Thread: First Sight?

AUTHORS NOTE- hi people! Its a Friday night and I have no plans and I have been brainstorming fanfic ideas so I thought I would try one- I hope it isnt bad



Whitney is walking though her local mall with her mom, they made plans to go get new jeans and several other things. She laughed lightly to herself as she watched some young teenagers taking pictures with the Justin Bieber cut out in the FYE store. She had always wanted to do that, but being sixteen she was on the older scale on the Justin Bieber fan group, so she was to nervous to do it.

Walking out of the Gap with her mom, Whitney sees this strange boy, looking slightly creeperish with a hat and a hood that covered half his face. And she kept seeing him more and more as she was coming in and out of stores. A small part of Whitney felt oddly pulled to the boy as she was watching him while she waited for her mom to come out of the restroom. She guessed she wasnt the only one as at that second two girls go up and start talking to him, her chance was missed.

But maybe not, he seemed to be trying to get away from the girls, but they werent letting up. Whitney decided to go help him, so she walks up behind him and tucks her arm through his, looked the girls straight in the eyes

"Umm, excuse me, why are you trying to hit on MY boyfriend?"
Whitney felt the grip from the boy grow tense, so she looked over to him and gave him the smallest wink ever. He seemed to have caught on.

"I wasnt doing anything.....Kelsey, I promise" Kelsey? Wierd, but she disregarded this.

"Dont worry....Micheal, I believe you. Now you two better should leave now or some real drama could go down,"

A confused look from the two girls as they left made Whitney laugh. The boy looked at her once they fully left.

"Thanks, I needed that. I'm Justin" He held out his hand for her to shake it, she did.

"No problem, you looked like you needed help. I'm Whitney"

"Well Whitney, as a thank you, I would love if I could escort you to lunch, my treat."

"I would love that, just let me tell my mom really fast"

She found her mom quickly and explained the situation. Her mom was fine but said to call her in two hours. Whitney walked back to Justin and said she could go.

"Awesome" he held out his hand for her to hold as they walked to the in mall resturant. She looked at him and smiled. He had very pretty eyes.


AUTHORS NOTE- was this good? please comment!

people, please just comment- I dont care if you think its horrible and ask me never to write again, I'm really nervous whenever I write and would just like people's opinions

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Whitney walks with Justin to the resturant enterance with little talking, What could she say to him? She doesn't even know this guy...

They get seated in a booth in the back- Justin requested it himself. Though Whitney had no clue why.

"So, Justin. Tell me about yourself"
"Uhh...you first"
"Well, I'm 16- a junior in high school. My life revolves around soccer and dance."
"I'm 16 too. When's your birthday?"
"May 27th"
"Haha I'm older than you. My birthday is in March." Whitney laughs lightly and says its it Justin's turn.
"I'm a singer- thats my life"
"Will you sing for me."
"Maybe later." And he winked at her.

They talked more about their lives. Family, siblings. They learned they both have half siblings. But Whitney is the youngest and he's the oldest. Suddenly a question popped in Whitney's head.

"Will I ever see your full face? Your hat covers alot of your face" Justin sighs and stays quiet for a second.
"Promise not to scream."
"Why would I....." Whitney began to speak as he took off his hat. She was stunned in silence with her eyes bugging out of her head a little. But she kept her promise not to scream, and tried her best to keep her cool. But her heart was beating a million miles a minute. He laughs lightly. She was sure he could hear her heart beat. Whitney was right

"So...your a fan?"
"I dont wanna sound to crazy and scare you off" Justin scoots closer to her and puts his hand over her beating heart.
"Why would I want to leave?"
"Just because theres 50 billion girls like me, your probabally tired of them."
"I never grow tired of my fans, espicially ones like you..."
"Like, me?"
He was about to reply but was cut off as Whitney's phone rang

"C***, my mom." She said sorry to her mom and tried to calm her down- to little effect. Whitney was yelled at to leave that very instant.

"I'm sorry Justin, I have to go. It has been truly amazing meeting you. Thank you for lunch. I will never forget it."
"I will never forget you. Hey...can I have your number? His last words were in a whisper almost like he was nervous. Mentally Whitney was freaking out, but she tried her best to keep calm, as if famous celebrities asked her for her number all the time.

"Sure....." She gave it to him and it was settled
"Thank you so much, it was great meeting you Whitney." He pulled her into a goodbye hug. It was a very nice hug. But as she began to pull away he gave her the smallest kiss on the cheek. Her cheeks reddened like non other and her heart started racing.

"Haha, I like your heart beat. Its cute. Bye Whitney. I will text you."
And with a final wave Whitney ran to meet her mother.

Originally Posted by MorgLiz

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Thank you for the comment! And your story "Who wants to be my baby" is one of my absolute faves!!!

BRilliant!
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Morreeee (:

Amazing story! Please update soon

Another update I'm updating alot now because I'm gonna be pretty busy the rest of the weekend

oh and I think I'm gonna switch to 1st person. 3rd person is a bit hard



I hop into her mom's car, absolutely estatic

"Honey, your face is red as a tomatoe and you can't stop smiling. Who was the guy?" I really didnt want to tell my mom I met Justin Bieber, not yet. I mean when will I ever see him again?

"He was great, but I'm keeping him to myself"
"I dont get any details? Wow, sometimes my mom can act like a teenager about this kind of stuff
"Fine. His eyes are amazing"
My mom let the conversation go after a couple more comments- Thank goodness. After some internal fighting I decide to keep Justin a secret, even froom my best friend Gaby. This will be the hardest secret of a lifetime. But telling people I practicially went on a date with Justin Bieber, I dont think that is a great way to start a conversation. I felt like I was looking at my phone way to much for the rest of the night. Bad thoughts kept bringing me down.

What do you think, hes JUSTIN BIEBER for gosh sakes, he has celebrities, millions of fans, why would he think twice about me/

these bad thought were to much for me so I head off to bed a bit early, trying to fall asleep with my lunch date replaying in my head. All of a sudden as I'm in that state of conscience/non conscience I hear the infamous vibration of my cell phone. I groggily roll over and grab my cell, and wake instantly reading the message

Hey Baby, Its Justin <3

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