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    Madisyn James stood by a big tree in the park impatiently. Her best friend was forty minutes late and she was pissed. After another five minutes of waiting a sixteen year old boy in a dark hoodie and sunglasses came running up.
    "I'm so so so sorry I'm late!" He panted.
    "You always say that, Justin" She smirked
    "So I take it I'm forgiven." He asked with a lop-sided smile
    "For now." She answered and hugged him.
    He wrapped his arms around her and spun her in a circle. "Awesome!"
    She moved to get out of the hug but he wouldn't let go. Everybody knew Justin had a huge crush on Madisyn, truthfully she didn't much but. . . . "I have a boyfriend, Biebs" She shrugged his arms off and took a step back.
    "You're still dating that **** head?" He asked Incredoulously.
    "Levi's not a **** and yes" She answered dutifully
    "He's a jerk Mads"
    "No he's not" She defended, if only she believed her half of the arguement.
    "He isn't good for you MJ!" He insisted
    'Oh Bieber you don't know the half of it. . . .' She thought to herself
    "Can we just have a friend day Justin, since you became famous we barely hang out." She changed the subject
    "Fine." Said Justin "But I still don't like him"
    "What ever" Shrigged Madisyn, 'I don't either.' she thought

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    I like how you started this off. Really good!

    Is that you in the picture? Very pretty. :]
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    Quote Originally Posted by puffycloud View Post
    I like how you started this off. Really good!

    Is that you in the picture? Very pretty. :]
    No it's not me, I wish it was though Thanks for commenting

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    Justin and I had a fun day which included acting like complete five year olds at the park, going shopping, singing, driving to no where in particular and falling into a creek. So afterall that fun we ended up walking home soaking wet.
    We walked up my front steps and I discovered no one was home and I was locked out, great.
    Justin, who lived next door invited me to his house for awhile. Of course I had spare clothes over there from my constant presence at his house.
    At his house we played guitar hero for a couple hours, of course his mom had a spare key to my house, but who said I don't want to spend more time with my best buddy.
    So after two hours of guitar hero and rock band I was pulled up the steps to Justin's room, "What are you doing?" I asked, laughing.
    "We're making a youtube video!" He smirked and handed me his guitar.
    "What?" I asked, my eyes getting wide.
    "What song you wanna do?" He asked ignoring my question.
    "I uh-" I stuttered
    "You won't even notice I'm here just play and sing and stuff" He smirked and grabbed his video camera.
    IAs he turned on the camera he turned it towards his face and bl;ew a kiss into it "Hey guys this is Justin Bieber and Madisyn over there is my bestest buddy ever! So you guys gotta listen to her sing, kay" He turned the camera towards me.
    "Justin" I groaned
    "Start singing!" He commanded
    I shrugged and started strumming at the guitar, I sang Ignorance by Paramore and as soon as I was done Justin started wildly clapping. "Amazing Mads!!!!" He exclaimed. Then turned the camera towards his face "Seriously I didn't know she was that good!" He nodded and turned it back toward me. "Anything to say to the peoples?" he asked
    I waved shyly and smiled "Hi peoples?"
    "Good enough" He smiled and again turned the camera towards him "She's so outgoing right?" He laughed "Well goodnight ya'll!" With that he turned off the camera and got on the computer.
    "I hate you." I said leaning on the back of his chair.
    "Love you too" He smirked and uploaded the video to youtube. Eventually I went home and went to bed nothing to exciting happened. Until, that is, I was woken up at five in the morning by a very hyper Justin. "What the heck is wrong with you!" I asked throwing a pillow at him
    "Your son has like 35 comments on it Mads!!!" He exclaimed
    "How did you get in my house?" I asked smacking him, "and what makes you think I care about the video?"
    "Just come om." He at my laptop and logged into youtube.
    "Freak." I muttered
    "I Heard that!" He chimed cheerfully
    "How much coffee have you had?" I asked
    "One or two cups. . . . Maybe 5!"
    "FIVE?!" I asked
    "Here's the video!" He exclaimed, what a dork.
    I looked, there were forty comments on it saying how great I sang. I stood my mouyth gaping.
    "Amazing right!?!?!?!" He smiled "I don'[t even get that many within 12 hours!"
    "Oh my god" I stuttered

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    YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!! it's beautiful!

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    Yes! Continue pleasee!
    I LOVE JUSTIN DREW BIEBER <3

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    Post Chapter 3

    pic of Madisyn's car:

    We looked through all the comments on the video, they were awesome. "Hey let me check my email really quick" I said
    "Fine but I'm not getting out of the chair" He said
    "Then I'm gonna sit on you" I said
    "Go right ahead, and for getting you p so early I'll take you to Starbucks when you're down."
    I laughed and sat on his lap, "It's a deal" I typed msn into the URL on the computer and waited for it to load. The first thing I saw when the site popped up was the little news banner. On it was a picture of me and Justin at the creek, "Bieber's new girlfriend!" It read clearly.
    "Oh my god" Said Justin.
    "I can't believe this" I clicked the link
    Teen heart throb Justin Bieber was spotted hanging out at the creek with a new girl. Who is this mystery girl? Beiber's new girl. All the female fans are devasted to find that Justin is now off the market. All over the country tweens are sending messages of hate to this Madisyn James. The two looked like they were in a pretty serious romance, they even pushed each other into the creek. Tell us, how does the name Madisyn Bieber sound? Both Justin and I's faces were growing red as we read the article. "How did that look like a serious relationshp?" I asked "We were just goofing off."
    "The press is always looking for ways to embaress me" Justin growled
    I sighed, "What's Levi gonna say?"
    "Who cares about that moron?" He asked getting up and pushing me from his lap in the process.
    I didn't care about that moron but- "He'll probably try to kill me" Said Justin
    "No he won't" I answered
    "Levi and I used to be friends, I know what he's like Madisyn" Was all he would say.
    "So what do we do now?" I asked.
    "I told you we're going to Star bucks, didn't I?" He smirked
    "What?" I asked, was he crazy?
    "Hey, the press want dirt, let's give 'em somethin' to talk about, eh?"
    I laughed "Okay!" I looked down and realized I was wearing light blue short shorts, bright blue fuzzy slippers and a sponge bob speghetti strap shirt. "but look at how I'm dressed" I said
    "Look at how I'm dressed" He was wearing green pajama bottoms and an open jacket with no shirt. "Like I said, let's give 'em something to talk about" He smirked and tossed me my splatter painted hoodie.
    I smiled "Let's go." I had completely forgotten about Levi.
    We ran out into my driveway, "My car or your's?" Asked Justin
    "Mine!" I exclaimed running to open my garage my door.
    "Fine but I get to drive!!!" He announced
    "Whatever!" I pushed up the garage door and jumped into the pasasenger's side of my red convertable without opening the door. He sat in the driver's seat, "Keys?" He held out his hand.
    I sighed and put the keys in his hand. He smiled and started the car and back out of the driveway. I giggled and turned on the radio, loosing my auburn hair from it's ponytail letting it sweep all over face from the rush of wind in the topless convertable.
    Justin's song "Baby" Came on and he started singing to it "My first love broke my heart for the first time and I was like baby baby baby ohh like baby baby baby noo" He looked at me out of the corner of his eye with a smile. He moved to switch the station, not a big fan of listening to himself on the radio. I slapped his hand away from the dial "I like this song" I smirked.
    "You like all the songs that are about you. . . ." He murmered with a smile, his eyes still on the road.
    "What?" I asked
    "Nothing." He smirked
    "Is it about me?" I asked
    "Most of them are. . . ." He whispered
    The radio DJ's voice came on "Hey ladies this is Justin Bieber for the next to hours hope you enjoy it. Here's Love Me"
    Justin groaned "can I change it?"
    "No!" I smiled and started singing along "Kiss me, Kiss meSay that you miss meTell me what I wanna hear tell me you love me Love me, Love me say that you love me"
    He smirked at me singing his song. "I love you" He murmered at he pulled unto the parking lot of Star Bucks.

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    This made me smile. Write more when you can.

    =)
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    THis is amazing!! PLEASE write more!!

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    CONTINUE please! this is really good!
    I LOVE JUSTIN DREW BIEBER <3

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