Thread: Completely Unexpected

Well.... this is my second fan fiction ever, first one on here. I'm a terrible writer, I just thought of a cool story and I wanted to write it out. haha. I hope you like it. It's a love story, but it also has some drama and horror in it too, hence the title 'Completely Unexpected' haha.


Here's an introduction:

My name is Ashley Bennet. I am 16 years old. I’m short, 5’4. I’m thin with long blond hair and bright blue eyes. I live in Oakland, California with my parents. I’m an only child. I always wanted a brother or sister, probably because I wasn’t the kind to make very many friends. I have only one friend, but we’re close. We’re practically the same person. She’s my best friend for life. Her name is Anita and she’s 16 as well. Today is July 20th, my parents’ wedding anniversary. They’re going out to dinner at a fancy restaurant. I guess that’s a better way to spend their evening than how they usually spend it, with late business trips to the office. They worked in the same office. They’re engineers for some big company, Jason Engineering.

I’m sitting on my bed, listening to my iPod and texting Anita. The song ‘Jesus of Suburbia’ by Green Day is playing, my favorite. My mom knocked on my door and walked in. “Hey sweetie, we’re about to leave. There’s some spaghetti in the fridge if you get hungry.” “Thanks mom, have fun tonight with dad. I love you!” “I love you too sweetie, so much!” and with that she gave me a big kiss on the cheek. “Mom!” “Sorry sweetie. I’ll let you go now. Your dad is probably waiting for me in the car anyways.” “Okay mom, bye.” I put my headphones back in and went back to texting Anita. I eventually went downstairs to get some spaghetti.

I took my spaghetti up to my room. As I was walking back to my bed, I saw a car pull into my driveway, and it wasn’t my parents. I started to panic. Who was in this mysterious car? I was watching the car with terror in my eyes, as a grown man, about 50 years of age, stepped out. My heart was racing and my hands began to shake. I watched as the man walked up to the front door. Oh how I hoped it was locked. I heard the doorbell ring and I walked downstairs to look through the peephole. I’ve never seen this man before. Maybe he works with my parents. I was still torn on whether to open the door, or run and hide. “Mrs. Bennet? Are you home?” I decided on opening the door, seeing as he knows my name. I opened the door and the man removed his hat. “Ashley Bennet?” “Yes?” “I have some terrible news, I’m so sorry…”


Soooooo, that's my first JB fan fiction Let me know what you think!! Should I post more? or is it not very good? - Ashley

Ohhhh it sounds goood, i love it so far(: Keep it up!

Thank you!!! <3 I'm writing more now!

Chapter 1


I collapsed. I woke up on the couch, with a blanket over me, and found that the man had left. Was that all a dream? Was there really a man? And did he really tell me that my parents were murdered? And that the guy got away? I sat there in shock, not knowing what to think, until I saw a note on the coffee table.

‘Ashley Bennet, I have made arrangements for you to move to Atlanta, Georgia to live with your grandmother. You should start packing your things once you’ve read this note. I’ll have the furniture and everything sent to your grandmother’s house. There’s a plane ticket and some money in an envelope on the kitchen counter. Your plane leaves at 1:30 tomorrow afternoon. I have arranged for a taxi to pick you up at 12:30. Again, I am deeply sorry for your loss. – Joe Albert’

So it wasn’t a dream. None of this had sunk in yet. I instantly called Anita and told her all about the man and the note and everything. “You’re leaving!!!??!!?” “That’s what the note says.” That’s when it hit me. I just lost both my parents, and now I’m leaving my best friend. I started crying, like hard legit crying. “When do you leave?” “Taxi…is..p..p..picking me up a..at.. 12:30” “I’ll be right over.”

After only about 10 minutes the door flew open and Anita walked in. She ran over to me and gave me a big bear hug. I could tell, by the redness in her eyes, that she had been crying too. “I’m going to miss you so much!” “I can’t believe you’re leaving!” “Neither can I!” “Did the man last night tell you why your parents were murdered?” “He said that they don’t know why, and the fact that the murderer got away makes it even harder to figure out.” “Wow. That’s so terrible!” “I know!” “Does the man know that your grandmother is 94 years old??!” “I don’t know, but she’s the only family I have left, so she gets custody of me.”

Anita helped me pack my luggage and I got the put the envelope in my bag. “Well buddy, I guess this is it.” “You make it sound like we’re never going to see each other again! We can still talk on the phone and text each other; it’s not the end of the world. It could be worse.” “Yeah, you’re right; I’m just going to miss hanging out with you.” I gave her a giant bear hug. “I’m gonna miss you.” “I’ll call you every day!” “Good!” Just then the taxi pulled up in front of my house. “I guess it’s time.” “Yeah…” “Goodbye Ashley, have a safe trip, and don’t replace me with a new best friend in Atlanta! Haha!” “Haha I wouldn’t do that! I put my luggage in the back of the taxi and stepped in. I rolled down the window and waved one last goodbye to my best friend.

Tell me what you think!! - Ashley

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and you're not a sucky writer
you're an amazing writer actuallyy
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haha wow you guys are so kind!! I'm gonna try to write a couple chapters right now.

Chapter 2


The taxi pulled up at the airport and I paid the driver and retrieved my luggage. I looked at the doors to the airport and let out a big sigh, this is it. I’m leaving California, and who knows if I’ll ever be back. I proceeded to the counter to check my luggage and I made my way through security. I hope I don’t have to sit by a creep on the plane. I looked at my watch. 1:35. ****! I ran to the gate and handed the man my ticket. Fortunately, they were running a little behind. I walked down the aisle towards my seat, finding someone already in it….

“Excuse me?” I tapped the boy on the shoulder. He was wearing a hoodie, cap and some nice shades. Why was he wearing shades, we’re inside the plane, and it’s dark outside. The boy turned to me. “Oh sorry!” The boy removed his carry on from the seat next to him. “Did you want the window seat?” “Oh no, it’s fine.” I sat in my seat and pulled out my iPod. I put it on shuffle. ‘Good Riddance (Time of Your Life)’ by Green Day started playing. I guess that song was appropriate to the situation. The boy pointed to my iPod “Green Day? They’re pretty good.” “Yeah, they’re my favorite band.” I put my iPod away “Nice. I’m Justin.” “Ashley.” “Nice to meet ya, Ashley. Where ya headed?” “Atlanta, I’m going to live with my grandma. You?” “Where in Atlanta does your grandmother live? I live in Atlanta.” He smiled at me. “She lives over in Westside. It’s somewhere by a McDonalds.” “Wait, does she have a cat?” I looked at him with a confused look. “Yeah...” “I live right next door! She pays me to feed her cat when she’s away.” “Really? Wow, so we’re going to be neighbors!”

Justin and I talked a lot about different things from Green Day to places in Atlanta he would show me to people I should meet. The plane landed and Justin and I walked together towards baggage claim. We retrieved our bags. “Ashley, do you have a ride?” “Not really, I was just going to call a cab.” “You could ride with me, we’re going to the same place, so why not?” “Yeah, sure, that’s a good idea.” I smiled at him. He still had on his hoodie, hat, and shades. Suddenly he grabbed my arm and pulled me towards the door. “We need to leave. NOW.” “What? Why?” I turned around and all I saw was a nice looking family with a boy about 4 or 5 and a girl about 7 or 8. Once we were outside, Justin pulled me across the parking lot to a nice looking Range Rover. This dude had good taste. “What happened back there?” “Did you see what that girl was wearing?” I thought back to the girl and tried to remember. “It was a Justin Bieber shirt. “Who’s Justin Bieber? And what was so bad about her shirt?” Justin looked at me like I was the stupidest person ever. “Have you seriously heard of Justin Bieber!?!” He removed the cap and glasses and he looked at me like he was waiting for some sort of reaction. I just smiled. “No, sorry, never heard of him.” He reached over and opened the glove box in front of me. He pulled out a CD, put it in the CD player, and pressed play. “This is Justin Bieber.” Justin was watching me, like he wanted to see my reaction to this ‘Justin Bieber’ guy. “When I met you girl my heart went knock knock…” Hmm… he’s different. He sounds like he’s about 12. Why did he want me to listen to some little boy sing. This is kinda awkward. “Am I missing something?” Just then Justin started singing along to the song. “Imma be your one guy, you’ll be my number one girl, always making time for you….” “You’re Justin Bieber!?” “Took you long enough! Now you see why we had to get out of there?” He laughed. “Wow. So you’re a singer?” “Have you ever heard the song ‘Baby’? “Is that the one that goes “Baby, baby, baby ohhhhh!” I sang a line from the song. “Yeah, that’s my song.” “Woah really, that’s so cool! Wait, that guy is like mega popular.” haha. He smiled. “So that’s why you were wearing all that.” I pointed to his glasses and hat. “haha yeah, just imagine what would have happened if that girl saw me.” My eyes widened. “haha yeah, it wouldn’t be pretty.” “Wow.” So Justin Bieber is my neighbor....this could get interesting.

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