Thread: Livin in tha atl

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Chapter 5- Dinner
hey heres another chapter hope you like it, and trust me the next chapter has some justin and alex action. so stay tunned.

Me-“I can’t believe that you put Naomi in a cage in the back yard”, I said from the passenger seat.

Dad-“alex the only reason I left her in a cage is cause I didn’t want to come home to my house destroyed again by your pet”, he said looking onto the road.

Me- “ok im only going to tell you this once her name is Naomi, say it with me na-o-mi got it”, I said annoyed that he keeps not calling her by her name. “and I don’t think she meant to ruin all of your things”, I said crossing my arms and looking out the window.

Justin-“ oh ya she was just being kind when she ruined everything”, he said laughing in the back seat texting someone on his phone. I turned around in my seat to face him.

Me-“who asked your opinion “, I said looking at him. He looked up and smiled at me and then looked back down to his phone. I looked at him and then took his phone and looked at it.

Justin-“hey give me my phone back”, he said trying to grab it from my hand but I was too quick for him. I looked at his phone and saw the screen light up with the name ryan across the screen, I pushed open for the message I was gonna read it but justin took it away from me too fast. “you know its rude to take peoples phones”, he said looking angry.

Me-“don’t you know its rude to but in on someone’s conversation, cause last time I checked it was a A and B conversation”, I said getting just as mad I could see usher out of the corner of my eye laughing.

Dad-“ok both of you leave each other alone if you don’t have anything nice to say then don’t say it”, he said still focusing on the road. I glared at justin then turned around in my seat.

We finally stopped at apple bees and got out and went in we finally got to are table , justin and usher sat on one side of the booth and I sat on the other. Finally after 5 minutes of silence two skimpy looking girls came up and looked at justin and usher they had note books in their hand and were smiling to wide. The only reason you could tell them apart cause they had their names on the shirt and justin’s below theirs, and they were blonde oh god help me.(and I don’t mean anything mean to u if ur name is kara, or kailey)

Kara-“ um excuse me I was wondering if you two could sign are notebooks”, she said smiling at usher and justin and totally ignored me. Usher and justin smiled and took their note books and signed it while they were signing it kara looked over at me and glared I just smiled and waved at her.

Kara-“who are you”, she said looking at me with a glare and kailey soon followed her lead.

Dad-“well um this is ……………um………..”, he said looking at them and then looking at me. I just looked at him then looked down and shook my head. I looked back at Kara and kailey.

Me-“ I’m know one and I was just leaving”, I said looking at them then walking towards the door, I saw a bunch of people come in with camara’s and go towards usher and justin I looked back at the table and saw people surrounding the table. I rolled my eyes and walked out the door. I quickly walked down the street away from there and looked for a bus stop I finally found one and payed to get on and sat down. I soon felt tears running down my cheeks, wow never knew I would cry in on a public bus but I’d rather have them around then nobody at all. I felt my phone vibrate and saw that it was my dad calling I ignored it and put it back in my pocket. After the 10th time of him trying to call I picked up the phone without looking at the person who was calling and answered it.

Me-“just leave me alone I don’t want to talk to you”, I said into the phone.

Mom-“well It’s nice to know you missed me”, she said laughing through the phone a little.

Me- “I’m sorry mom I thought you were my dad”, I said wiping away the tears.

Mom- “hunny have you been crying, what did usher do to you”, she said sounding angry.”and don’t lie cause I know when you are”.

Me-“well we were sitting in apple bees and these two girls came up and asked for autograghs and when they asked who I was he wouldn’t tell them I was his daughter”, I said silent tears running down my face.” M-mom can I please come home”, I said through the phone.

Mom-“sweetheart I want you to come home but nobodys there and I need the job im sorry but ill talk to usher”, she said.” Im sorry sweetie I have to go “
, she said then hung up the phone. I closed the phone and put it back in my pocket it finally came to my stop after staying 2 hours on a bus to get home. I walked up to the gate person and they let me in. I walked up the drive way and into the house and out the back door to naomis cage she saw me and got up and went over to the door of the cage I opened the door and she came out looked at me to pick her up. I smiled and did I walked back into the house and feed Naomi. After she was done eating and I was done eating, we both went uopm stairs and I locked my door. I put Naomi in her play pen and put some toys in there for here to play with then I went and took a shower I got dressed into some jeans and a t-shirt then went and brushed through my wet hair and then went back to my room and turned on my tv. I sat on my bed and just flipped through the channels until I found a good show then sat and watched it. I soon heard the front door open and shut then I heard my name being called. I soon heard people running up the stairs and they stopped in front of my door.

Dad-‘alex please open the door I just didn’t mean-‘, he was gonna say more but I interrupted him.

Me-“how do you not mean to diss own your daughter infont of everyone”, I said petting Naomi who was laying down dozing off to sleep. he was quiet for a few minutes then he spoke up.

Dad-"im sorry alex for not telling them who you are but I promise I will tell everyone that you are my daughter cause when I saw that look of hurt in your eyes it broke my heart and I’m just begging you to forgive me”, he said through the door and it sounded like he was crying. “I know its been ruff living here but I promise ill try harder to be a better father,so please forgive me”. I thought about it for a few minutes then said yes through the door.

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i need moreeee nowww,i love the idea of this story

I really like it. i dont think i wouldve given in so easily. buy me a car and then we'll talk lol

i cant belieb (see what i did there) that usher totally did that!! ugh update this before i boycott usher now!! lol jkjkjk i would not boycott usher

Chapter 6- stop staring at me its creepy

Dad-"so alex are you sure you don't want anything else", he said as we came back into the house after going shopping in every store in town that looked good to shop in. Hes been doing this all day buying me things it was fun,and there was paperazzi every were and he didnt mind them taking pictures of us.
Me-"no im fine for right now thank you very much", i said turning to him and smiling,he smiled back.
Dad-"ok but if you want anything else you can just call me andi can get my assistant to get it for you, i would bt i have to go to the recording studio for a few hours cause theres some problems there and when i get away from there ill bring dinner hom for you guys",he said and put my bags down in my room.He smiled one more time then he left. I know your all thinking wh wouldyou forgive him thate easy but you've got to look at it this way this is his first time being a dad and i know t doesnt make up for hi dising me but hey you gotta addmit him buty me everythng i want is a perk.
I was putting up my stuff when i heared someone strumming a gutair naomi heared t to but went back to sleep, my curiosity got the best of me and i followed te noise.it soonlead me to a music type room down the hall in thier i saw justin sittig on one of the bean bag chairs with a guitar and he was singing.
Justin-"i always knew you knew you were the best
the coolest girl i know
so prettier than all the rest
the star of my show
I smiled to my self he was actually good,but i was caught when he turned around and saw me he smild at me , and i just looked at him.
Justin-"like the song ", he said with a smirk on his face. i stepped all the way in the room and sat in the bean bag beside him."so do you", he said leaning towards me. Are faces were inches fromeach other and then and therei forgot what i was gonna say and i just stared into his eyes ,and he stared in mine. He was leaning foward and we were about to kisses when naomi came up and gotin the middle of us and started licking his face. i pulled away and shook my head and gn he just smiled at me and i rolled my eyes and started walking bck to my room i could feel justin watching me walk to the door.
Me-"stop staring at me its creepy", i said then walked back to my room and closed and locked the door. I st on my bed and layed down. i can't believe i almost kissed justin beber.
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make them kiss,nowww update!!!!!

Chapter 7- how about a date
Justin-"come on shawty just one date thats what im asking for",he said as he leaned foreward so are foreheads were touching.He had cornered me into a corner with his arms trapping me in to it, I tryed so hard not to smile so hard but he has been doing this for the last two days since he almost kissed me, and i tryed hidding in the bathroom but he some how picked the lock.and were was my dad in this sort of situation, oh well he having lunch with gucci mane ketching up since he got out.
Me-"N-n-no we can't ever do that cause you are my dads friend and thats wrong, and i don't think he would like it that much",i said looking at him in the eyes.
Justin-"well if thats the case he doesn't have to know", he said smilling big.
Me-" w-w-w......i- i-.....",i said stuttering over my words trying to think of a good excuse for why i couldnt go out with him.
Justin-"well then its settled ill see you tonight 10:00 at the front door", he said smiling he winked one more time then he walked off.
Damit, i cant believe i just did that i looked around and saw i was in the dance studio, i saw naomi at the door looking in here shesaw me andran to me and sat down infront of me begging me with her eyes for me to pick her up.i smiled then picke her up,i went down stairs and saw justin and usher at the door.
Dad-"how was your morning alex", he aid as i made aturn to go to the kitchen.
Me-"just peachie", i said walkig down to te kitchen.
I heard justin laughing as i said it, i feed naomi then we went out side and went to the pool and sat put my feet in.I felt smeone sit down beside me and i turned to see my dad , i just turned back to the water.
Dad-"so alex what are you doin tonight", he said looking at me smiling.
Me-"just going out with justin to do something", i said kicking my feet in the water.
Dad-" o i was just wondering cause i didnt want you to be alone when i go out tonight,is that alright with you", he said .
Me-"ya its fine, you can go", i said. no wonder justin picked tonight t go out cause he knew my dad would be out. wow hes some thing.
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