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    ok so this is my first fan fiction reading the stories on here have inspired me so I decided to write one..I am a MUSICIAN NOT AN AUTHOR... so you'll have to excuse it if it's rubbish!X

    Prologue:

    I can't believe it I had Justin Bieber all to myself for an entire weekend!
    After meeting him I knew so much about him and I was really starting to like him for who he really was! I think we're both falling for each other! would it be a perfect time together or would it have terrible consequence's!X?


    comments!X?
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    The CSI Team is putting the PurpleNinja behind bars...for being to sexy!X

    My FF What If I Was Close To You!X?
    http://justinbieber.org/justin-biebe...ose-you-x.html



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    i see suspense already,update

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    I've only got the first chapter done so far I wrote it last night at 1:45 am on my phone so yeah!X
    a few more comment's then I will!X
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    The CSI Team is putting the PurpleNinja behind bars...for being to sexy!X

    My FF What If I Was Close To You!X?
    http://justinbieber.org/justin-biebe...ose-you-x.html



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    does no one want me to continue I see 54 people have viewed it!X?

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    The CSI Team is putting the PurpleNinja behind bars...for being to sexy!X

    My FF What If I Was Close To You!X?
    http://justinbieber.org/justin-biebe...ose-you-x.html



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    visitors view it,but they cant comment,so youll get plenty of view shawty

    F*CK THE HATERS
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    DONT MESS WITH JUSTIN , Because In Every Belieber Endurance Rises, And
    If Kenny H. Cant Handle It, He Calls In The Back Up Squad: THE BELIEBERS:Notoriously Known For Getting The Job Done

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    yeah I know but still I shall post the first chapter like tomorrow 'cause my silly parent's are telling me to get off the computer so laters!x
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    The CSI Team is putting the PurpleNinja behind bars...for being to sexy!X

    My FF What If I Was Close To You!X?
    http://justinbieber.org/justin-biebe...ose-you-x.html



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    This is really good shawty I think I'll like it once you post the 1st chappie up

    I just noticed something...
    Justin Bieber really likes staring at you.

    Like my story "Always Be Mine"?
    PM me and I can give you links for my other stories.
    Also, watch out for newer stories involving Justin Bieber!

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    yeah I know but still I shall post the first chapter now... if I have time!X
    oh by the way this is based in England!X
    ........................
    Chapter 1.
    When you came...

    "Hey so you must be Sian" Justin Bieber stated. Yes THE Justin Bieber. I had won a competition to have him all to myself for an entire weekend.
    "Hey yeah I am and you must be Justin!" I replied. He smiled and flipped the famous Bieber Swoosh, God he had such a cute smile and amazing hair it just made me want to run my fingers through it!
    "Well it's a pleasure to meet you Shawty!" he said with a grin. I nearly giggled like an idiot when he said that but I stopped and got composed before I made myself look like a right fool in front of him.
    "No the pleasures all mine" I stated and I meant it, just looking at him and actually being with him was so wow it was crazy to think that me Sian Harris, the nobody yet an avid musician, was meeting the biggest superstar of our time and he was staying with me for an entire weekend!
    "Cute" he said looking straight into my eye's. oohhh he had beautiful eye's, hazel with gold fleck's I could of stared into them forever but I knew I couldn't.
    "oh I know" I dramatically flicked my hair over my left shoulder with my hand. He laughed and said
    "ha real cute!" staring back at my eye's. "Ok I know your a big fan, I can see it in your gorgeous eye's, so get it out of your system, you have 6 seconds!" he told me.
    "you sure? 'cause you might want to brace yo'self!" he just motioned for me to continue so I did, I screamed bloody murder about everything I loved about him that I could fit in 6 seconds when they were up he held up a hand for me to stop and I did rather abruptly I don't think he expected me to stop like that because he started and said, "wow! 4 things: firstly, You really are a big fan, secondly, you have the most gorgeous big dark brown eyes I've ever seen, thirdly, You have really long amazing hair, how long is it!?"
    "2 foot and still growing" I told him
    "woah that's long, anyways fourthly, You seem like fun I can't wait for you to meet the guy's!" he stated. the guy's obviously meant...
    "Ryan, Chaz and Christian" I said with a knowing nod.
    "Ryan, Chaz and Christian" he repeated slyly, slowly nodding his head...

    so what do you think good or bad comments I don't mind!X? should I continue!X? comment on what you think should happen next!X

    right I'm a bridesmaid for my uncles wedding tomorrow so I probably won't be able to update for like 2 or 3 days that's if any one want's me to update!X
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    The CSI Team is putting the PurpleNinja behind bars...for being to sexy!X

    My FF What If I Was Close To You!X?
    http://justinbieber.org/justin-biebe...ose-you-x.html



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    keep going

    F*CK THE HATERS
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    DONT MESS WITH JUSTIN , Because In Every Belieber Endurance Rises, And
    If Kenny H. Cant Handle It, He Calls In The Back Up Squad: THE BELIEBERS:Notoriously Known For Getting The Job Done

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    please continue i think its great

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