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    Hey guys. Well this is another story. But this one is a little diffrent. Its kind of based on an experience. Well I really hope you like it. And while you read, heres a song that goes with the story: YouTube - Taylor Swift - You Belong With Me
    Now this song and the video goes perfectly pretty much with everything that goes on.
    Well here we go. enjoy and please post your comments

    Chapter 1
    JAZMIN

    5 years before, Summer

    It was summer. the time that everyone loves. A long break, No school and sunshine all the way. But it was almost over. And it was indeed that time again to begin to send your paperwork for school. You always have to come and meet all the teachers and picking up more papers then you came with.

    But Never mind all that. I was excited. I was going to be starting the 5th grade. I had alot of friends, and was really looking forward to all the new one I would make.

    My mom took us both in our mini van and headed to school. I dont know what it was, but i really wanted to be there that day. It could have been the fact that my friends were going to be there. Or it could have been the fact that I was going to meet the new people. But whatever the reason, i kept pestering my mother saying we just had to be there on time.

    I lowered the window and a blast of warm air fill my lungs. It felt really nice.
    Usually, my mom would tell me to raise the window up, that too much air was bad. but even she didnt say that. It just felt too perfect.

    The sun shone through the open window and made me smile. I was really happy with my life. I had a nice family. My mom, my dad, my two silbings. I had friends. I had a nice home. It felt great. I just continued to smile at the sun and the true blue sky, as my mom sang along to the radio. It was a truly excellent day.

    Our mini van trudged up the hill, to where my school stood.
    And then finally, we were there.
    My mother parked the van, and pulled the key out of the ignition. she smiled over at me and said, "Ready to see your friends again?"
    I smiled at her, and nodded.
    "Oh yes."
    She laughed. I opened the door to the car, and ran out to the school. The first person i saw, was Hallie, one of my school best friends.

    "HALLIE!!" I yelled.
    She saw me, and ran towards me, her hands already extended.

    "JAZMIN!!"

    We both smiled and began to talk about summer. As we continuted to walk thorugh the school, we found more friends. Kayla, Morgan, Gabby.

    They were all there. We walked out to the playground, and played out there for a long time.

    Then, Hallie had to leave. and pretty soon everyone else did too.
    So I walked back to school. The second I walked in I noticed something, kind of off. He was there. Standing right there, by the school office. With hiis older brother! Justin.

    My heart began to pound. And the smile began to form. As ecxited as I was, I knew i had to calm down. So I kept my cool and walked over to them.

    "Hey!" I said happilly.
    Justin looked over at me.
    "Hey, Jazmin! What's up?"
    "i could ask you the same question! Why are you here?" I looked up at his face.
    He smiled widely.
    "We're going to be coming here for school next year!"
    I laughed suprised.
    "Really? That's great!!"

    We both hugged eachother and did a happy dance. This was going to be great.

    Present

    I walked to Mr. Swanson's Class, feeling down. There he was. With his girlfriend. They were flirting and laughing. My stomach felt queezy. It's so hard, to walk through pretending I dont care. when in fact I do care. In my head all i could ever seem to say was Justin, YOU BELONG WITH ME.

    If you could see that im the one that understands you, been here all along so why cant you see, that you belong with me, you belong with me.

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    Well hope you guys liked it please comment.
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

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    ohhhhhh!!! This is really good! I love it so far! I can't wait to see where it goes! And I love Taylor Swift!
    February 9, 2011 shall be an amazing day (:

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    Quote Originally Posted by shawtymane View Post
    ohhhhhh!!! This is really good! I love it so far! I can't wait to see where it goes! And I love Taylor Swift!
    Hahah thank you!! Lol I,cant wait to see where it goes either... Even tho its my story.. Lol I love her too! That song is awesome.. It describes me perfectly lol.. Yeah. I just thought itd be cool to, write a story like mine usin justin.
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

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    This is cute, Jaz(:

    "I always thank God for giving me this opportunity and for blessing me with this talent."

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    Like it! Update )
    So I just wanted to tell that if you guys want me to edit your
    photos, make avatars/signa's or other graphics then just ask

    Cause this life's too long and this love's too strong
    So baby, know for sure that I'll never let you go...



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    You guys make it worth it to update lol ur comments make me smile. So for all u beliebers and readers LEGGO! On with chapter 2
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

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    Update for you.
    Chapter 2

    Jazmin


    Present

    Youre on the phone with your girlfriend shes upset. Shes going off about something that you said, cause she doesnt get your humor like i do

    Amanda. Her perfect hair, her shiny red lips, the gorgeous girl. Also the girl with the most rumors. And shes dating Justin. I dont understand how he could date her. Shes just so... Not always sweet. She flirts with everybody and she thinks too fully of herself. Its not to say that they arent cute together, but her personality isnt the nicest.
    Right then she was angry. She was looking at Justin harshly. I knew why. It was luch time at school and they had both been eating lunch across from me in the hallway. Justin had said a funny joke that Amanda took personally and she was pissed. justin hung his head low in shame.

    "Justin. I can not believe you." Every word said with anger dripping. She got up from her spot on the floor and tossed her perfect blonde hair. She walked away, obviously pissed.

    "Wait!!!! Mandy! I didnt mean it that way!"

    she turned herself around and stared coldly at him.
    "Save your breath." She spat out, then turned on her heel, her boots clicking together.
    Justin just stared her.
    I guess she just doesnt get you. And your humor. I said just to myself, before getting up and walking away to class.

    And she'll never know your story like I do...

    Justin and I grew up together. He had moved into the house next door when I was only 3. Since then we had been good friends.

    *flashback*
    "Justin!" His mothers voice resounded outside. She was looking for her tiny 4year old child, who once again had managed to escape.
    KNOCK KNOCK!
    My mother came to the door, sure of who it would be.
    "hey Janell is Justin here?" Pattie asked.
    my mother smiled, and pulled the door farther open. Sure enough there he was. Smiling wide. A crayon in his hand. Laughing. Under the table with me. Pattie smiled. She could always count oon finding him here. Because back then, me and Justin were best friends.

    "Mommy." Justin said. He slid out from under the table and ran to her. He hugged her tight then looked back at me. I was now standing by my own mommy. In my tiny green sundress and bare feet.

    "bye bye, Jathmin!" He said, his tiny hand waving at me.
    "bye bye, Juthin!" I said. My tiny hand waving. Then we both hugged eachother, only as little kids do. We kept saying bye to eachother, trying to stall for time. So he wouldnt have to leave. But our moms knew us. Pattie grabbed justins hand, and they finally said their last goodbyes. Then the door was closed and I could only hope for tommarrow.
    *flashback ended*
    but that of course was long ago. I hadnt hugged Justin in over 2 years. And I had a feeling I wouldnt get to, anytime soon.
    *******
    so guys what you think? Real story line will set in in the next chapters. I"ll be jumping back in time some, but not as much. Its to lead up to what is happening now.. Well I really hop you liked it. Comment
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    Really like this story(:
    Great update.
    P.s. This has nothing to do with the story but there is cold air coming in through my window. Ha

    "I always thank God for giving me this opportunity and for blessing me with this talent."

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    Love it ;-)
    So I just wanted to tell that if you guys want me to edit your
    photos, make avatars/signa's or other graphics then just ask

    Cause this life's too long and this love's too strong
    So baby, know for sure that I'll never let you go...



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    Quote Originally Posted by Biebersfavoritegirl View Post
    Really like this story(:
    Great update.
    P.s. This has nothing to do with the story but there is cold air coming in through my window. Ha
    awww thanks haha that was random
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

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