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    Chapter 17
    Jazmin
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    the Next morning, I woke up in Justin's arms.
    It felt weird, it did. I never thought I would have him so close.

    Last night was crazy. My heart was beating so fast, and I was being shot with adrenaline.
    When he kissed me, my heart basically stopped, and when he told me, his heart was beating really fast because it found me, I stopped breathing.


    Never in a million years, did I think he would start to like me. That was only, always just a fantasy.

    But now it was real. I was in the arms of Justin.

    I looked up at him. His eyes were closed, and he was breathingly lightly, with a smile on his face.

    Must be dreaming nice.


    I looked over at my clock.

    It read, 6: 30 AM.

    I didn't want to wake him but I knew if I didn't soon, his parents would start to worry.

    It was the 23 of December now, just 2 more days until Christmas. And I think I might be getting my gift after all.


    "Justin." I whispered quietly.

    He didn't stir.

    "Justin." I siad louder.
    Still nothing.

    I tried to wake him, but he wouldn't budge.


    So I leaned down and I kissed him.
    My heart was beating really quickly.


    Finally his eyes fluttered open.
    And he started kissing back.

    Then he pulled away.

    "Well that's a way to be woken up."

    I gigled and smiled at him.

    "Morning."

    "What time is it?" He asked.

    "6:32."

    "Shoot. I gotta get home."

    He got up and pushed a hnd through his short hair.

    He gave me a grin and stuck out his arms.


    I walked into them and hugged him.


    "Thank You, for telling me." He whispered.

    "Thanks for not pushing me away." I whispered back.

    he nodded.

    "Hey wanna do something today?"

    I felt myself grin.

    "Of course."


    'Okay, well I'll text you later. Gonna go get a couple more hours of sleep."

    He winked at me, then stepped foreward, leaning down to kiss me.

    ANd I swear, everytime he's kissed me since yesterday, shocks of electricity rub my whole body.


    "Bye, Jazmin."

    "Bye, Justin"

    He went back through the window then was gone.
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    i'm sorry. I know that sucked.
    And there's some typos, and the format is off.

    But The dumb thing won't let me edit it!
    Anyways next chapter shall be better Promise(:
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

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    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

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    Present
    Chapter 18

    Jazmin
    Fast foreward 2 months Later. We were still friends. Talking and laughing, and flirting alot. But another girl had entered his life. He had gone with her to a school event, and I felt heartbroken. but he said they were just friends. I never knew what we were. I could never figure it out. but I knew he something for me. At least some feelings.

    that morning, on Valentine's day I walked by him in the halls. He grabbed my hand and spun me around.
    "Hello, Beautiful." I giggled.
    "Hello to you too."

    "I have something for you."

    I must of been in shock, because he took my hand and led me to his locker.
    He opened it up and pulled out a big fluffy bear, roses, and chocolates and handed them to me.

    I smiled so wide!

    "Happy valentine's Day, Jazmin."
    Then he leaned down and kissed me right there in the middle of the hallway, in front of everyone.

    Then he did somehting else-

    He bent down on one knee, and he pulled out a little shiny band.
    He placed it in my hand, and then in a loud voice so everyone could hear, he said:

    "Jazmin Castro, Will you be my girlfriend?"



    then I woke up..

    Not real.

    None of it was real.

    Everything was a dream.


    In reality, I was still back to telling Justin the truth. Way back to my bedroom.

    I had imagined everything.
    From the way Justin felt exactly, to the kiss and now this.

    Had I really gone so fast foreward, so quickly thinking up all of this?


    I pinched myself, and looked foreward. Yep, everything.


    He hadn't kissed me, he hadn't even held me close. Everything he was thinking, was just a figment of my imagination.


    Justin Drew Bieber, my best friend, was actually standing in front of me, in my bedroom, just asking me what the truth was.
    And I was so mad at myself.

    I looked at his face, and he was waitng. Waitng.


    "I looked at him directly.

    "Justin drew Bieber, I love you. I really do. I always have and always will. Please don't hate me?"


    He stepped foreward and looked at me.

    "Jazmin, I don't hate you. I could never hate you. But I just don't feel the same way about you. maybe I had a little crush on you before. But I don't love you. I'm really sorry."


    And just like that, like a bucket of ice all over my body, I was shocked and put straight.

    My heart was officially cracked in one thousand pieces.

    And I had entered, an unrequitted love.








    (( Comment? Big twist!
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    current stories:
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    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
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    wow! amazing twist!
    updatee!

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    Chapter 19
    Jazmin

    Present

    He left.
    Right back through the window. And I swear, I have been laying here for hours.
    A full on depression has hit me, and my mind is going insane.
    Why?

    The morning came, faster than I though. I hadn't gotten a minute of sleep.
    when the alarm sounded, I stayed in bed. I slowly hit the snooze button 4 times, until finally I just let it play. I felt like a zombie.


    My mom burst through the door at around 7:45, wondering why I wasn't even up yet.

    "I'm sick."

    She didn't buy.


    I slowly got out of bed.

    And walked up to my mirror.

    There were big bags under my eyes. And I just looked horribly pale.

    I pulled on a northface jacket, and Yoga pants and let my hair fall around me.


    There was no point in looking good. There was no point at all.

    I walked to school, kicking my feet and looking blantly at the ground.

    When I got to school, I was late.

    I could care less.

    I hid in thesame bathroom for half of first period, until I realized I might get caught.

    I walked into class, and slipped in the back.

    The teacher gave me a dirty look and asked why I was late.
    I just shook my head, and banged my head on the desk.

    I pulled the hood on and zipped it all the way.
    And then looked out the window.

    The bell rang.

    I walked out last.


    Justin walked down the hall.

    I died inside.

    He accidently banged into my backpack.

    I almost cried.

    He said I'm sorry.

    In my head I thought: Sorry isn't enough.

    Out loud I said, its fine.

    He gave me a sad look.
    I felt the hot tears form.

    He walked away.


    I ran.




    To the bathroom.




    The day was not even half over...





    4 other times, I had runins with him.

    And everytime, It was the same.


    The next day I called in sick.

    Because I was. So love sick.


    Woe is me, my stupid reality.
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

    current stories:
    *Puerto rican New Yorker
    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
    Just Speak ( by/with :cinderellaswag)
    Stuck in Detention!!! (By/with: Nani15 & with Belieber_Forever<3)

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    omg! Justin just like needs to be with her like now! Loved it! Please update! (:
    Read my story "The Kid NextDoor: I Never Thought I'd Love Him" and
    "I am Falling for Him, but Why Him?" hehe thanks!!! (: <3

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    OMG
    I'm completely hooked on this story! How did I not see it before?
    I read through the whole thing and the twist! WHoa!! That was unexpected
    But somehow I also wish that what she dreamed was true... He should love her dammit! Stupid boy :P

    Truly loving this story
    You gotta update please!! <3


    A Summer Like No Other ~

    "You can’t help who you fall in love with <3"

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    Quote Originally Posted by lovejustinsswag View Post
    omg! Justin just like needs to be with her like now! Loved it! Please update! (:
    He should be right?!
    I lol updating soon!
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

    current stories:
    *Puerto rican New Yorker
    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
    Just Speak ( by/with :cinderellaswag)
    Stuck in Detention!!! (By/with: Nani15 & with Belieber_Forever<3)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rukiauzumi View Post
    OMG
    I'm completely hooked on this story! How did I not see it before?
    I read through the whole thing and the twist! WHoa!! That was unexpected
    But somehow I also wish that what she dreamed was true... He should love her dammit! Stupid boy :P

    Truly loving this story
    You gotta update please!! <3


    I know right?!?!? Why can't he see how much she loves him! D:
    Haha.

    Thank You!! )I'll updating in a bit!
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

    current stories:
    *Puerto rican New Yorker
    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
    Just Speak ( by/with :cinderellaswag)
    Stuck in Detention!!! (By/with: Nani15 & with Belieber_Forever<3)

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    Chapter 20
    Present
    Jazmin


    I woke up in a cold sweat, after a bad dream. I was sick. My temperature high, and my throat clogged up.

    I felt absolutely awful.

    But my only outlet was writing. It always had been.


    I grabbed one of the notebooks from my closet flipped to a clean page and began to write.


    [B]Maybe its in the way you smile. Or in the way you say my name. Or how you laugh at the sight of something funny, and how contagious its become to be around you. Maybe its the way you look at me, when confusion has gotten the better of you, or the way you know exactly what you want out of life. Could it be the silly way, you just know what will make me laugh hard, or the way you beg me, you push me to try something new? Could it be the way you tease me, to make me feel like its only me? Maybe its charm, that you've worn in so well. How jokes and mentions will come so easy to say. How you can be serious, and inspire something of me, and you make it sound so easy to chase dreams. Maybe its the way your eyes shine, when you look right at me, or the way a thousand words could never quite describe a simply picture at a click if a button, with your own touch. Could it be that I don't even know why anymore? That some how I've fallen in head first, and now everything happens with no reason? How happy I am, with just a single thought of having you near? Could it be that I already have a sense, of how bad I'll miss you're gone. Maybe its how easy I can remember, after months without thinking, how much I actually love you. But I guess there is no real reason. Its all these things, but never just alone. Theres a million and one reasons why I could love you. But my favorite%
    Last edited by Pickmejb004; 10 May 2012 at 07:24 PM.
    Credit to AmyToria! <3 THANK YOU!

    current stories:
    *Puerto rican New Yorker
    *These Barriers of Yours I'm Tearing Down.. Don't Stop Me
    * Will You Hold Me Close? (Sequel to Under The Mistletoe)

    Co-written stories:
    Just Speak ( by/with :cinderellaswag)
    Stuck in Detention!!! (By/with: Nani15 & with Belieber_Forever<3)

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