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    HEEEYYY! so my old story got deleted... right after a car accident scene...lol...and so i decided to start a new onee...enjooyyy.....


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    Sewing a broken heart back together hurts, sometimes you feel the sharp pain of the needle more than other times, and sometimes the pain is unbearable, almost like trying to mend yourself wasn't such a good idea, but when you are done you realize that the finishing result made everything worth it.


    Hey its Ella here....god i hate my name so much.. i have everyone call me Madison...well Maddy...which is short for Madison, which isn't even my name...but i wish it was. wow, i ramble...anyways, i have lived with my dad foooorr....abouuuuut....8?9? 9ish months, since my parents got divorced...people are all like "bla bla bla...im so sorryyy" i really don't care, i saw it coming. my mom didn't care for me and she was out of work, where as my dad was just a bit over protective and CONSTANTLY worked, i barely ever see him, but its better here than with mumzi. we moved ALLL the way to atlanta...yes, home of THEE justin bieber, my friends had informed me on this only a million times, and to my luck, he was the first person i met on the grounds of atlanta.
    flashback
    "MMM...it even smells like atlanta!" my dad spoke in a sing song voice, stepping off of the plane.
    ""cmon dad i-" my sentence was interrupted by some freak body checking my shoulder!
    "OUCH! what the hell is wrong with you.....justin bieber...?" i said recognizing his familiar yet scared face.
    "gosh i am so sorry!" he said quickly putting both hands on my shoulder.
    "L-LET ME MAKE IT UP TO YOU! some how, i have to go!" he said as i softly heard shrieks of girls behind me.

    END FLASHBACK

    it was only coincidence that i ended up living not beside him, no, but across the street from him. in this A-MAZING house that my dad would be able to afford, unlike my mom. My life used to be terrible! just awful! i had no friends, we lived in a dump because my mother refused to let father pay all the bills alone. My clothes were garbage...not literally though....and i was flunking school because all i could focus on was our crappy family life. my dad payed off the debt very easily, without my mother knowing and he filed for divorce. since then i moved to a nicer place, i have some great close friends...but it turns out justin is a real jerk...thats the only down fall.....PLUS! he throws parties A LOT! and they are so freaking noisy...i can never get to sleep...of course my dad doesn't know about this because he doesn't sleep here much because he is away on conference trips, flying to new places, leaving my behind with this none sense. WAIT! i have one more down fall...my dad has become good 'friends' he says, with pattie mallette or something like that...i had no clue who that was, but once again it has to do with J-U-S-T-I-N....i dont even dare speak his name...she is his mom! and she has got him knocking on my door every now and then to check up on my because im alone...its annoying, and he always makes fun of my eyes...whats wrong with my eyes!
    *knock*knock*
    "GO AWAY JUSTIN!" i yelled at the door.
    "im offended" he said sarcastically opening the door anyways.
    "you just came over this morning, what, do you people think im going to burn the house down?"
    "personally...yeea i think ya might, but i prolly would let ya stay in here to burn"
    "gee, thanks" i said in a sarcastic tone.
    "anyways i see everything is normal here...except for you...so i best be on my way"
    "ya go!" i yelled throwing a pillow at him but he blocked it.
    "you so want me!" he laughed walking out the door.
    "GROSS!" i yelled back.
    what an annoying little boy! i swear he isn't human...
    *buzz*buzz* yay i luv luv getting texts!...yes my mood changes rather quickly...
    i read the text...
    itschristianbiatch: wanna chill? du group is hangin out tonite
    Maddyatjustin: nah im good, i think i am going to get some sleep...
    itschristianbiatch: k, btw luv ur username ahah what did he do this time...
    Maddyatjustin: HE IS JUST ANNNOYYYYYYYYYYING!...anyways hav fun!
    itschristianbiatch: lol k cya!

    nobody knows my name is Ella here either! i always hang out with christian, my 2 best female friends Ava and Emma, Chaz, and sometimes Ryan, but he is sort of annoying...now justin hangs with christan A LOT...its like a bromance...so i have no choice but to put up with him sometimes....they party all the time and i just can't keep up with that...i know myself, i get too into parties when i go, so i just don't...
    BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM...
    i can hear music blaring from across the street... i think i know where they are hanging out...i shouldn't have hesitated to get those ear plugs at the drug store...
    .................................................. ................................

    IS IT OK????? SHOULD I KEEP GOING OR ABANDON IT...BECAUSE I DON'T WANT TO WASTE MY TIME IF NOBODY IS GOING T OREAD IT...
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    well i like it (:
    since sadly your other story deleted
    but keep on going (:
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    k thanks, i was thinking of doing a sequel to my other story, but then only people who have read it would understand... plus it would just get deleted again

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bailey Bieber View Post
    k thanks, i was thinking of doing a sequel to my other story, but then only people who have read it would understand... plus it would just get deleted again
    oh well shiz , now ya got this story (:
    so update anytime lol
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    STICK AROUND

    justins pov
    Maddy didn't want to come over here tonight, and i have noticed that she never comes to hang with us when it is at my house. i really think she hates me. i just find it fun picking on her because she loses her temper so easily!
    "HEY JB! how do ya turn on ur xbox, its messed up....WHERE IS THE POWER BUTTON!"
    "right there....the one that says power..."
    "OH! GOT IT! THANKS!"
    woow, "im going to go get a glass of water guys" i walked up the stairs fro mthe basement. as i walked into the kitchen i noticed Maddy coming out of her house in this direction...maybe she decided he wanted to come.
    BANG BANG BANG
    "JUSTIN!" i heard the door scream at me....ok so she doesnt seem happy.
    "yes your majesty?" i said opening the door.
    "please...turn down the music, im trying to sleep."
    "OH CMON! its only 8pm, why on earth would you be sleeping!" i said pulling her arm in the house
    "just stay for a bit, if ya cant beat em join em?"
    "uh..um i don-"
    "Ava and Emma are here too...not just the guys"
    "fine..."
    "awesome sauce!" i yelled pulling her down the steps.
    "awesome sauce?" she replied confused.
    "w-wait justin..im in my pajamas"
    "doesnt matter baby girl! it isnt like we are going out anywhere!"
    "baby girl?"
    .....................................
    Ella's/Maddy's pov
    i dont know why, i got these butterflies when he called me baby girl. but im always nervous...so i wont think anything of it.
    "SPIN THE BOTTLE!" christian yelled putting a JONES pop bottle in the center of the room.
    "NO, no im not doing that" i said as everyone sat around.
    "wow...party pooper much?" justin smirked at me. god..he knows how to get to me. i sat down next to Emma.
    "HERES THE RULES!" christian started. "if you land on a girl, then you don't have to kiss them, BUT its worse, because you have to spin until you get a guy, and if you have previously landed on a girl then you must go in the closet with the guy you get, foooooor 7 minutes! like 7 minutes in heaven...."
    "WHAT!" those are some messed up rules.
    everyone spun and Ava kissed christian 2 times, Emma kissed justin once and went in the closet with ryan...and i have to spin because of their ladies first rule....around and around it goes...where it stops, nobody knows....wait ya i do, it landed on Ava...
    "i dont have to kiss ava do i?"
    "haha, no but you have to do the closet with the next boy you get"
    "noo!"
    "you have to! everyone else is followin the rules...you rule breaker"
    "god fine!"
    around and around it goes...where it stops...im soon to know...
    "EVERYONE TOTALLY SAW THAT COMING!" ryan squealed.
    "NO! NO! IM NOT GOING IN THE CLOSET WITH JUSTIN!" i said standing up and running up the stairs. i felt someone grab my waist and pull me back down. i was picked up and put over their shoulder and they walked into the closet.
    "JUSTIN WHAT ARE YOU DOING!" i yelled.
    "shh...we dont actually have to do anything..."
    he was so close i could feel his breath on my face...
    .................................
    add more late k? gotta go to school!
    Last edited by Bailey Bieber; 18 Nov 2010 at 08:31 PM.

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    this is sooo good , update
    Call him Mr.Bieber he make your bedrock. Call him Mr.Deeps he can make ur ♡ stop. Call him Mr.Mane his rap lyrics are hot(:

    Be my Edward and I'll be your Bella. Be my prince charming and I'll be your cinderella. Be my Bieber and I'll be your shawty

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    LMfAOOO This is AMAZING AND SOOO HILARIOUS...MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?

    There Are Times when I feel Like laying on the Grass and Closing my eyes Just Thinking of you ...

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    Maddy's pov

    "you see, if we just stay like this..nobody will know we didn't do anything" he whispered softly into my ear, sending shivers up my back. oh my goodness, why did this closet have to be do dang small, justin and i both had our backs on opposite walls, but the closet was so small that we were still squished real close...just my luck. he kept whispering things to me, i don't know if he realized, but whenever he said something, his lips brushed against mine softly. i could hear his breathing.
    "Maddy, are you alright?" he whispered, i felt his lips brush against mine. I whimpered a bit. he laughed...he so did that on purpose. we both went silent when we heard people going up the stairs. Justin tried to open the door. he looked over at me with worried eyes.
    "t-they locked us in" he said loudly, well not loud but a lot louder than the whisper i was used to. we both started banging on the door yelling at them to let us out.
    "I just wanted you to turn down your music...if-if i had put up with it i would be home sleeping right now..." i said angrily.
    "what...this is my fault!?" he snapped back.
    "ya...IT IS! congratulations for figuring that one out CAPTAIN OBVIOUS!"
    "oh your one to talk...ms.aren't-grapes-made-out-of-cranberries?"
    "HEY I WAS HALF ASLEEP AND IT MADE SENSE WHEN I SAID IT OK!?"
    "ya well this made sense to me too!"
    "what made sense! getting me locked in a closet with the last person i would want to see ever!"
    he was silent. did i hurt his feelings? he stared at the door so that he wouldn't have to look me in the eyes. i knew he wished he could walk away.
    10 minutes...........its been 10 minutes since we heard the front door to the house close...they left us...ten minutes since we spoke to each other, and it was really awkward...my claustrophobia started setting in. i felt my eyes water and i whimpered.
    "i-i don't want to be here.." i barely managed to let out with a shaky voice.
    "i bet you don't. im the last person you want to see....."
    i started crying..im really claustrophobic, i don't know how i lasted this long.
    "Maddy..im sorry, are you ok?"
    "I DON'T WANT TO BE HERE!" i screamed crying.
    "im going to die in here....." i added in a whisper using my back against the wall to slide to the ground. justin sat next to me and hugged me.
    "why are you being so nice to me..."
    "because i hate to see pretty girls cry"
    i got major butterflies in my stomach and my cries slowly came to a stop.
    i fell asleep in his hug.
    ..................................................
    justins pov
    i woke up holding on to Maddy like she was my baby or something. she slowly opened her eyes and looked up at me.
    i wish i knew if it was morning...
    "d-do you know the time?" Maddy asked quietly.
    "no, i took my watch off."
    "i dont hate you justin"
    "thanks for clearing that up" i said in an obnoxious voice.
    "stop that though, you act so mean. why do yo do that? i mean, you seem really nice right now, but you randomly add comments that i dont like"
    "i-i dont know im sorry" i said in my most sincere voice. "just nerves" i added without thinking.
    "why would you be nervous?"
    "b-b-because....i um, im around you" SHOOT i sound like some whimp guy. well, ya Maddy makes me nervous, real nervous. i like her a lot honestly.
    .........................................
    Maddys pov

    "b-b-because...i um, im around you" he finally let out.
    GOSH DARN MORE BUTTERFLIES. his face looked scared.
    "dont play me bieber!"
    "i-im sorry!"
    "im sorry justin...your really confusing though"
    just then the door opened wide and i leaped out breathing in the 'basement' air.
    "wtf is wrong with you!" justin yelled at christian.
    "so you 2 together yet?" christian asked curiously.
    "NO! i would never date justin!" i said harshly. big mistake...justin looked pained and then just walked away...i thought everything was normal between us! that wouldn't have bothered him before! right? to tell the truth though, i like justin, and im trying really hard to hide it because im pretty clumsy when it comes to stuff like this.
    .................................................. .
    justins pov
    i cant believe she said that...i shouldn't have acted bothered by it..but i couldn't help it, normally i would make some come back but i really wasn't in the mood.
    "justin wait! jusstin im sorry if i offended you" i heard Maddy following behind me.
    "its ok..." i turned around NO ITS NOT OK! IT IS NOT! i lied though...
    "NO ITS NOT OKAY!" she replied...wow she read my mind.
    "justin, i can feel there is some sort of tension between us somehow...and you don't like me very much right now...so i have something to make us even...and also...i would like to be your friend"
    "you mean, you dont want to hate me"
    "no, and i dont hate you"
    "what do you have to make us even?"
    "im going to tell you something i swore never to say in atlanta..."
    "WHICH IS!" i asked excited.
    "my name is not Madison Lyon McGill...its Ella Rose McGill."
    "what! are you serious? why would you lie about your name?"
    "because i hate it!"
    "but it suits you so much better."
    "so you hate ME?"
    ...............................................
    Maddys/Ellas pov
    "NO! no your beautiful and your name is beautiful" he said grabbing my chin so i would look him in the eyes. butterflies.
    "Gosh stop doing that!"
    "what"
    "giving me butterflies! its getting annoying!"
    he smiled.
    ...............................
    G-ma's and G-pa's 4 dinna tonite. pce!
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    Sleepless in Atlanta

    Ella's pov
    by the time i finally got into bed it was 3am, justin and i thought that we had slept til morning, but we were wrong. we laughed when we looked out the window at the night. i live just across the street but justin walked me to my door anyways.
    "Ellla..."
    "yes"
    "i am glad we are friends."
    "im glad we're friends too justin"
    "good night ella" justin said walking away.
    "you are the only person who can call me that!!!" i yelled after him.
    i sort of like it when justin calls me Ella, he had told me that he likes my name... a lot of people tell me they do. i do not though. now i lay tossing and turning thinking of the events that have gone on recently...
    ...............
    justins pov
    i cant freaking sleep! im just staring at objects around the room...i take off my tshirt....hm? i wonder what Ella would look like in my tshirt....only my tshirt....STOP THAT....i get into bed in my boxers....hm? i wonder what Ella would look like in my boxers....only my boxers...GOD! YOUR TEENAGE MIND IS FREAKING ME OUT!
    ................................
    Ella's pov
    i didn't see justin at all today.....is he mad at me? he didn't seem mad...is he embarrassed? ooh!ooh! or maybe he doesn't want to say something wrong and screw up our friendship..plus his mom always has him checking in on me but he hasn't today...and it is already 6pm... i decided to have Emma over for a bit.
    "YOU 2 ARE SOOO IN LOVE!"
    "huh! what? are not, we are barely friends Emma..."
    "nah!!! you have the hots for him!"
    "do not!"
    "do so!"
    "fine..."
    "i know you did..."
    "no, i don't i mean fine....as in fine, i have decided to tell you a story"
    "ooh story time" she said curling up on my bed.
    "ok this is why im not into dating at all..." i started.
    "when i was in grade 8 my biggest crush Ethan asked me out on a date. i was supposed to meet him at this really nice restaurant, and that i could wait at the table until he came because he would be a bit late. i went to the restaurant and they searched for our reservation, and didn't find it. i kept telling them to look again until i was escorted out. the next day at school he had some weird explanation that i dont remember...but that was the start of a terrible relationship...he hit me, and cursed at me, and i thought that i loved him, just because he seemed interested in me. then um...this was a bad idea, i shouldn't have told you this"
    "awe ella baby tell me please?"
    "n-wait did you just call me ella?"
    "ya justin told us!" she laughed hard....you could hear her new york accent through her laugh even...
    "IM GOING TOO KILL HIM" i yelled.
    "replace all the L's with S's and what do you get from that sentence Ella?"
    "um...im-going-to-kiss-him?" i said not understanding. wait! "im not going to kiss him! you are so immature!"
    "honey you brought these jokes on yourself when you guys decided to have a sleep over in the closet Ella Bella!"
    "IT WASN'T OUR IDEA!" i booted her out of the house. i watched her laugh all teh way down the street. what an immature person...i decided to get in the hot tub. i pulled on my bikini and grabbed my button boots just for the walk down to the basement. Ella's BIKINI - Polyvore (thats what she looks like) about 10 minutes of relaxing later, there was a knock on the door. i ignored it. there was a louder knock.
    "FINE FINE IM COMING!" i ran up the stairs forgetting my boots and answered the door dripping wet.
    "uh..mmmm...uh wow"
    "uh, hi justin, what do ya want"
    "to join you in whatever your doing....but thats not why im here, my mom told me you were probably lonely so she wants me to have dinner with ya, she made it already...that is i you don't already have plans"
    "no i dont have plans, just uh let me go get changed" i came back in some pajamas and sat down at the counter.
    "your mom made this?" i looked down at this weird messed up food.
    "uh...no haha i attempted to copy the one she made"
    "that sounds right...ok icecream it is!"
    "is this how you eat all the time?"
    "mhm!"
    "wow, shouldn't you be...like..fat?"
    "IM FAT!?"
    "NO! I-IM I MEAN YOU PROBABLY HSOULD BE..IF YOU EAT JUNK ALL THE TIME, BUT YOUR NOT!"
    "so your saying i eat like a pig!?"
    "NO-I UH-"
    "justin, im just messing with you.."
    "oh...dont do that, im not good on the spot!" justin and i shared a bowl of ice cream and decided to go rent a movie.
    DING ding. we entered the Esso Station for a good movie. the guy behind the counter was asain and had a very heavy accent, now i don't have anything against different races at all, but this person was so hard to understand. he wasn't very good at english.

    "ah, summa woman, cute couple want woman movie!" the man said.
    "i think he means romance...not woman" justin whispered to me. no duh justin.... i kept that to myself.
    "heya, summa wroman movie iz fee of charge fow cute couple"
    "oh no, we aren-" i was cut off.
    "thank you sir for your generosity, my girlfriend and i appreciate it very much" we left the store with the movie.
    "what was that about?" i asked.
    "uh HEY its a free movie to call you my girlfriend...plus i forgot my wallet..."
    "ooh cheap boy!" i teased. we walked back to my house and i fell asleep before the movie started.
    ..................................
    justins pov

    "justin..." she whispered.
    "yes?" i looked over at her sleeping body....i mus thave been hearing things...
    "justin..mmm" i watched her say softly snuggling into the pillow next to her. is she dreaming? about me?
    "Ella? are you awake?" no answer. i pulled her into my arms to sleep peacefully, before she looked like she was about to fall off the couch.
    DING dong! immediately after the door bell rang someone let themselves in. hey its Ella's dad.
    "ELLA IM H-oh hello justin, what are you two doing?"
    "i-uh she fell asleep..."
    "well i see that, you can take her up to her room and go home if you want son, you don't have to stay." but i want to stay...
    "yes sir" i carried her upstairs and lay her on her bed. she wouldn't let go of my shirt...i tried getting up, but she wouldn't let go.so now im stuck hovering over Ella like im about to rape her or som-
    "AH! what are you doing justin!" she woke up pushing me off of her.
    ..............................
    GOING TO SLEEP! NIGHTY NIGHT...

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    comment if i should go on, i need some comments for motivation! lol cant write til i get some!

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