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    I will post again tomorrow. And i might be starting a new story soon, as well.

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    here goes chapter 9... this is kind of just a fun chapter i guess...... haha


    Chapter 9
    Lina's POV

    we all left the beadles', and got in the car.

    "so, um," we were all sitting there awkwardly. justin didn't even start the car.

    "what the devil was that?!" christian blurts out.

    "yeah, what was that?" toni urges.

    "yeah, what was that?" i turn to justin, "because i have absolutely no idea."

    "are you freaking kidding me?!" justin kind of laughs. "you just freaking seduced me!"

    "you call that seducing?"

    "yes, i do."

    "oh, you just wait till you see what real seducing is."

    "oh lord. please don't." christian pleaded with me." i'm begging you!"

    "later," i say softly, and wink at justin.

    "you guys need to chill out." toni informs us.

    justin shrugs his shoulders, and starts the car up. i feel my phone vibrate, so i take it out and look at it. one new text message from toni. i turn around and gove her a wierd look, but open the message anyway.

    From: tonio
    Message: wht is goin on? are u 2 even d8ing?!

    -t


    i send her a reply.


    To: tonio
    Message: no we r not.. i dnt rele kno where we stand on this relationship. i am goin 2 tlk 2 him l8r

    -liners




    i turn around and look at toni again when she gets the message. she nods at me, and gives me a thumbs up.

    ********************************************

    we arrive at the grocery store, and no one moves to get out of the car.

    "are you ready to be attacked?" i ask.

    "as always." toni and christian open their doors to get out of the car. justin leans over and kisses me quickly.

    "in case i don't make it." he smiles and flips his hair.

    'too cute' i think to myself. when were all finally out of the car, we walk into the store bracing for the mob of girls we were sure would attack justin. i know it's only the grocery store, but they're everywhere.

    "do you hear that?" christian asks.

    "yep." answers justin.

    "i don't hear anything." toni and i question.

    "sweet, werrt silence." christian says and kisses his fingertips like an italian chef.

    "hey, christian," justin says motioning for him to go over, so justin could whisper in his ear. after justin finishes, christian says, "good idea, brah." delightedly.

    oh jesus. justin and christian both grab a cart, and we walk down the first isle. toni and i are walking on front of the boys talking. in the middle of our conversation, justin and christian run up to us, pick us up, and throw us each on a cart.

    "lovely" i laugh. neither of us protest, so we go around the whole store getting what we need, and sticking it in the cart, along with ourselves.

    "j-j-justin... bieber!" someone behind us stutters. we all turn around and look. there is an abnormally large group of girls that start running down the isle.

    "hold on tight!" christian yells. i grip my cart for dear life. justin and christian start sprinting around the store as fast as they can. we turn a corner, and see a huge group of flashing cameras. paparazzi.

    "run!" dont stop!" justin shouts. with that him and christian run as fast as they can towards the paparazzi. toni and i are just sitting there cracking up. finally, the paparazzi clears out of the was. i dont think they want to be hit by grocery carts full of girls, being crazily pushed by 2 teenage boys.

    'i can just see that picture on the front of a magazine.'

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    Thumbs up Update !!!

    I love this story so plz plz update.

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    Chapter 10
    Justin's POV


    "finally, back home." i sigh. "running from hot girls is hard work, right christian?" we laugh and fist bump.

    "wow," says toni, "you guys are so lame."

    "ain't that right." lina giggles, and toni and her do a little handshake. i just roll my eyes.

    my feet find their way to lina, my hands find theirr way to her waist, and my lips to her ear.

    "so, when are you gonna teach me what real seducing is?" i whispered to lina, kissing her ear, and moving my way down her neck. she seemed to enjoy it for a minute, but then she shyed away.

    "i need to talk to you." she says.

    'kill joy!' i exclaim in my head. she walks to my room, and walks in. i follow her. i walk in, and close the door a little too forcefully. not a single word comes out of my mouth. i simply cross my arms, and stare lina down with my brown, almond eyes.

    "why are you looking at me like that?"

    nothing. i stare.

    "justin. you're not in trouble or anything. chill out."

    "well why did you say 'we have to talk' right when i was kissing you?"

    "because."

    "because why?"

    "because, i need to know where we are. what we are."

    "oh."

    "yeah."

    "well, i think we're really good friends, that like each other, and for now, are testing the waters."

    "okay. we're two really good friends that like each other, and are seeing how things go." lina speculates. as she's doing so, i cross the room and stand before her, and take her hands in mine.

    "mhm." i agree, as i lean in and start kissing lina. but, these kisses are not ones a friend would give a friend. these were multiple deep, forceful kisses. lina let's go of my hands, and they creep their was up my body. one hand crushes the collar of my shirt with her fings, and the other slides its way up my neck, and into my hair.

    i slide my hands down lina's wait, and dont stop. lina's kisses are getting more urgent. i lift lina off the ground and she wraps her legs around my waist. i could have sworn she was as light as air.

    i walk over to my bed, and lay her down. the kissing doesn't stop. this is until we are so rudely interrupted, byt christian.

    "whoa, whoa, whoa dude. keep it in your pants."

    "ugh" i groan. lina and i just lay there, staring at christian.

    "i'm not leaving until you guys do."

    "fine." lina says exasperatedly, as she gets up and leaves the room. i look at the ceiling and raise my hands, as if i were silently asking God, why? christian walks over to me .

    "dude..." he says extending his arm to fist bump me.

    "wait, what?"

    "justin, way to go man."

    "umm..."

    "man, lina is hot. ans she was just all over you.. are you guys together?"

    "nah, not yet." i said emphasizing the yet.

    "that's my boy."

    "yeaaaah man."

    "oh, and do you think you could hook me up with toni? she's hot, and pretty chill." christian says like toni is the greatest thing since sliced bread.

    "i'll try talking to lina about it. i think i have an idea."



    ooo. what is the idea?? and will it happen. and what is going to happen with lina and justin??

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    hey guys btw i made outifts and stuff for everyone soo check it out!!

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    post moreee plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz im addicted to this story

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    yea i like this i really like this.more please nowwwwww

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    i apologize for the shortness, but there is lots and lots of drama to come.


    Chapter 11

    i slide my cell phone out of my pocket, and send a text to lina. i don't want to talk about the surprise in front of toni.

    To: linaa
    Message: hey. christian sort of has a thing for toni, and i was thinking we could set them up tonight.

    -j


    To: biebs
    Message: k sounds like a good idea. how will we do it?

    -liners


    To:linaa
    Message: all u need 2 do is bring toni 2 the guest room 2 distract her 4 a while.

    -j


    To: biebs
    Message: k. how long?

    -liners


    To: linaa
    Message: ill txt u when we r done.

    -j


    To: biebs
    Message: ill be waiting

    -liners



    "okay chris. lina's in. i told her and toni to hang in the guest room for a while."

    "thanks brah."

    "um, do you think you could set this up by yourself? i want to set something up for me and lina."

    "sure, i guess. but, if this looks like ****, and i don't get the girl, im blaming you!"

    "fair enough." i laugh. i left christian to fend for himself. i'm confident he can set up a date alone. he did learn from me, mr. romance. and actually, mr. romance has some work to do himself.

    ****************************************

    "hey, chris. you ready?" i ask, walking into the living room. my little bro did a pretty good job.

    "it's clean, i gots the chick flicks, strawberries, chocolate, and candles. good?" he asks, hopefully.

    "perfect, little-man." he smiles. yet again i pull out my cell phone, and text lina.

    To: linaa
    Message: we r ready. r u? dress cute.

    -j


    To: biebs
    Message: 15 min.

    -liners



    "15 minutes, chris." i sigh.

    the 15 minutes quickly go by, and chris and i jump off the couch when lina and toni descend down the stairs. mt eyes are glued to lina. she looks gorgeous, and all she's wearing is jeans and a t-shirt. she walks over to me, and hold my hand.

    "so, toni. do you want to hang out in the living room?" asks christian. toni follows him in. lina and i hear her gasp when she sees it.

    "let's go to your room." lina drags me to my door.

    "i don't know if you want to o in there. it's a mess."

    "justin, it was fine before." she opens the door and walks in.

    "justin!" she gasps.

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    That was a amazing update and I can't wait in2 the next one.

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    thanks for the support guys!! new chapter coming up..............now! sorry this one is really short.... but its sooooo uber dramatic. i think you're gonna love it. i loved writing it. and after this chapter, i've been kind of having a writers block, so i dont know when chapter 13 will be up. i think i might have an iidea of what i want to happen. but, for now, why don't you guys comment with how you're feeling with where the story's going. and you can throw any ideas you have out there for me to consider. i don't want to write something you guys won't like haha. give me some advice!!



    Chapter 12

    when i walked into justin's room, i was in awe. it was the most perfect romantic thing i've ever seen.

    "justin, it's gorgeous." i gushed.

    "you really like it?" i nod, and just stand there, and take everything in. justin dressed his bed in luxurious purple pillows, and a comforter. and the whole room was scattered with deep red rose petals, and a single red rose was lying in the middle of the bed. also, the room was lit by only sweet smelling vanilla candles.

    i hug justin. "thank you. it's perfect." i whisper. justin pulls away and looks at me sweetly.

    "you look beautiful, lina."

    "really? you think?"

    "i always think that." aww! justin takes my hands, and leads me to the bed. we sit and talk for about an hour. we get to know each other more, on a different level. i want to know everything about him.

    "i really like you lina."

    "i really like you, too. i don't think i've ever liked anyone more."

    "i really hope we can get all of this to work out."

    "me, too." justin scooches over to me and he gives me one kiss, and i can tell he's smiling through it. after this one kiss, he pulls away, and stares at me. it's like he's asking me if it's okay. i smile and nod, and kiss justin back.

    at first we're just kissing, then it turns into more. a complete make out session. and i'm completely okay with this. i guess though, i was so caught up in the moment, i wasn't paying attention to justin getting aggressive, and both of our clothes coming off. all of a sudden, it hits me.

    "justin, justin. stop!"

    "what?"

    "we can't do this."

    "what do you mean? we like each other. don't we?"

    "justin, you know i like you. so much. but, im 15 and you're 16. you might think you're ready for this, but i'm not."

    "come on, lina."

    "no." i stand up and put my jeans on. justin picks something up, and throws it across the room. i jump, and a sob escapes my mouth. i turn around, and i think i see him crying. that makes me cry even harder.

    "why are you crying?" i ask him, between sobs.

    "i knew you didn't really like me. like, like me enough to have a real relationship with me. it was too good to be true, that a girl i liked wouldn't like me just for the attention. you're just like the rest of them."

    "justin, no! i-"

    "shut up! just get out!"

    "ju-"

    "i said get out!" he screams at me. i pick up my shirt off the ground, open the door, and walk out. i hear justin slam the door behind me.




    oh no! lina and justin aren't a good match? what will happen? well, we will see, won't we??

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