Thread: you belong with me

So I started to write a fanfic after weeks of thinking about it.I hope it’s not too bad so I’d like to hear all different comments-bad and good. 
Alice’s POV
Waking up at 7 I run to my computer to check some emails. Nothing. Great. As Always. I shrug and go straight away to get ready for school. I meet my friend, Faith, apologizing for the gazillionth time for coming ten minutes late.
“Look, I’m sorry, but I’m a girl! What can you expect?”
“Yeah, yeah…Whatever, just like me. Anyways, have you heard the big news??”
“what?! You found your dog?”
“No..not yet. JUSTIN BIEBER IS COMING FOR A CONCERT!!”
“NO WAY!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS??!!?!””
“Dude, relax. APRIL FOOL’S!!”
“Great.I hate April fool’s!!”
At school everything’s just the way it always is and finally it’s computer class. I click the one in parenthesis next to Inbox and the mail’s from J-Bieber.org for which I signed up a while ago. You see, I have this major crush on Justin Bieber. I mean, come on, who doesn’t? Well, ok, except for Miley Cyrus. He’s cute, talented and just…..CUTE!!

CHAT WITH JUSTIN BIEBER. TODAY 7:30 EST
*EXTRA EXCITED* a second of silence *rewinds*…time difference*
Come on!! How am I supposed to know when it starts. I get home, finish my homework and check the same mail again. I give it a try and clicked the link. Luckily, it was still on! I looked at my screen and then at the millions of questions that popped up each second which Justin had to answer. Think! Think! I yell at the top of my lungs. “What should I ask?” no idea. I decided to start off with something random and asked “Who’s in your wolf pack?” He’s like, “Good question! Let me see…Usher, Ryan, Chaz and all the other cool people” I didn’t expect him to answer that fast! I’d have to say, this is the BEST DAY OF MY LIFE. Yeah, I know, just a question. BUT IT WAS ANSWERED BY JB!! LOL…This is awesome!!Thank god this site wasn’t blocked!! More and more questions started popping up and I was like well, maybe I’ll ask one more. It turned out that I asked him a total of 22 questions which were most pretty much random. I would’ve NEVER expected this but he asked if I had a twitter account so that he could follow me. This sucked. No twitter here. WHY GOD WHY?! I answered with great sadness on my face that it’s blocked here. He seemed to be amazed and asked if facebook was too. Yup, ofcourse. Great. The Best Day of My Life was just ruined because some Chinese idiot from the government decided to block three of my best sites. Awesome, thanks to the dude. So I just continue asking him questions and to my surprise, he didn’t seem annoyed. I mean there are probably millions of stars out there who pretty much get annoyed when media/fans ask them tons of questions. But this is Justin Bieber, and it’s unsurprising that he loves his fans more than anything since we were the ones who were there for him and made him this big! We were the ones to support him all the time. He’s just so sweet! I couldn’t believe this but when I looked at the clock, it was 4 am already!! I logged off from the site and fell asleep on my computer for the first time in my life, and even with a smile.
“Ring, Ring” Here goes the alarm. Man!! I so wanna go to bed. So the same routine goes. Check my mail. Nothing. Get ready for school, meet Faith, apologize, then go on talking about the day he answered my question.
“Wow! You should’ve sent me the link!” she says.
“Sorry, but I was in so much excitement that I couldn’t even blink my eye twice before he answered the 21st question!”
“Haha. That’s so cool!! You should send me the link next time though”
“Ok, ok. I will.”
We had like 2 tests today for which I didn’t feel like studying but the questions were pretty easy so I just didn’t care. In computer class, a mail comes from J-Bieber.org. This time, there was a competition. We had to write about why we love Justin Bieber and the 20 best ones will get a free ticket to one of his concerts and a meet and greet thing after the concert. The 10 best ones will get to sit on the seat with him in one of the concert, meet and greet and actually spend a day with him! I always loved writing stories and poems since I was like 9 but I just doubted that I would win. Someone once said that you have to never give up in our dreams (wink wink melaniexxm )and I knew that I just had to give it a try. So I began writing the I don’t know what it’s called, I guess some kind of a story 2 weeks before it was due. I worked on it every day after finishing my homework and just kept on going for my goal. I really wanted to be one of the 20. That’s what I strived for. At first my whole story was like 3 pages but then at the last couple of days I decided to narrow it down into something simple, yet strong. I began it with: “Justin is one of those young people whom I can actually look up to. I used to listen to emo songs before he came along and changed me. Some of my friends are critical about him, but I think that if they think about it that way, then they’re just not the kind of friends I want. I feel like since Michael Jackson, the world’s biggest legend died, he brought us an angel from above, who sings about what he likes, about teenage love. Justin has taught me to never give up and to put God first. Not only is he my favorite singer, but also an inspiration. He’s just the kind of person that the world has been looking for all along. Not only has he brought songs to us but he’s also involved in charity. He’s just someone that I really love inside out. I am not the greatest writer so I guess that’s all I have to say.” Yeah, I know it sounds kind of lame and stuff but come on, I’m not a genius over here. So I sent them the letter and waited for the reply. Weeks floated by and then months. By the end of the fifth month, I just gave up, knowing that there are billions of fans out there who could write way better than that. Then, one day, I got an email from them. Opening the mail, I hoped it was not the negative one…

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More! I have to know what happens next.

Still Alice’s POV
I don’t know how or when but I eventually opened the mail and read the first two most frightening words I’ve ever read. “Dear Fan”. Ok, ok, fine. Not the most frightening words there can be, but come on, I was scared. “….you were chosen as the 15th winner for the Justin Bieber essay. Justin Bieber’s people will come and pick you up on a private jet to fly you back to Canada for your ‘date’ and concert in two weeks, on the 24th of April. Please send us your address. Congratulations.” Wow. That’s all I could say at that moment. I didn’t jump up and down or scream at the top of my lungs. For like about 15 minutes I couldn’t believe the mail was sent to me and thought that they got the wrong mail address. What if they did? I mean, I took it all as a joke and I am a winner now? Yeah, right. My feet were shaking, my eyes were wide open and it felt like they could pop out any moment. I came up to my mom and dad who were watching a movie about people with the sixth sense and yelled, “ I WON THE CONTEST!” None of them believed what they just saw. They just stared at me with the same expression I had on my face when I won the contest. I was always the quiet kid. My whole family was actually always quiet. We were the peaceful type of family but at the same time, we were never the touchy-feeling type. After what felt like forever my mom finally spoke.
“Honey, calm down. We haven’t seen you this way since like…forever. Now, what contest did you win?”
“The Justin Bieber essay one. We were supposed to write about why we lo…ike J. Biebs.”
“Aww…sweetheart….that’s so wonderful!” my mom says
I hated when my parents called me honey or sweetheart…it just sounded so….awkward.
“My kid’s a genius!” my dad exclaims in excitement
For a second I slightly smiled and praised myself but then shook my head
“ So, um, that means I’m going to travel to Canada to actually meet him. His people are coming to pick me up in a private jet.”
*speechless*
(silence for just a little bit longer than what was expected)
“ Dad? Mom? You guys ok?”
My brother comes out from his room wearing boxers and asks, “What just happened?”
“Apparently Alice is going to fly to Canada to meet the man of her dreams. She always talks about him *winks*”
“Shut up Mary!” I yell but smile inside
Mary is my twin sister. She knows everything about me. She’s everything to me. Like the second part of me, but sometimes, she has a really big mouth. That’s just who she is. Haha, and I love her that way. Mary never liked Justin Bieber, she’s more into emo and rock inside out and that’s what basically makes us different. We are identical twins and I’m pretty sure that no one will ever tell who’s who if we wear the same clothes. That’s why my mom never buys us the “twin clothes” because she’s scared people will never guess who’s who. We also wear a necklace each with our names on it. Her’s is black with white letters and tiny black wings attached and mine is purple with white letters on it... ANYWAYS…

My mom and dad finally speak and agree after a week that I could fly to Canada. I don’t know why, but I didn’t even tell Faith or my classmates where I was going. After a week, Justin Bieber’s people finally came and picked me up. Before I left, I looked at my sister and said, “No, I can’t leave if you’re not going with me” She looked pretty much shocked and looked at mom who pointed to a bag with her stuff in it and winked. “We knew that your sister couldn’t leave without you, so, why don’t you go with her? Have fun! You’ll only get this chance once in a lifetime!” My sis grabbed her stuff quickly, put on her green Converse sneakers and we left.
My brother, Nikita, comes out and was like, "That's so unfair!"
My mom was like, "You're gonna leave to Canada in a year anyways, so what's the point of going there now?"
"great. Not only are you telling me that both of my sisters are leaving but also that I'm leaving next year too? this is unbelievable!"
" Awww...honey, you know we love you"
"Yeah, yeah, whatever. Just stop calling us "honey!" it get's annoying!"
"awww...swee..oh, sorry" *winks*
(nikita):*winks back*
AWKWARD
haha

-in the private jet -
(Mary to one of the guards) “Why do you keep your sunglasses on all the time?”
I must admit, she thinks pretty slow sometimes and asks random stuff any time
(the guy): can’t tell. Secret.
(Mary): What’s that collar on your neck?
(the guy): can’t tell. Secret.
(Mary): Do you always talk like that?
The guy finally turns around and stares at her.
(Mary): Ok, ok, chillax dude! Just wanted to know.
(Me): *couldn’t control herself and bursts out laughing*
(Mary and the guard): *stares at me*
After 5 hours of flight, we finally get off the jet on a roof. Yeah, a roof. The guy led us down to the interior of the house and just there, I froze.

Thanks for the feedback! Really great knowing that some people like it<3 hehe

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Means a lot to me...
gonna write more soon

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The person that I’ve been longing to see face to face who was in magazine covers and topping the Billboard charts, was right in front of me. There was a bunch of girls next to him taking pictures and taking his autographs. When he met my eyes, I just couldn’t move a muscle in my body. The whole world seemed to stop right there and butterflies in my stomach just would not stop. Mary tried to look cool and said that it’s no big deal and everything, but I knew she was shocked too. I immediately took a poster out from my bag and came up to him to sign the autograph. He looked into my eyes once more and just whispered, “Your eyes are gorgeous. I’d be staring into them my whole life if I had to…” I just could not believe that. Did he seriously mean it or was it just one of his flirting tricks for the fans?
“ Uh…uh…um…” I murmured
(Justin): I think it sounds kind of cute when you do that.
(Alice) *smiles shyly*
(Justin) Ok, now I’m in love with not only your eyes, but your smile too…
(Alice)*keeps on smiling*
(Justin):There it is again..
Mary comes up
(Justin): Woah! There are two of you now? Or am I hallucinating?! No way!!
(Mary):Chillax! I’m her twin sister!
(Justin): oh..oh..*still confused*
(Mary): Don’t
(Alice):worry
(Mary): about
(Alice): it
(Mary): You’ll
(Alice): get
(Mary): used
(Alice) to
(Mary) it
(Justin): wow. Do you guys always do that? I mean, end each other’s sentences?
(Mary and Alice) :Pretty much. It’s a twin thing
*look at each other and grin*
(Justin) *just shakes his hair and smiles*
(Mary and Alice): ah….*dreaming*
(Justin): hah, I know you guys love it when I do that, don’t ya? I mean come on, admit it!
(both): Oh yeah..!
(Justin)
(Justin): So what was it you wanted me to sign
(Alice): Oh, this poster (gives him the poster)
(Justin): Oh ok. Here you go! (hands it back)
OMG!! I feel like the luckiest girl alive!! Was this a dream I’m living? If so, I don’t want to wake up at all.
(Justin): Oh, by the way, I’ll see you tomorrow at 10!
(Alice): ok!
(Mary): Can I come?
(Alice): Yeah, sure! Why not?
(Justin): *kind of disappointed hoping that Alice could come alone but then shots a smile*
We spent the last hours of the day unpacking and just getting around the hotel. We met some new friends, whose names I forgot after the minute they told me and went to bed finally at 11, all settled down.
-The next morning-
(Alice): Oh, no! I can’t be late for my date!
(Mary): Oh come on! Both of us know that no matter how hard you try, you still come late! Haha!
(Alice): Yeah, it’s true but I can’t be late for this big day anyways!
Mary was already all ready when Alice was only combing her hair.
(Mary): Geez, it takes you forever to get ready! It’s 10 minutes to 10!! Hurry up!!
( Alice): ok, ok. I’m coming! *puts on her purple sneakers and her favorite hat*
We were riding in this huge stretch hummer for about 20 minutes and finally it stopped. A guy opened the door for the both of us. We could tell that he, too, was confused if he was having a hallucination. We laughed and stepped out. Justin was there, holding two roses for the both of us . We came up to him, said thank you and he kissed us both on our cheeks.

I'm sorry if there are alot of mistakes and stuff. My english is not perfect LOL. I mean, first of all, I'm Russian and second of all, if there are minor mistakes, I was probably typing too quick! haha