song makes me cringe, his voice is so high I'm convinced hes just a tall 12 year old pulling of being a short 16 year old. Girls cry just looking at him, he gets chased and loved by millions of girls. Its so stupid- hes just a random teenage boy.

I hear a knock on the front door and walk to it wondering who it is. Noone ever comes to the door. Even the mailman takes the mail to my parents work. I open the door to see several people looking excited. Including a boy holding purple flowers. Justin Bieber was on my front porch.


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Originally Posted by JBiebers_Shawtayyy

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thanks for the comment gurlie

OHHH i think im really gonna like this one :]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh I LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVElOVELOVE IT!!!!! U SHUD UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks for the nice comments guys, I really appreciate it since this is new.

I'll try to update after school today(and after soccer practice) I wanna pre write the chapter first(and probabally write up a new chapter for my other fanfic too!)

CONTINUE!!!!! UPDATE!!!! This shud be good Thanx 4 commenting on mine!

update


"Wh....what?"
"Whitney, you have been one of the lucky ladies who have won the opportunity to come to my seventeenth birthday party!"I had no clue what to say.
"Why would I want to go to your birthday party?" Justin smirked a me as if he was trying to be flirtatious
"Oh, so your not a fan?"
"No, I'm not."
"Well then, that makes you more special." He comes up close and caresses my face. I step back in digust.
"Kenny, put her on the VIP list." Then he took a silver bracelet from his back pocket and forced it on my wrist. The bracelet said Justin Bieber 17th Never Say Never in purple writing.
"This bracelet gets you into absolutely everything at the party."
"Fine Bieber I'll go, just to get out of this boring town for a while."
"You'll have a great time, I'm glad your coming Shawty." He winked at me. Why not have some fun.
"Stop flirting with me Bieber, its slightly tempting." He laughs.
"You have beautiful eyes by the way."
"Ehh...you arn't half bad yourself."
"Playing hard to get, I like that. K, sorry to disappoint you but I gotta go now Shawty."
"Aww, I'm sooo disappointed." He laughs, gives me the flowers and information about the venue of the party. I set it down then he pulls me into a hug. While were hugging he snatches my phone from my back pocket.
"Hey! Give that back!" He laughs, adds in his number and returns the phone to me.
"Text me when you begin to miss me."
"Unlikely." He waves and enters the limo with his bodyguard. I enter back in the house and look at the info- the party is February 27th. Seven days....


done!

ok I know you all are thinking text a bit, go to party, fall in love, date, happily ever after
Please dont pre guess this story! I have some nice twists
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OHHHHHHH NICEEEEE I like this Moreee?