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    Default Back down to earth. ♥

    He saw me growing up. He was like my big brother. I was there when he fell in love with Caitlin, and he was there when I had my first love. He would always take care of me & stand up for me, and I would do the same. And when people told him that I was too young for him, we didn't care. We've always been best friends, and never more than that.
    Since he posted the first video on Youtube I knew he was gonna be famous, and I was right. But when that happened I stopped being his little sister and he stopped being my best friend. We just stopped talking. Now I find out everything about him on the TV or because of Chris. At first we talked on the phone every single day, then once a week, and we ended up just texting.
    There was a moment when I tried to get away from him. But he knew it, and we had a fight. I wasn't mad at him, but I thought that my bestfriend, my brother, was on the other side of the world and had completely forgotten about me, and that hurt. I got used to the text messages at 3 or 4 a.m., because of the time difference or when he got up early. After that fight, his messages were listless, and we weren't the same.
    My name is Anna Poynter and I'm 13. A while ago I as Justin Bieber's best friend, buyt now I don't know. Right now I'm waiting for Chris to go to a party in Justin's house, because he just arrived from a tour.
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    Well.. here it is my first fanfic :S I'm Argentinian so I don't speak a lot of English, but I'm studying it & I really like it so I wanted to write this. Let me know if I made any mistakes

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    I like it, shawty

    I just noticed something...
    Justin Bieber really likes staring at you.

    Like my story "Always Be Mine"?
    PM me and I can give you links for my other stories.
    Also, watch out for newer stories involving Justin Bieber!

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    I like it, and for being Argentinian, your Eng. is very good!

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    I was sitting on my sofa waiting for Chris, thinking of how it was going to be. How would I talk to him, how would things be, if it would be like a reunion or just like always. I was wearing a white dress with a vest of the same color and silver sandals. (http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_fOnzQMF1nL...in20281829.jpg)
    At about 8 Chris arrived, and we started walking to Justin's house. I've always been friends with Chris, and I met Justin because of him.
    As soon as we got there, I started looking for him. Whe I found him, he was with another girl, but when he saw me, he smiled from ear to ear and pushed tthrough the people to say hi to me.
    "Anna!" he shouted, ebcause the music was really loud. ""I missed you a lot. How are you?"
    "I'm... fine." I smiled. "I missed you too, we haven't talked in a long time."
    He gave me a big hug just like before, like he used to do everytime he saw me.
    "Um, Ann... " he started. "This is Jasmine." I realised she was the girl who appeared in his video 'Baby'. "Jasmine, she's Anna, my bestfriend."
    "Hey" I said.
    "Hi" She replied with a smile.
    "And.. what's up? Any boyfriends, some guy you like?" he asked, showing his overprotective side, that I missed so mucyh. I rolled my eyes and acted like it bothered me, but really I loved it.
    "Nah, not now... and you?" I said, looking at Jasmine, because she wouldn't let go of him.
    "That's better, you're still too young to have a boyfriend. I don't have a girlfriend either. And I know what you're thinking, but Jasmine is just a friend.
    "Oh.. and I'm not too young, Im 13, you fell in lvoe at that age..."
    "It's different, because... umm" before he could give an excuse, Jasmine talked.
    "Guys, you look like boyfriend and girlfriend." She laughed. Justin and I just looked at each other and started to laugh more than her. People always said that.
    "Well, Ann, I gotta go... see you." He smiled and left, with one arm around Jasmine's waist.
    It wasn't bad at all, but the conversation was a little... awkward, like we weren't the same. There was something between us that didn't fit perfectly like it did before.
    The I realised what was that. It wasn't him, it wasn't the two of us, nothing changed, it was... me. I told the only person I trusted besides Justin. I found Chris dancing with Ryan and Chaz, grabbed his arm and took him where no one could listen.
    "What's wrong, Anna!?"
    "Chris.. I like Justin." I said, almost breathless,
    The only thing he did was... laugh. "You... are... joking, right?... You... Justin..." he said between laughs.
    "Chris, I'm serious! I'm in love."
    "Seriously?"
    "YES!"
    "Well, Anna... you've got a little problem now, you know?"

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    And here it's chapter 2. I didn't like but.. :S tell me if I'm wrote something wrong bye ^^

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    Update soon, it is pretty good

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    omg, I'm so lovin' this!
    Thank YOU!!
    Thank you, to Just.Ride. For my previous siggy,
    I enjoyed it so much. And thank you AmyToria for this new siggy,
    thank you lol




    Check out my story!!! Thanks AmyToria

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    "A little problem? Chris, I'm telling you I'm in love with my bestfriend, with which I haven't spoken for a long time, and he's 3 years older than me... that's not a little problem, it's a huge one..."
    "Yeah, I know, but... umm..." he was silent for a second, like he had nothing to answer. "Anna... how about we talk elsewhere?"
    "Why?" I immediately suspected that something was wrong.
    "Cause... I don't know, some can hear..."
    "We're alone, Chris"
    "Uh... no we're not, please Ann? Let's go..." he said, pulling on my arm.
    "What?" I said, looking around, but Chris wouldn't let me.
    "Anna! C'mon..."
    "No, Chris... what's..." I couldn't finish my question because I saw what Chris was trying to hide. "And he said they were only friends..."
    "It's not the first time he does that with one of his friends, Ann" Chris said, and he was right, but I was seeing everything from a different point of view. I was in love with him and he was making out with her... with Jasmine.
    "Never with me..." I whispered, hoping he wouldn't listen, but it didn't work.
    "Anna!" He hit me a nudge. "I never thought you'd say something like that, and less about Justin. You two were always like 'Yeah, we're like brother & sister...' now look at you." He laughed.
    "Oh please, shut up. Let's go."
    He put his arms around my waist and I did the same, and we went where the others were. We danced till the party was over.
    In the end, it was just Justin, Chris and me sitting in the living room chatting.
    "Chris, why didn't Caitlin come?" Justin asked.
    "Um I don't know, I think she was out with her friends... why?"
    "I have and idea... she should already have arrived, right?"
    "I guess... what's your idea?"
    "A sleepover." He said with a grin.
    "Me, Cait and Anna?" Chris asked, confused.
    "Yeah." He looked at me. "Can you stay"
    "I think so... I'll call my mom. " I phoned my mother.
    " Anna? Are you okay? " he asked nervously as soon as she answered.
    "Yes, I'm fine... I just... wanted to ask you something... can I sleep here? Caitlin and Chris are staying too."
    "But... you don't have anything."
    "Nah it doesn't matter... Can I?"
    "Yes, it's ok. Kisses."
    "Bye mom." I hung up. "I'm staying."
    "Cait's coming too." Chris said.
    We talked and prepared Justin's room while we waited for Caitlin. When she arrived, we started playing Truth or Consequence, and it was Justin's turn.
    "Let's see what you're gonna do.." Chris said, thinking. "I know! You have to kiss Anna."
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    Aaand that's all :| haha thanks for reading and for the comments, it's the first time I write something in English & I don't hvae a lot of confidence...
    Bye
    there's a place downtown where the freaks are coming 'round!

    Peeqi.-

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    Hahah that was good, your English is pretty good, i have to admit Update
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