Thread: Into you

Jessica Donovan is beautiful girl, she is 16 and went to New York to the concert of one of her favorite singer. She was with her brother Tyler she was waiting to see her favorite star, she was really excited.

Tyler: I'm really tired!! can we just go home please?
He looked at Jessica, she nodded her head as to say "no"

Tyler: Come on! I mean it's not like knew you! he doesn't even know you exist, Jess' let's go please!
With all those girls around us I'm just going crazy!

Jessica: Shut up Ty', I'm sure he's coming, just wait!

Everyone was screaming when He cames, Jessica couldn't look away; he was really awesome!!

Ty': What's his name?

Jessica: Josh Gaves! Waw he is perfect!
When the concert was over, Jessica and Tyler called one of her dad's limo, her dad is a rich movie producer.

Ricardo was her driver, he always been nice to her and to Tyler.

Jessica: Hey, Ricardo, we want to go back to the Monte Carlo Hotel, I'm really tired!

Tyler: Yes I'm tired too!! I just want to sleep now!!

Ricardo: Ok, Ty' you seem a little... whatever? At the hotel huh? Let's go

Jessica: It was the best concert ever!! it's really...

Tyler: Stop please, I don't want to hear about this Josh.. thing, leave me alone please

A week later, her dad Aaron Donovan was invited to a party, he was looking for somebody to play one of the mains characters and wanted to have a french actress, some singers were at this party to make the promotion of their albums. Jessica drunk a coca cola and went to the pool, she read the text message that Liam, her boyfriend send to her.
Text message: Hey Jess' sorry but I'm done with you, I don't love you anymore, I'm breaking up with you.

Tears were filling her eyes, she was really in love with him. She went to see Tyler and told him what happened

Tyler: He is a looser, you are too good for him, trust me he doesn't diserve you.
Jessica: Thank you Ty' I feel better, but I need to be alone, I'll be at the pool

Jessica wanted the party to end because she wanted to lock herself in her bedroom so she could cry in private, but a nice guy with beautiful eyes sat in front of her.

The guy: Hey, It's me and you?

Jessica: I'm Jessica but you can call me Jess'

The guy: Ok Jess', so why are you so sad?

Jessica tried to dry her tears and said: I'm not

the guy laughed and said: ok so why are you "not sad"?

Jessica read one more time Liam's message, the guy took the cell phone read the message and said: What a jerk! I mean he is a really, really bad boy!

Jessica: he is my ex boyfriend and I just, I don't understand why, he didn't explain anything! Tell me dude, why boys are so idiot?

The guy: I don't know but it's not our fault you know it's just like that!

Jessica: Ok I get it! it's like that, now it seems really clear to me
She rolled her eyes and smiled
the guy: Good, you are smiling! perfect I think my mission is accomplished, why are you at this party ?

Jessica: My dad is Aaron Donovan the movie producer, he is looking for an actress, and you?

the guy: I'm just a little singer, you don't know me?
he smiled at her

Jessica: No sorry, I don't, sorry I have to go

She was in the limo when her brother asked her: The guy you were talking to, it was Justin Bieber no?

Jessica: Justin who?

Tyler: whatever...

Write More! Plzz!

I agree! Great story so far!

Previously

She was in the limo when her brother asked her: The guy you were talking to, it was Justin Bieber no?

Jessica: Justin who?

Tyler: whatever...

Now

The morning after the party, Jessica woke up and eat breakfast with her brother.

Jessica: Yesterday I just couldn’t understand why Liam left me, but now I know! I think he met another girl and that’s because I came here. I mean he just felt alone.

Tyler: Why are you searching excuses do this idiot, he broke up with you in a text message forget him. He is a fool.

Jessica: I’m not searching excuses, I just try to understand!

Tyler: You don’t have to understand anything, he’s just the worst guy you’ve been with!

Jessica: huh, You mean he’s the ONLY guy I’ve been with! Seriously, look at me, look at my clothes I don’t have any style, I’m just normal, guys wants more, they want the type of girls you find in magazines, and I’m not one of them!

Tyler: You need to wake up Jess’ your beautiful, there is one thing you don’t know, You see Mike?

Jessica: Yeah the cute guy you’ve been hanging out with, he’s one of your friends no?

Tyler: Yep, well he wanted to ask you out, I told him not to

Jessica: What? You did it? Why? I mean I liked him! You really suck you know it?
She was really angry at him, Mike looked perfect for her.

Tyler: I told him not to because he is a jerk with girls, anyway, you see your beautiful, just don’t worry about it!

After the breakfast, Jessica went to her room, she was trying the red dresse she bought a week earlier. She looked herself in the mirror and smiled.

Jessica: Whoa this dress is wonderful, Liam is gonna lov…
She stopped talking when she remembered the text message. She lie down in her bed turned on the radio, and started crying, a song was on, it was a guy singing, good voice, beautiful song

Song : Where are you now, when I need you the most,
Why don’t you take my hand, I wanna be close
Take my hand and walk with me
Where are you now when nothing’s going right

She really liked this song cause it was what she felt about Liam, he was her first love, her first kiss. It was really important. At the end of the song the guy from the radio said:
It was WHERE ARE YOU NOW by Justin Bieber.
Jess’ dry her tears and run out the room to see Tyler,

Jessica: The guy I was talking to yesterday, what’s his name?

Tyler: Justin Bierber why?

Jessica: Whoa, I had no idea who I was talking to! He is really nice by the way, I can’t believe it, I talked to him, He smiled at me, Oh my god I have to see him again he’s just a great guy.

Tyler: Not like this fool of Liam

Jessica: Don’t talk about him please, I don’t wanna cry again, My god, I just hear his song named WHERE ARE YOU NOW, it’s amazing when I’ll tell this to Lauren she’ll be jealous.


Jessica waited her dad because she though that may be he knew where Justin was, but when she asked him he was like: This bieber is a good kid, but I don’t know where he is.

Jessica: Please daddy I want to see him.

The famous movie producer couldn’t say “no” to his daughter and Jessica knew it, She looked at him sadly and said with a little voice: Daddy, please, please, please, please, pretty pretty pretty please!!

Aaron: Ok I’ll see what I can do, Ok you won, are you happy now?

Aaron took his cell phone and called Justin’s manager.

Aaron: Hello scooter, it’s Aaron Donovan,my daughter wants to see Justin Bieber, can you do that for her?.... Ok thank you, I think she’ll be really happy.

He looked at her and said: you can see him tomorrow at the Clauses party, it’s a party where you’d be able to see a lot of stars. Do you want my credit card to buy a dress or shoes or some stuff to get ready?

Jessica: Why not, I have the dresse but I still have to find the shoes! Thank’s daddy.

She kissed him on the cheek, said “ I love you” took the credit card and called Amy, Tyler’s girlfriend to go shopping.

Jessica: Ready to go? She said when she saw Amy dressed with Levis jeans, white converse and blue top with a channel blue bag.

Can somebody tell me if I have to write more or if no one likes it please?

This story is really good! Plz update soon!

I like the story but I think you need a beta reader. Just someone who reads over stuff before you post and helps edit any mistakes.

And it seems like a self-insert which is always fun to write but when you make the main chick so out of this world with money and limos and rich daddy's, it doesn't seem as realistic. I still like the ideas though. I would love to read more, and I'm fine with helping you in any way. I write a LOT of fanfiction so I have a little bit of practice. Feel free to ask me. Hope to see more from you soon.

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Madi

Thank you Kadaver, the reason why I have a lot of mistakes it's because I'm french so it a little hard to write well! It will be great if you helped me to get better at this! I'll write more soon!!

Previously:

She kissed him on the cheek, said “ I love you” took the credit card and called Amy, Tyler’s girlfriend to go shopping.

Jessica: Ready to go? She said when she saw Amy dressed with Levis jeans, white converse and blue top with a channel blue bag.

Now:

Jessica and Amy came to a beautiful store, where Jessica saw beautiful things.

Jessica: Oh my god did you see those shoes? Which color is your favorite? I should buy them in black or in red?

Saleswoman: That's a good choise, you really should take them.

Jessica: Huuh, well, I don't know I like them but, it's too much I think? Isn't it
She looked at Amy who was staring at black court shoes Gucci.

Amy: No I don't think so,
She said still looking at the court shoes.
Amy: You should pick them, the black ones I mean.

Amy bought a bag and Jessica took the shoes, they came at the Hotel and began to get ready.
Jessica smooth her hair, slipped on her red dress and put her shoes on. She didn't want to make up too much because she thought it would be too much so she just put a lip gloss.

Her dad was waiting for her when she went down staires, she looked at him, he was smart in his black suit.

Aaron: Whoa, you look great!

Jessica: thank you daddy, where is Tyler?

Tyler: Here I am! don't worry. You look fantastic by the way!

Jessica: Thank you

Tyler: Sorry Jess' but I was talking to Amy

Amy: Oh, thank you, you're not bad either.

At the party, Jessica looked around her and saw.... a lot of beautiful girls and felt unconfortable. She was looking for Justin, when she saw him, he was talking to his friend.

Justin: Oh... Jessica? Isn't it?

Jessica was a little shy but said: Yeah it is.

Justin: You look great! Really! Oh sorry, Ryan this is Jessica...

Ryan: The girl you've been talking about all day.

Justin: Thank you!

He said a little upset.

Ryan was laughing, but Justin looked shy.

Justin: So, you wanted to see me?

Jessica: Oh my god, who told you that? Your manager?

Justin: What are you talking about? Did you call scooter?

Jessica: What? me? No? Never! Why would I do that?

Justin: Jessica!!

Jessica: Ok I did, I mean my dad did it! The other day at the party, my brother saw us, when we went to the car he asked " wasn't it Justin Bieber you were talking to?" And I was like " Justin Who?", then yesterday I heard your song "Where are you now" at the radio, at the end of the song the guy of the radio said " It was Where are you now by Justin Bieber"

Justin: Oh, you didn't know me before? So did you liked it?

Jessica: What?

Justin: The song!

Jessica: Yes I loved it, and I don't say that because you are in front of me, I really loved it.

Justin: Great, so why did you wanted to see me?

Jessica: I don't know actually, the other day I didn't know who you are but I liked our talk. Just thank you for listening to me.

Justin: It's ok, you really didn't know who I was?

Jessica: No

Justin: OUCH! It really hurts!

Jessica: Really?

Justin: Yes! I mean I'm a superstar!.... I'm just kidding!

Jessica: Ah ah! really funny! Can I have an autograph?

Justin: Sure, I don't have a pen

Jessica: I'm just kidding! it's ok.

Kewl, Nice chapter.

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