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    This is my new story .
    The 1st chapter'll prbbly be short b.c i have school tomorrow . ;/
    I hope you guys like it .
    Lemme know what you think . (:


    "Mom you can't drive! Your drunk !"
    "W-why sho-ould i? Nob-b-ody loves me ."
    "Well i do! So please stop & let me drive!"
    "No! Your ba-barley 13, you don't kn-know how."
    "Mommy sto-, oh ****!"


    I winced remembering my past. My mom had died in a car accident 4 years ago. It was my fault, i shouldn't have let her go to that party. I was selfish, i wanted her to leave so i can have the house to myself. I was in it with her, i felt even more guilty, i should have been the one dead, not her. She went to some party with her boyfriend & a few hours later she had called me, drunk. I supposed she saw him cheating on her or something. She told me to go get her, i had to go on my bike. When i got there she was in the car, crying, i hopped in when she started the car. I was trying to talk her stop but she wouldn't listen. So i tried to grab the wheel, but that was the worst idea. We passed a red light when a truck hit us from the left, which was the drivers side. I remember crawling out the car, & when i turned the car had caught on fire....
    "Aileen," my dad said behind my door.
    I looked up, & faked a smile, "hey daddy."
    "I'm gonna go out to dinner with Jaime, is that ok?"
    "Sure dad, go have fun." I hated when he would ask me for permission. He did go through a breakdown after my mom died though. Even if they got a divorce, he still loved her.
    "Take care of Lilly ok?" He asked me.
    I nodded, "don't worry, i'll take good care of her." I smiled, he smiled too then left. Lilly was my step sister, she's only 8 years old. My parents split when i was 4, then dad met Jaime & well they had a baby together. Jaime was a sweetheart though, she wasn't a *****y stepmother. Lilly was so adorable, i'm glad i had her. I don't feel so alone. I'm Aileen, i'm half Mexican & half Italian, I'm 5'3 & have a nice body, well thats what i get from all my guy friends. I'm 17, my skin color is like J-Lo, my hair is up to my shoulders & its in layers, i have round dark brown eyes, & snake-bites. I'm glab to be a pretty Latina, not trying to sound conceited, but most of them are nasty looking with disgusting bodies. I live in Atlanta now, but i'm a California girl & will always be. Atlanta seems whatever to me though, i have't seen a guy here that has caught my attention.

    Ahh , i'm sorry , i have to stop here . ;/
    My mom keeps bugging me to go to sleep .
    But no worries , JB will pop out soon . (:
    Hope you guys seemed kinda interested , sorry it was boring , but intro's are always boring aha .
    Anyways , be back on tomorrow to update . (:

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    LOL just thought I might mention, our steering wheels are on the right side of the car:P
    BUT!, your story sounds really good. Update soon!

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    Ugh, I hate that some kids have to deal w/ alcoholic parents. But, that doesn't take away from the qualty of your story, which is really good, BTW! Write more!

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    i'm glad you 2 like it , it means mucho . (: i'll update just for you guys .

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    okies so i'm back from school & had an awesome day . (:
    so enjoy this chapter .


    Chapter 2

    I started packing my clothes, i miss Cali. I used to live with my aunt but she couldn't take having me live with her anymore. I would sneak out in the night, come home drunk, bring guys in, ugh, ever since my mom passed away i didn't know what to do with my life anymore. So my aunt thought it was better for to to live with my dad, since she knew that i wouldn't sneak out & such, f**k my life. Their was a knock on my door & i sighed to go open it. Standing there was Lilly, with a huge smile on her grin. It kind of freaked me out.
    "Yes Lilly?" I asked curious. She smiled even wider.
    "Can we uh... Go to uh... The park?" She asked, her eyes were sparkling, her nice hazel eyes. I smiled, she was so adorable.
    "Sure, let my just put a few things away." I was about to close the door but she stopped it. I gave her a questioning look.
    "No, everytime you say your gonna do something you take FOREVER!"
    I laughed & knew it was true, "ok kiddo, lets get a move on." She jumped clapping her hands.
    We walked hand-in-hand to the park which was 4 blocks away, it felt nasty outside, the hot air made me sick. Luckily i was wearing my purple shorts with a black tank top & had black flats. I put my hair up in a ponytail. Then again, it wasn't good wearing black in the heat. I sat down on a bench & let Lilly go play on the swings. I missed being a kid, having no worries, someone was always there for you. I smiled, happy that Lilly had me to take care of her. I pulled out my ipod & started listening to This Photograph Is Proof (I know you know) by Taking Back Sunday. God i loved this song. I felt a sudden tap on my shoulder & quickly turned to see some white boy with a sweater & the hood over his hat, shades, along with basketball shorts & some Converse. His front hair was like flipped to the side, funny hairstyle.
    "Mind if i sit here?" He asked me sounded a bit nervous. I felt awkward.
    "Uh, sure why not?" He smiled & sat down. I looked over again at Lilly helping up what looked like a 3 year old little girl. She was so adorable. I smiled & looked at the boy next to me who seemed to be around my age.
    "She your little sister?" I asked him. He turned & smiled, whoa, somebody keeps their teeth clean.
    "Yeah. Her name's... uh... Jazmyn." He sounded like if he wasn't sure.
    I giggled, "she's so adorable." I said.
    "Yeah i know, i love her so much."
    "Aww how sweet. Its hard to find boys who care about their little sister."
    "Yeah, well i'm no ordinary boy." He raised his eyebrows. He was weird, but i liked weird.
    "Interetsing. Oh, I'm Aileen." I extended my hand to shake his, & he took it.
    "Hi.. i'm uh.... Drew, yeah, i'm Drew." He said nervous. Jeez, this foo was freaking out, maybe i should stop talking to him. So i just nodded & went back to my ipod. My phone started vibrating & i looked to see who it was. My old friend from Cali, Martha.
    "OMG, guess what?!" She shouted.
    "Ahh, i hate when you do that. What?"
    "Guess who is STILL totally in love with you?"
    "Ugh, i don't wanna know, please don't say it."
    "Jesus! He wants to go visit you & make-up!"
    "What the f**k? After what we've been through? No, i wouldn't dare have a long distance relationship, their worthless."
    "Ahh c'mon! You know you love him!"
    "Martha please! Why you always doing this to me?! Understand i don't want ANYTHING & i mean ANYTHING to do with him! You better shut up & not open your mouth! I know you & if i do find out i'll go to your house & kill you!"
    "OK! OK! I won't. I'm sorry. You guys were just so perfect together" She sounded sad.
    "Like you said, 'were', but not no more. Look i have to go, i'm taking care of Lilly."
    "OK, i'll text you later or whatever. Bye whore!" She laughed. I laughed too.
    "Bye slut."

    Gosh, i missed her so much. I let out a sigh.
    "Boy drama?" Drew, well thats what he said his name was, asked me.
    "If you put it that way, i guess?" He just smiled. I looked away, he freaked me out.
    "Lillykins, we have to go already. I need to unpack!" I shouted. Her & Jazmyn were sliding down the slide. I smiled at how adorable they looked. A little kid taking care of a baby, thats adorable.
    "Leaving already?" Drew asked. Ugh, this boy is like being too weird, i don't like too weird.
    "Yeah." I answered not looking at him. Lilly & Jazmyn came running up. Jazmyn put on a huge smile when she saw me, weird.
    "Hey there princess, whats your name?" I asked her, going on my knees to be somewhat her height.
    "Jazmyn!" She shouted laughing. Aww, i just love kids.
    "I'm Aileen. You're just too darn adorable." I pinched her cheek. She laughed & did a little dance. I got up to leave & she grabbed my leg.
    "Stay!" She said.
    "I'm sorry mamas, i have to go back home to clean." I played with her hair. She frowned, it was hard to say no to that face.
    "Look, tomorrow around this time you & Lilly can come so that we could learn more about each other." Drew said. I looked at him & down at Jazmyn, i'll only do it for her. I smiled & said, "ok. Come on Lillykins. Bye princess." I kissed Jazmyn on her forehead then walked away.
    "Bye queen!" Jazmyn shouted. I turned to look at Drew smiling. Huh. I'm sure he told Jazmyn to call me that. Interesting, he was going to take advantage of his sister to get close to me. Like i've never played that game before. I'll just be hard to get if thats what he wants. I smiled, this should be fun.

    i needa stop here, sorry .
    i have h.w , blah . ;/
    & i keep getting distracted by a novela that i'm watching haha .
    update later . (:
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    LOL! Drew! I had to think, why would he name himself Drew, then it clicked(;
    Great story, keep updating

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    it is good!! love it. keep going

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    aighties , i am back . (:
    here goes the next chapter .
    listening to 'down to earth' , i'll try not to mess up my writing haha .


    Chapter 3

    Finally! I was done cleaning my room. I looked around, it was nice. It was dark actually, my 8th grade teacher once said if your in a dark room its actually more relaxing. Its true. It was all painted dark purple, well my dad had painted it before i got here. I had black furniture, i'm not emo much but bright colors didn't really look good on me, they made me look darker. Curse my morena skin. I had black furry carpet, which i've always wanted. My bed & pillows were furry too, except my blanket was purple & pillows were black. Yes i know i might sound like a weirdo but i don't why, i've always wanted my room like that. I had posters or Robert Pattinson, i love Bristish accents. I also had a thing with Hello Kitty, i've loved her since i was little. I had some stuffed animals on my bed too, 2 were of H.K, one was of Pikachu, the other 2 were of a bear & monkey. I had some H.K stuff on my wall too, i had a white board of her. I rememebered then, i got a marker & wrote 'hanging out with Drew & Jazmyn tomorrow 'round 3'. I smiled, i was actually looking forward to it. That night i slept so comfortable, thats what i needed though, sleep. I woke up the next day around 10. I got clothes & headed to the shower. After i got ready i went downstairs to eat something.
    "Wow, pretty." Lilly said smiling.
    "Thanks Lillykins, you look dashing yourself." She was wearing a purple Justin Bieber shirt with a dark blue skirt & black leggings. Her hair was a nice caramel color, wavy & reached her middle back. Her eyes were small, but you could see her beautiful sparkly hazel eyes. Our skin color was about the same, people thought she was either my little sister or daughter.
    "Where you lovely girls going." Jaime walked in getting something to drink. I don't see why their noticing me now. I was only wearing a strappless gold shirt, that somewhat looked like a corset but was just plain. I loved how the color gold looked on me. I had light skinny jeans, that were somewhat torn, & gold sandals, not the flip-flop type. I had my hair down & it was straight, it was black.
    "We're going to the park, i have a new friend, but even though she's 3 she's fun." Lilly said.
    "I see," Jaime smiled & looked at me, "you made a new friend too? I'm not talking about the 3 year old though."
    I looked down & then back up, "yeah, but... Its not like that Jay..."
    "Not yet." Lilly said, laughing. I just smiled. We went to go watch t.v so time would fly, & it did. We walked again, hand-in-hand to the park. I saw Jazmyn running around & Drew chasing after her. Lilly let go of my hand & joined them, Jazmyn got even happier. Drew looked up & smiled. He was wearing a sweater, again, a hat on, again, & basketball shorts, again, along with his shades. The same thing again just different colors.
    "Aren't you hot in that?" I asked him, i felt like i was sweating by looking at him.
    "I know i'm hot, thanks." He smirked, great, a little flirt. Lilly's shirt got his attention.
    "You guys like him?" He asked us.
    "Yes! I love him!" Lilly screamed. "I know ALL his songs & i would LOVE to meet him!"
    He laughed at her reaction & turned to me, "you?"
    "His music's like whatever but.... I'm not obsessed, he's cute & all but blah, he'd be a waste of time." I said. Drew had a hurtful face, did i say something wrong? Wait, was Drew..... Gay? Was he obsessed with Justin Bieber. My eyes widen. I had nothing against gays or bis or whatever, but i was afraid he'd try to hit me. But still, i asked.
    "Drew, are you.... Gay?"
    His face turned red & he looked mad, "What! Me! Why in the world would i....!" He couldn't even finish his sentence.
    "Sorry! Sorry! You seemed offended of what i said about JB. Sorry." OK, now i felt mean. He looked mad too, oops. I mean, how is it my fault? It looked like he was always hiding & well, i always assume things.
    "OMG! JUSTIN BIEBER!" I heard somebody say out of nowhere. Sh*t, he was here? I looked around & then felt somebody grab my hand. I looked to see Drew, who was holding his little sister & yelled, "Run to that car!" to Lilly, running & dragging me with him. I turned back around & saw a group of girls running. What the? Then i realized, Drew was Justin Bieber. I started running faster & went a bit ahead of Drew, well Justin, who was holding my hand still. We got to a black Range Rover. Swear? We all jumped in. Justin seemed like he couldn't escape yet because Jazmyn had to be buckled into her car seat.
    "Just drive." I told him. He nodded & started the car. He drove, but i mean drove, & fast. I buckled Jazmyn fast though, i'm used to little kids, i have so many baby cousins. I went to sit on the passenger side, Justin still didn't slow down.
    "Slow down Celebrity. If you hit the breaks i'm gonna fly out the window." He slowed a bit, but it was easier to buckle myself up.
    "Sorry about this, i can't let Jazmyn get hurt. They could have hurt her or something." He sounded upset.
    "Hey, don't worry about it. I'd do the same thing. I wouldn't want her hurt too." When i said that he smiled.
    "I'm glad you understand." He seemed calmer now. I don't know where we were but i didn't mind.
    "So, Justin Bieber eh? Why didn't you tell me?" I asked.
    "I don't know. I was afraid you... You would of been all crazy or maybe punch me or something."
    "Well i wouldn't have done any either way. I would have just been 'cool'." & it was true, i wasn't obsessed so theirs no point in screaming. I didn't hate him because he never did anything to hurt me, so i wouldn't punch him.
    "This is so cool! I can't believe that happend! JB saved my life." Lilly said. Justin & I laughed.
    "Surprising, you didn't scream." Justin told her.
    "I was raised from the best. I show respect & i know not to freak around famous people. Because then, if you start screaming or whatever, you won't be able to meet them because the security will tell you yo leave." Lilly said. Justin laughed.
    "Smart, who told you that?" He asked her.
    "Aileen, she's the genuis." Lilly said pointing at me. He turned & smiled at me. I couldn't help but smile back.
    "Well yeah, i've experienced it before. Thats how i've met my favorite bands & such."
    "Well Aileen, thats true." Justin told me. I smiled. Wow, this was funny but weird. I was at a park with some boy i thought was weird, & sadly, gay. When really, he was a famous popstar. & then girls started chasing us & us running with our little sisters' to his car. Now we're driving, i don't know where, but i didn't care much. Although, i can't believe i asked Justin Bieber if he was gay! Wow. I turned & saw him smiling at me. We stopped & were in a parking lot, he took off his hat & shades. I looked to my right to see Chuck'E'Cheeses. He couldn't be THAT down, could he? I raised my eyebrows.
    "Really?" I asked.
    He laughed, "my bodyguard is here with his kids, so we'll have somebody to protect us." He said getting out the car. Jazmyn shouted, "YAY!" & Lilly said, "WOOT WOOT! TIME FOR FUN!" I couldn't help but laugh. I was about to get out but Justin had opened my door & had his hand out for me to grab to help me get off. Like they did in old movies, how adorable. I grabbed it & got off. He went around to get Jazmyn out, Lilly had gotten out.
    "Excited much?" I asked her.
    "Yes!" She had the biggest smile ever. Justin & Jazmyn came around. Jazmyn ran to Lilly & they held hands walking infront of us.
    "Maybe you & i should do the same as them." Justin told me.
    "Ha. Funny, but i don't think so." I said.
    "Why not?"
    "'Cause, God knows where your hands have been." I smirked at him & just walked. He flipped his hair & smiled. That nasty-minded boy.
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    hahaah the last sentence! Great update(:

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    i'm really just updating b.c i'm bored .
    i'm not even supposed to be on the comp. , i've gots school tomorrow .
    but w.e , here it goes .


    Chapter 4

    "'Cause, God knows where your hands have been." I smirked at him & just walked. He flipped his hair & smiled. That nasty-minded boy.
    We walked into Chuck'E'Cheeses, it wasn't packed as i thought it would. Their were more little kids than teenagers. Their were barley teenagers. Whats up with kids now at days? We walked up to a table, there was a black man with 2 kids. Both of them were boys.
    "Yo, Kenny," Justin greeted him.
    "Yo, Justin! Whats up?" He must be his bodyguard. They did that handshake ALL the boys do.
    "This is Aileen & her little sister Lilly. Girls, this is my bodyguard Kenny & his 2 boys, Steven & Derek. Lilly & i both waved. The kids went to go play, Kenny went with them because he said Steven & Derek start fighting for each others coins. Justin & i were just eating pizza & talking.
    "You don't wanna go play?" Justin said eyeing the games. I frowned.
    "No, i never win. I suck."
    Justin laughed at me, i just stared at him. He stopped, i assumed i looked pretty mad.
    "Sorry." He ducked his head. I started laughing, its fun when guys are scared of you.
    "You should act, your very good at it." He suggested.
    "Nah, fame isn't just my thing."
    "Why not?"
    "Because then everybody'll be all up in my kool-aid." I started laughing. He did too.
    "You should try up for comedy."
    "No thanks. Why don't you go play? & then when you go to that machine that eats your tickets & gives you the paper on how much tickets you got, go buy me something."
    "Alright." He smiled. We both got up & went to go buy coins. I think he got like 200? Foo has bank in his pocket. He was good at almost every game. Especially the basketball ones, he won so many times, i lost track of it. He played games for about an hour & a half, then went to the ticket-eater machine.
    "Yam-yum." The ticket-eater was saying. I started laughing, it was so dorky.
    "You have an adorable laugh." Justin said. Random? I just looked away. Ay, this kid.
    "Alright, lets see how much i got," Justin got the recipt, "well what do ya say? 2100." He turned to me & smiled. My eyes got wide. The most i've gotten wasn't even over 200!
    "What would you like?" He asked walking towards the counter.
    "I was just kidding boy." I said.
    "No. Now i wanna get you something. So, what is it?" I sighed & looked around. Then i spotted a really cute purple teddy bear. Purple! My favorite color! It was only 1000.
    "That bear, right there." I pointed. He looked at me & smiled.
    "Excuse? Yeah could i get that purple bear?" Justin asked the worker. She looked about in her mid-fifthies. She was white, had nice green eyes, but her face looked creepy. She looked like she hated working here. She had a pointy nose & small lips. Her hair was messy too, it was a dirty blonde. Talk about waking up in the wrong side of the bed. She handed him the bear, but we still had to get something else. We only had 1100 left.
    "Get something for Lilly & Jaz." I suggested. He nodded & got them both a cute little Chucky.
    "Thanks for the oso." I said. He looked at me like 'What was that?' I rolled my eyes, "Thanks for the bear."
    "Oh! Your welcome." He laughed. Jeez, he's lucky he's cute. If not i would have smacked him. Lilly & Jazmyn got happy with their new Chucky. I looked at my phone, it was already seven.
    "We have to go." I told Justin.
    "Oh yeah, I'll take you. Yo, Kenny! I'll catch ya later!" Justin shouted.
    "Aight man! See ya later!" We walked out, I was hugging my bear.
    "Hmm, what shall i name you?" I always name my stuffed anumals. I heard a chuckle. I turned to see Justin trying not to laugh.
    "What's so funny?" I asked him.
    "Your gonna name him?" He said. Jeez boy, let me be!
    "Yeah you butthole."
    He cracked a smile, "How about.... Justin?" He smiled. I made a thinking face, then a digusted one.
    "Nah, i don't like that name."
    "Why not?"
    "Because i just don't. How about.... Afrojack?" I smiled, i liked that name.
    "Afrojack?" Justin made a face.
    "I like that dj, he's cool. He's famous where i used to live, we were good friends. I loved dancing to his music."
    "What type of music?" We were in the car by then, Justin started backing out.
    "Techno."
    "Cool. Could i at least give him a middle name?" I giggled.
    "Sure, why not? What would it be?"
    "Jewber." I gave him a 'wtf?' look.
    "The 'J' for my first name, 'ew' from my middle, & 'ber' from my last." He smiled. Way to go Bieber. But i actually liked it.
    "Alright, Jewber Afrojack Bieber Sanchez." I started laughing, & so did he.
    "Hey, i like that. Yeah, thats his name." By then we had pulled up in my house. I gave him a questioning look.
    "The first day we met, after you left, Jaz & i left too, while i was driving i saw you & Lilly going in that house."
    "Oh. Thats still weird." I looked to the back seat & saw Jaz sleeping & Lilly was relaxing, i know she was listening to our conversation.
    "C'mon Lils, we're home." She opened her eyes & stretched. "Thanks for today, i had a good time." I smiled, i actually did.
    "Your welcome." He smiled & showed his teeth. Could they be anymore nice? When i was about to get off he grabbed my hand. I looked at him, he hugged me & put his hands on my waist, well a bit further down, then leaned in to kiss my forehead & whispered, "Sweetdreams." He smelled so good. I looked up at him & smiled.
    "You too." I whispered back. Lilly & i got out, i waved as i passed infront of the car. Once we were inside he barley drove off.
    "He likes you & you like him." Lilly said smiling.
    "Nah, we're just friends Lils."
    "Suuuuure. Thats what they all say, & i mean ALL." She ran upstairs. Jaime & my dad must have gone out. I walked up stairs to my room. I fell on my bed, God it was so comfortable. I started taking my pants off when a paper fell out my back pocket. I picked it up to check. I started laughing. Smooth, he wrote his number on a piece of napkin. Thats why his hands were where they weren't supposed to be. Nah, I'm gonna text him tomorrow. Make him suffer a bit. I didn't like making myself look easy, although i wasn't. But boys now at days want just ONE thing. Sex.
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