Thread: Perfect two: chapter one

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Chapter 1


"bye mom. Bye pattie. Have fun in vacation. See you in 2 weeks. I kiss my mom on the cheek and give her a huge hug.
"bye justin, sweetheart. Bye lina. Do not get in any trouble. And no stauing out late. Alright?" pattie cautions. "absolutely, mom." justin chuckles.
Finally, after about 10 minutes of good-byes and rule-listing, our mothers leave and justin and i havethe house to ourselves for 2 entire weeks. For a moment or two we just stand near the door and stare at eachother. My mother and pattie decide they are going on vacation together, and my mom tells me im going to be staying wih justin bieber, alone, for 2 weeks. Even though we've been friends for a while, it is akward.
A little less than a year ago, i was a crazed girl with bieber fever. I was a more fortunate belieber, and won a chance to go to a justin bieber meet and greet. I thought it was going to be the best day of my life.
So, we arrive at the meet and greet, my mom and i, and wait in line till we finally get to the front, and reach justin bieber.
"oh my goodness! Sarah? Sarah castro?"
"mom, who are you talking to?" asked justin.
"pattie! Its been so long! My goodness! How have you been?" asks my mother.
"i've been wonderful. So this must be your daughter. I guess she's a justin fan?" assumes pattie.
"of course she is," laughs sarah. "yours must be, too, im assuming, if you're here."
"well,no. Sarah, justin is my son." pattie says, like my mother should know.
"hey, mom." justin pipes up, "i think we should go out to dinner, after all of this is done, with wour friend and her daughter, and you guys could catch up, and we could get to know eachother." he looks at me and winks.
"great idea. Sarah and i have a lot of catching up to do, i'm sure."
and that was that. Mine and justin's moms started hanging ot all the time, and of course justin and i would tag along to hang out together. We became pretty good friends. We would text and such. It was pretty cool, because after a couple of weeks people started talking about justin and i. The name lina castro was now associated wih the girl everyone was jealous of, because she was friends with justin bieber.
Eventually, justin and i started crushing on eachother. But, we never "wen out", or even aknowledged the fact that we liked eachother like that. We just stayed normal, if thats what you want to call it, friends. So, basically, this whole lina, justin crush thing, is where the whole akwardness of our stay together comes in.

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Chapter 2


Justin puts his hands in his pockets and rocks back and forth on his heels for a couple of seconds. "so..."
"so... what do you want to do?" i asked justin
"well, there's this party i was thinking we could go to. if you want, i mean."
"yeah. that sounds great. what should i wear though?" i ask a bit hesitant.
"casual? i guess." justin questions. i guess he doesn't really pay attention to what the girls are wearing at these parties he goes to. "i'm wearing like, jeans and a t-shirt, if that's any help." he offers. http://www.polyvore.com/justin_outfit/set?id=20272691&stream=1 "okay. give me 20 minutes." i run up to the room i'm staying in. thank god i packed my entire summer wardrobe, no lie. i instantly knew what i was going to wear. mi skinny jeans, black, hightop converse all stars, a nicer looking floral tube top, and a leather jacket. http://www.polyvore.com/lina_look_one/set?id=20271978&stream=1 after i put on my outfit, i do my makeup which is just something more natural, and i leave my hair down in its long, big, dark brown waves. i descend down the stairs after only a little over 10 minutes.
"ready." i announce as i hop off the bottom step of the staircase.
"wow. you look great." justin says as he stares at me awkwardly.
"thanks, but its not really much. you too, by the way, though."
he smiles ar me, and does the signature hair flip that makes girls swoon. amazing.
"well, i guess we should get going." we leave the house, get in justin's car, and drive. the drive to the party was about a half an hour to 40 minutes. the first couple of minutes were quiet. justin driving, and me looking out the window into the night time traffic.
"ummm, Lina? do you want some music or something?"
"sure. put on whatever you want." i say. justin flips on the radio to a station we often listen to when we're together. it's playing "OMG" by Usher. justin and i both start singing. after some more music, and some talking, we arrive at the party. it's just a normal, high school party, with normal, high school friends.
we walk around and talk to some people, the justin asks me to dance. "hey, Lina. wanna dance with me?" i take his hand and we walk out to the crowd of kids tangled together, bumping and grinding. justin and i go along with the crowd, and start rocking back and forth, together, to the music.
we stayed at the party for about 3 hours. we left before everyone else, so that we could beat the rush of the exiting party- goers. the whole way home, we talked about things at the party and how much fun we had. something one of us told the other on the way into the house had us laughing so hard we cried. instantly, the awkward vibe in the house was lifted. i felt way more comfortable.
"that was great." justin gasps, as his laughing subsides, and he wipes the joyful tears off of his face.
"yeah," i say and hop onto the counter in the kitchen. "so, what are we going to do for 2 whole weeks with no mothers?"
"we could party, like tonight. i had a really good time. thanks for coming with me, Lina. it was nice."
i hopped off the counter, and walked over to justin. "thanks for bringing me. i had a lot of fun." justin smiles and holds his arms out to embrace me in a hug. we stand there for a minute and just hold each other.
I pull away just a little, so that we're still holding onto each other. i looked up at him slowly. as i did this, justin's smile faded, and he looked at me intensely. he starts to lean in, and as soon as he's about to kiss me, his cell phone goes off. justin sighs, rolls his eyes and takes his phone out of his pocket.
"it's okay," i whisper as he answers the call, "i'm going to go upstairs and change." i turn around and run up the stairs quickly, who knows how ling this phone call will take? my best bet is to assume that i have the least amount of time possible.
when i go back downstairs, to see justin no longer on the phone, i am wearing yoga pants and a white juicy couture hoodie. my long, brown locks are still down. http://www.polyvore.com/lina_pajamas/set?id=20272978&stream=1 justin was leaning against the island in the kitchen area with only his t-shirt, jeans, and socks on. no shoes, jacket, or hat, amazingly.
i walk over and stand next to him. he stands completely straight up and looks at me. "who was that?" i inquire.
"my mom, saying goodnight. and your mom says goodnight, Lina. she's gonna call you tomorrow." justin informs me of this all in a sort of nervous tone. i look down a bit awkwardly at my feet, and twiddle with my thumbs.
i see justin start to approach me. "Lina?"
"yeah?"
justin leans down, takes both of my cheeks into his hands, and kisses me, ever-so-gently on the lips.
he releases my cheeks, and starts rambling on and on about how sorry he is.
"oh my gosh. Lina, i'm so sorry. i don't know what i was thinking. i can't believe i just did that."
i looked at him and smiled. "why are you smiling?! i shouldn't have done that." he exclaims, and starts pacing around the room.
"justin!" i shout walking over to him. "what?" he grunts, irritated with himself.
he turns around and looks at me. and without saying a single word i reach up, clasp my arms around his neck, and kiss him.
we hug each other, and just stand there holding each other.
"wanna watch a movie?" justin suggests.
"sure." i say in reply.
we walk into the living room, justin's arm around me, sit on the couch, and snuggle up close to each other. eventually we fall asleep to the sound of the TV.[/COLOR]

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Chapter 3



I wake up the next morning alerted by the feel of someone playing with my hair, and a little bitnof an aching back. Damn you couch! When i finally open my eyes, i find myself under a blanket in justin's arms.

He stops rubbing my hair and says with an enormous smile on his face, "good morning, Lina." then, he kisses me on the forehead, sweetly.

"good morning, justin." i reply, and with that, he holds me tighter. I wince a tiny bit in pain.

"you okay?" he asks, sounding a bit too concerned.

"yeah," i say, "but, i am never sleeping on this couch again! This has to be the least comfortable couh ever!" i whine.

"well, i do have a bed you know."

Did he just saythat like he's suggesting we will be doing this again? Sleeping together? In the same bed, or couch for that matter? I think he did. My day is off to a great start instantly.

I sit up and stretch out a bit, which is part of my normal morning routine. Justin sits up after me, looks around a little, and makes a funny face. Then, all of a sudden i hear a huge, and i mean massive, rumbling coming from his stomach.

"wow. A little bit hungry there? It's like your stomach's begging you for food." i giggle.

Justin frowns, "don't make fun of me. You've got to bu hungry. We didn't eat anything after our moms left."

"i know," i sigh, "i am hungry. Just not as hungry as you!" i tease.

I walk into the kitchen and olen the fridge, then the cabinets, and exclaim, "pancakes!" justin runs ito the kitchen and quickly offers to help, since i am the gues after all.

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It is now 11:00 am. I am refreshed, and completely ready to get my day started. When i walm down the stairs i realize, evidently, justin is, too.

"well," i sigh, "now that we've fed the beast," i say, poking justin gently in the stomach, "i must get some stuff done."

He puts on a fake pouty face and whimpers, "am i really that ugly?" he looked so pathetic, i had to laugh. "just kidding. What girl can resist THE justin bieber. I mean, look at me. I'm a god." justin says flipping his hair and winking at me.

I want to melt, but i play it off like it's nothing. Sadly, my attempt to stay cool, fails, i guess,

"lina." says a sing-songy voice. "i saw that."

"i saw a little bit of 'oh my slgosh! He just flipped his hair and winked at the same time!' " justin giggles as he leans into the wall and slides onto the floor like a melting popsicle.

"i think someone's a little full of themselves." i say back to him.

"i think someone has a crush on me." he teases.

"i could say the same exact thing to you, justin." i say kind of nervously.

"hey, im not gonna deny it. I like you, lina. A lot, actually." justin says calmly as he closes the door behind us.

I stop dead in my tracks, and say, "well, neither am i."

I continue walking, and justin catches up to me, so that he's right by my side, his hand brushes against mine, and then his finger intertwine with mine.

I swear i can see my heart leap out of my chest, and fall smack dab in the middle of the floor.

Chapter 4

Jusin's POV


it all started when i was like, twelve. i'd loved singing and performing since i can remember. i decided to put all of the videos in my local singing competition on youtube. not necessarily for the world to see, but to share with my friends and family.

i would have never guessed that i would end up being singed to usher, after being fought over by him and justin timberlake, himself. everything that has happened to me, has honestly been a dream come true.

i have hot, screaming girl fans. and people paying money to see me do what i love, and would gladly let them watch for free. i'm just justin bieber. a kid from a small place in canada. everyone knows wh i am, now. and people want my autograph. who knew signing autographs, though, would lead to such great things? i had no idea, until it lead to her.

like any other night at a meet and greet, i was sitting at a table with my team around me, signing autographs for some pretty cute girls, i have to say. we were near the end of the night, though, and i had already been signing for about 3 hours. almost the whole kinght, i've had my eye on this girl. she is one of the most beautiful girls i'v ever seen. and that's saying a lot for a 16 year old, hormonal guy.

as time passed, she was getting closer and closer to the table. finally, it was her turn to get an autograph. but, before i could say anything to her, my mom started freaking out and blabbering to the girls mom.

"oh my gosh! sarah castro? is that you?" mom said with excitement in her voice. i looked at her like she was crazy and thought, 'if this is not the woman she is talking about, i will be so embarrassed. people will think she's a total goon.'

"pattie? pattie mallette? wow! i haven't seen you in forever. how have you been?" says this sarah woman, like she has just found her long lost relative.

"i can't beliee we haven't spoken since high school." says mom

'yes!" i scream at the top of my lungs. "thank the good lord!" the parentals don't notice my sudden outburst, but the girl who was two seconds ago shocked like i was,looks at me.

"we're not relatives..." i inform her and she giggles at me.

"good," she smirks. she was even more gorgeous up close.

"so, mom, how about i sign these last couple of autographs, and then i take all 3 of you pretty ladies out to dinner. you and sarah can reminisce about the good old days."

both my mom and sarah agreed, and said that was a "marvelous idea".

"i owe you an autograph. what's your name, beautiful?" i asked smoothly.

"it's lina. and now that you know, you won't have to call me beautiful again." she snapped.

"sorry, lina. i get carried away sometimes."

"don't worry about it. i was kidding. i like it when you call me beautiful." she whispered.

and that was the story of how lina and i met. our moms decided to keep very close, and lina and i hung out all of the time. turns out they were moving to atlanta around the time lina and i met, so we got very close.

i obviously developed a huge crush on her. but, i don't think she thinks of me that way. sometimes she acts like it, but who knows? girls are just like that. now that lina's staying in my house with me for 2 weeks without our moms, i dont know what i'm going to do. maybe i should make a move.

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"bye, mom. love you." lina says as she hugs and kisser her mom goodbye.

"bye, justin," sarah says. i wave, and our moms finally leave. 2 weeks with lina, here i come.

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